Two Worlds: I Attain Longevity Through Manifesting the Divine
两界：我靠显圣成就长生道君
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 157k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Modern Cultivation
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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75Chapters
266Recommendations
8Fans
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You can go to the female-oriented channel, but it reads like a romance novel, which isn't enjoyable at all.
The endless dawdling is not satisfying at all.
What is the protagonist doing? Why not just gradually reveal his unprecedented martial arts breakthrough, demonstrate his destructive power, spend money on publicity, and then everyone's talking about his miracles? Why is the protagonist being tortured all the time? It also feels like it's been padded out, like one chapter's content is stretched into ten chapters... A perfectly good novel and its setting are now unreadable. Is this another mass-produced story by a studio and AI?
The reason it's not exciting enough is that there's too little description of reality. Since it's about a divine manifestation, it should definitely focus on reality. Otherwise, how can you play with a Qi Refining main world? At least you should describe the main world when you reach the Golden Core stage.
When does the author plan to return to China? He shouldn't be bogged down in matters of the spirit world.
It looks really good, why is nobody here? 😰
That's too little. Updating only four or five chapters a day is too slow. The priority is to build up a readership quickly. Otherwise, nobody will read this book.
Could you please update more often? Two chapters a day is too little!
The depiction of the divine has been portrayed as mindless showing off; you can read it without using your brain.
The main problem is that it's not satisfying enough; neither side is satisfying. The author intended to create tension before the release, but unfortunately, neither part was well-written, and I've already given up on reading.