You Mean They All Like Me?

Your kid has also rebelled. What used to be a pure love party has now become a harem.

I just wanted to go to bed at 11 o'clock in the evening on the 13th, and I wanted to set a timer to post it on Monday, the 14th. However, it turned out that there was no timed post before the book was released, so it was posted at 1 o'clock, and I quickly withdrew it. Then I posted it at 0 o'clock on the 14th, but the first chapter of the book posted on the 14th was from the 13th. I didn't notice it yesterday because I posted 6k words on the first day and didn't look at the backend. When I looked at the backend today, it showed that I had stopped updating for one day. It was really shocking. Fortunately, I asked the editor and she said it had no impact, and that's when I found out. So, new readers should not think that the author is running away. 555😭 The contract is signed on Friday and will be completed normally like the previous one!

Manba is so cute (Looking at the author's book cover, he seems to be Lao Ba) 😍

Just kiss the pig and check in 🙂

Don't give up 😭😭 After I put it on the shelves, I stopped playing Fate, Dungeon, Ark, Azure Files, Genshin Impact, King, Eternal Calamity, Fifth, Light Encounter, Dust White, World Plan, Dead by Daylight, Backwater Cold, Zero Zone, Collapse 3, Star Iron, Dark Zone, Naruto, steam account and even galgame to buy a subscription for you 😭😭

There are too many inner monologues, and it feels boring to follow them all the way. There is no need for the supporting characters to mention their inner dramas, which is a waste of pen and ink. Instead of writing a bunch of shocking psychological activities, it is better to think about how to express what they are thinking with more concise dialogue. It is best to reduce the inner drama of the heroine. Retaining a sense of mystery will help increase the tension of the character and avoid exposing the unflattering parts of the character. It is recommended that the author take a closer look at how Lao Ba is portrayed in the original novel. For example, for Lao Ba's foodie image, Yu Sen often uses her eating and telling various funny weight loss theories to echo the character. However, if Yu Sen also puts Lao Ba's inner drama in front of readers, then Lao Ba's image will immediately become an indefensible idiot. When writing daily love stories, it is very important to be "black box" to a certain extent. Don't expose everything the characters are thinking to the readers. Hope the author can improve.

Hanada-sensei, do you still remember being at the izakaya? I was drunk at that time. Say I want to go to your elementary school to visit. 😍

Thank you for your small bed!

Come support my favorite glaze throwing Ruoyu Meow😋😋😋

Watching it in the fog for a long time, the beginning is suspenseful. The background and story are not explained clearly. The literary young man Jayasasi is the main character.