Pokemon: Watch Closely, This Is What a Trainer Should Be!

It doesn't feel like it's written for others; it feels like it's a personal, internal celebration. The protagonist talks too much, explaining everything, one sentence after another—it's exhausting to read. 😫

First, I need to demonstrate why the Water Cannon is even less effective than Water Pulse. First, the water cannon's hit rate is abysmal, only 80%. And even at 80%, it's pitifully low; even in PvE, a single miss can be fatal. Water quality fluctuations, on the other hand, have at least 100% hit rate, with a 20% chance of causing confusion.

The synopsis alone kills any desire to watch it. Mewtwo transforms to fight Groudon? Rayquaza transforms to fight Arceus?

This is obviously wish-fulfillment fiction. Putting aside the idea of ​​Mewtwo beating Groudon, the Rayquaza beating Alpaca... I can only say, are you out of your mind? Alpaca could turn Rayquaza into a piece of trash?!

Why not write about Digimon instead of this kind of subject matter? If the trainers are already participating, can it even be called a trainer game?

If the first chapter of the subscription is filled with endless explanations of interpersonal relationships and connections, repeating the same things over and over, a lot of people will likely just stop reading. The second chapter starts to advance the plot, so putting this as the first chapter of the subscription is much better.

This is a purely narrative explanatory text, an extremely long student essay, full of rambling and unnecessary details, suitable for complete beginners to Pokémon.

All that fancy stuff, it's just a fantasy before getting killed by a super rookie's punch in a real battle. After watching for a while, it seems like his physical body isn't even as strong as Ash's.

In other aspects, the author's writing style is indeed good, and the setting is also outstanding; they are definitely a veteran author. However, mistakes were still made, such as the direction in which the Pokémon character designs were portrayed. Then there's the case of someone taking lost items as their own money—this will likely draw criticism from moral guardians and attacks from their peers.

The beginning was alright, but the part about catching Beastie gave me a bad feeling. One reason for the Dragon-type weakness is that they fight and vie for territory, and Gible and Beastie are too similar and contradictory. I can only say that the better the setup at the beginning, the worse the ending. They established a tough, daring character from the start, and then they had to learn superpowers—like Zhang Fei wielding a needle, right? It's no wonder it fell apart later. I'm outta here!