
Hogwarts: I Have a Muggle Career System
霍格沃茨:我有个麻瓜职业系统
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 861k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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This is an amazing book, and I didn't find any plot that made me feel frustrated. But the more I look at it, the more frustrated I become. I've only seen a few pictures, but I feel more and more frustrated. If you think about it carefully later, you will realize that this book has been depressing. You will find that he can't do anything well. A trivial matter can cause all kinds of troubles like Monk Tang's pilgrimage to the West for Buddhist scriptures. The curse becomes more and more frustrating the more I look at it. When people write a book, whether they suppress it first and then expand it, or they advance it first and then suppress it, it will at least arouse people's emotions. Even if it is a purely emo story, it will at least bring people's emotions into it. I felt completely frustrated while reading this book. I couldn't bring my emotions into it, so I kept feeling depressed and depressed. Even I can't figure out how a novel like this could be written. This won't happen even if your writing is poor, messy or something else.
The author's second design has added a lot of non-HP settings to HP, but there are very few HP elements. This is a Western fantasy magic story with HP. . . . If you want to see the HP, you can retreat like me. I am speechless. The more I listen, the more something is wrong.
I skipped watching it because every time I saw the main character's magic effects being distorted, I couldn't hold back. I said it was because of the system. Later, it seemed that he realized that the problem had changed to a mental disorder. This kind of uncontrollable contradiction used in deus ex machina or creating stories is actually quite suitable for light novels, but does it count as light novels? Seeing my headache, regardless of the twisted plot of spell effects, this book is readable. But I can't stand the thought of it.
When it comes to the French chapter, the more I read, the more awkward it becomes. Then I thought about it carefully and realized that this is not Hogwarts fan fiction, this is magic fantasy. What kind of flesh and blood magic, soul magic, and a sense of fantasy.
It's good to read the comments early. It's true that the product is not the right version. The more I read, the more it doesn't taste right.
[About system problems, taming problems, and solutions to weak mainline problems (the early plot has not been modified)] Currently, the system problems have been upgraded in Chapter 59, and the main mainline plot of the protagonist is loading quickly... The taming problem was also explained in the system upgrade in Chapter 59. There are indeed some problems in the new book. Thank you for your corrections and help!
There are too many secondary settings, so many that it's hard to call them fanfics of Harry Potter. It's more like a fantasy novel in the skin of Harry Potter, purely to gain popularity. The protagonist has a golden finger, and if he uses it well, he should be very good. The result? The writing is so frustrating, is Bai Chen the protagonist? ? ? I didn't say that when writing a book, you have to write mindless and enjoyable articles, but you can't be unhappy at all. It is not a one-man show, and the brilliance of the protagonist does not reflect any suppression. The protagonist's familiar can't even be touched by the protagonist, so he runs to kiss the protagonist's father. Author, are you having a good time? It's not a group portrait, and the charm of other characters is not shown at all. The protagonist's behavior can hardly be said to be that of a time traveler who has lived through a lifetime. He behaves like a child, which sounds childish at best and seems mindless at worst. It's like I have no experience, giving me a blank feeling.
How useful is that domestication skill? The level of domestication has reached 100%, but you don't listen to the protagonist. Who is disgusting?
I can't stand it anymore, all the terms used are not in line with the habits of foreigners 😥 Foreigners don't call me brother, second brother, etc., Just call him by his first name. There are also various usage habits that are very funny
I asked why there are so many comments. It turns out that most of them are pictures...
The goods are not right, and the more I write, the more biased they become.
I can't understand what the author wants to write. It seems that I have been in a state of confusion since the first chapter. It's very tiring to read.
The current content of the second set: 1. The inherent magical properties of magical creatures are caused by magical organs. Magical creatures also have the possibility of performing magic, so wizards strictly prohibit magical creatures from holding wands (this will cause some magical creatures to be different from the original work) 2. The release of magic - the release of magic is achieved by communicating with external magic through its own magic. 3. Some secondary creations of magical creatures and magic plants 4. Some magical histories and regulations of the Ministry of Magic of other countries that are not in the original books are secondary creations. Finally, the wording and the character of the original characters are inaccurate. This is due to the author's lack of writing skills. I would like to apologize to everyone. The author hopes to continue to grow through this book and finally write a story that everyone likes. Thank you for your support!
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The professors are described as too weak. Among the deans of the four major colleges, except for Dean Badger, who has no specific performance, the other three are top-notch.
Brief review
At the beginning, the new system settings and the idea of potions were very interesting and attractive, but the plot developed too fast and the originality was too great. It just felt like the protagonist suddenly became super powerful and fought the boss directly. The original potion settings were no longer needed. Moreover, the appearance of the Holy See, gods, etc., Is a bit difficult to bear (my personal feeling after reading 180 chapters is that many of the settings are a bit unsatisfactory, and the original ones give me the feeling that they are not really a fan, they are just wearing the skin of Harry Potter, and it feels like Fantastic Beasts and Harry Potter)
It's a pity that it's only interesting at the beginning. After the system is almost introduced, it starts to enter the branch line non-stop. In just a few dozen chapters, four or five major events can happen without stopping for a moment. On a daily basis, the protagonist does not even have a day to live in peace.
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