The Witcher: Throne of Shadows

The writing is not bad, but the description of the chip is too much like a wishing machine, instead of analyzing the existing data and getting the results. It is actually OK to get the first spell and make substantial modifications, which is a bit poisonous The setting of the hunting point in the middle is also a bit poisonous. White wizards with different levels of strength are all. It only provides fixed hunting spots without distinguishing them. Also, the research is almost completely devoid of details and descriptions of principles. It is like a book about cultivating immortals. It is recommended to refer to the Wizard's Journey It also does not conform to the basic research process. Before the first eye transplant, there is no practice and you can get started directly.

I finally found a book that didn't write about a bunch of knights in the early stages.

I hope it can maintain the standard and not be like some wizarding novels written as fantasy novels. The protagonist appears in a school and that school is destroyed, and then changes the map and repeats. I feel like the author could refer to the setting of the super-dimensional warlock to explore the world, instead of writing it like a gangster cultivating immortals and fighting.

Why does the author have illusions about a noble? A simple aristocrat may not necessarily mean that he is a bad person, but the protagonist of a dark wizard family and a noble status actually has strange illusions about their morality. If the hero is the heir of an evil family, the protagonist is actually afraid that she cannot accept doing bad things. Why? Because that princess is beautiful? But the so-called etiquette in their family is the faces of relatives, that is, I don't know how many people I kissed before meeting the protagonist, and the feeling in writing is that the poor protagonist is being controlled by the princess. The protagonist has just the right lonely look, and the right innocence is discovered by the protagonist. Is the material of the potion really equivalent to the protagonist's efforts? The author himself also said that materials and finished product value are completely different things. Is it true that the protagonist will not be able to obtain materials after practicing medicine? The author said that this industry is all about huge profits, and the status is very high. Is it really impossible to get materials that reveal the identity of a genius pharmacist?

Why choose a control spell and then cut it into an offensive type? It feels unclear. You might as well choose the offensive type to modify and strengthen it in the first place.

Okay, okay, if it's a dark chip and some upgrades, it's the best in the classic wizarding world! Upgrade the wizarding world in the early stage, and conquer the star realm in the later stage!

No wonder there are so few people watching, it's a bit anti-human

The description of the fight is a bit stiff. Since it is all about wizards, there is less writing about the operation of rushing up quickly and choking others' necks in return, which is a bit awkward.

The wizarding atmosphere is okay, the chip usage is old-fashioned, the description of the shadow system feels very weak (although the author wants to show its power), it is quite satisfactory, there is no bright spot, and there are no particularly big shortcomings. In view of the small number of words and the plot has not yet unfolded, I can only say that the future is promising.

This wizard novel written by the author is very good among the ones I have read recently. I hope it will continue.

There are many problems, such as the cavemen being bullied by the black and white, but they can tame the big bugs, why don't they resist? It seems that the force is very low, but the pig's feet kill the three-level limit with the bugs. The leader of the cavemen has his own big bugs, but the skeleton soldiers sent by the pig's feet solve them. A princess who is underground with a chef, space equipment, and a rich princess brings a few cavalry with her. The scholar was hunted down, and later it was said that she must have equipment and would not be easily solved. However, the granddaughter of the vice-dean was not more awesome and was easily solved by pig's feet. She did not see any awesome equipment. In addition, it was the first time she met someone she didn't know and didn't know. We went to raid the laboratory together and got the opponent's storage ring. They didn't take the loot, but gave it to pig's feet and the like. It's a small problem that can't be added up.

Why are most wizards of the shadow type? I've seen a lot of them.

I haven't read it yet, but I would like to give some suggestions. If the author is conceiving the intelligence level of the characters, generally speaking, the more important characters should have almost online IQ, especially the top bosses. It is hoped that the protagonist's chip will be discovered by the top boss at some point. If 10 is the full level, the protagonist is discovered by 7.8.9 At 3.4. Because according to the world view of the Wizard's Journey, this kind of thing is useless to the boss and will not be greedy. But for the boss, it is true that he will follow the "network line" to resist aggression against things from other worlds. Just so domineering. Finally, the protagonist is given something to strengthen. In short, just don't write your teammates, opponents, and bosses who have lived for a long time as idiots. It's best to write a group portrait, even if you write them down one by one later.

Come on, girl. I've watched too many wizard-style movies about The Lone Ranger. The protagonist should be a little more romantic.

Rune Witch is very interesting, but it's a pity that I won't write about it. Oh, I really want to read that kind of story.

There are so few comments, have they been deleted?

It looks good, but the lightning with plague is described in the middle. This lightning disgusts me the most, because this lightning with plague also has an effect after hitting people. This is too illogical. In fact, this lightning does not affect the subsequent plot. Just write it as pure lightning but with great power. Another point is that the branch plot should be short and exciting, and the main plot should be long and exciting. But the recent branch lines are not very well written, and the main line is best not to be rigidly set. The main line can also be just a branch line in the world. It is a common problem in novels that the story becomes narrower in the later stages of writing.

The nightmare world reminds me of the bloody land of Terraria.

The book is quite good, but it takes too much time off.