Dragon Clan: He Returned and Rebelled Against Destiny

Faster, more, ah! Faster, more, ah! !

Sun Dasheng is anti-theocratic, Erlang Shen is anti-imperial power, and the Third Prince is anti-patriarchal. So why don't those damn pedantic Confucianists also rebel together? Author, you missed one 🤔

Well, the book is very good, but there is just one problem. With a story background like the Dragon Clan, what is the difference between it and a chicken with the intensity in Black Myth?

If you don't kill, hatred will never end If you don't kill, what's the difference between being strong and weak like me If you don't kill, all sentient beings are sins If you don't kill, dreams are empty and empty If you don't kill, worries and fears will ebb and flow If you don't kill, it's just a moment of youth If you don't kill, there will be no relief from suffering If you don't kill, all activities are meaningless.

The writing is very good. At first glance, the fandom actually requires a different mentality from the original novel, and strength is secondary. Although everyone knows that the author wrote this book to take advantage of the popularity, there are still some excellent things. For example, it can be seen that the author has explored the plot of the original work, and did not imitate the original work's fancy descriptions, or even praise any luxury goods. Although this point is something that Dragon Clan fans have to appreciate, Dragon Clan has been out for so long, and everyone has read so many fans, and they will be tired of it, and the author is not ruled out as a continuation of the original work. It is best to mention it less and less. It is not difficult to relax the plot. After all, there is already the original work as a template, and the rest is what everyone cares about, the character encounters and endings. If you write carefully, there will always be imperfections. No one will be perfect. The more greedy you are for completeness, the more unclear you will be. I believe Lu Mingfei is already ready for this. Where there is satisfaction there is regret, where there are mountains there are abyss, where there is joy there is tragedy, and where there is a great sage there is treachery. The Great Sage Huangfeng cannot escape, the Great Sage Qitian cannot escape, and neither can the protagonist of this book. There are also some very unpleasant situations in the original work, such as Chen Wenwen, such as the little witch, who is independent and independent but is invaded by foreign objects. Isn't it because the six roots are unclean and the mind is restless? The rest is the situation in terms of strength. When the six roots are gathered together, it is still A level. How to deal with the combat power when adding blood. If it is too strong, the little devil will be unnecessary for its existence. If it is too weak, it will ruin the name of the great sage... At first glance, there are only so many ideas for the time being. I hope the author can work hard.

Looking at the golden figure emerging from the hot molten iron, Norton's eyes became sharper. "In this outfit, are you playing the role of the Monkey King? It's a pity that you are not Sun Wukong, and I am not the incompetent Dragon King of the East China Sea!" The cold voice was like the clash of iron halberds. As Norton's jaw opened and closed, hot sparks could be seen beating in his mouth. The next moment, the scales on Norton's body began to proliferate and squirm, making a metallic collision sound, spreading along the curves of his body whose muscles were bulging due to the boiling of dragon blood, and finally turned into a pair of sharp gray-black dragon scales. The original dragon wings snaked down and turned into a wide cloak. The shoulder armor was held by dragon claws. Sharp barbs could be seen at the joints of the drape. On the head was a dragon-headed helmet. The burning golden pupils emitted a scorching light through the jagged faceplate. Yan Ling: Bronze Throne.       ，，，，，，， Hearing another loud sound, a slicing saber spun and flew forward. Norton caught it in his hand. Following Norton's will, the handle of the saber was extended to match the blade. Clothed with Dragon Scales Furious Long Knife Norton, who was fully armed, and Yan Lingjunyan, with murderous intent soaring into the sky, surged towards Lu Mingfei like a volcano erupting. Norton kept staring at Lu Mingfei's eyes. He hoped to see him shrinking back, but unfortunately, those eyes were calm and calm from beginning to end, without causing any disturbance. Until the dazzling golden light filled Norton's field of vision, a majestic fighting spirit roared, colliding with Jun Yan and making a thunderous explosion. Norton stared at Lu Mingfei through the golden light, saw the flames flowing and burning on his body, and also saw the unyielding light in his eyes. After a journey to the west, after several reincarnations, Lu Mingfei's methods were unusual. He never stopped being enterprising. Those magical powers and techniques that were given to him by chance and could only be used through changes in the spirit had already been decomposed and reorganized by him using the six roots, and finally integrated into a form that suited him. Even the tricks of the enemies he saw along the way were used and learned by him.       ，，，，，，，，，，， At this time on the battlefield, the two people looked at each other in silence. During this period, the burning monarch flames and the holy energy had collided and exchanged thousands of times, and the hot copper water was scattered in all directions by the aftermath. Ling outside the door had been told by Lu Mingfei to stay away as early as when Norton was transporting the Bronze Throne. Fortunately, he had a mirror and could not see the battlefield clearly. Looking at the two people confronting each other with bated breath, Zero's forehead was sweating, and at the moment the cold sweat fell to the ground.             ，，，                                                                                  Fighting with each other, the first move of the fight, the two people had no intention of testing, it was the most direct confrontation of strength. The two people who collided together, each took their own strength and flew backwards. The result was beyond Norton's expectation. He actually retreated three steps further than Lu Mingfei. You must know that with the bronze throne on his body, his power far exceeds that of a hybrid. He can wrestle with a real dragon and gain the upper hand. Even so, he is still slightly behind. The most important point is that Norton doesn't know how much Lu Mingfei contributed. But then he put all these things aside. Whether it was life or death, the love between children, we would finish it all. The change of mind caused the flames scattered in all directions to quickly gather together, rising and flying around Norton, reflecting the burning light of the flames, making the figure in the center of the flames flicker, like a demon god. The already majestic flames turned into the shape of a storm that rushed straight to the dome, and its power increased even more. Activating in an instant, Norton used the word spirit of the Wind King lineage to greatly increase his speed. The long sword in his hand was surrounded by flames and pointed sharply at Lu Mingfei. Because he was so fast, the surrounding scenery looked like infinitely stretched lines. But in this world composed of countless lines, a golden figure suddenly appeared, blocking Norton's powerful sword. No matter what the speed is, for Lu Mingfei, whose six sense organs are unified, as long as he can see, hear and feel, then the body can definitely keep up with the senses, and there will never be a situation where the consciousness is in place and the hands cannot keep up. Lu Mingfei's eyes were burning, and he looked at Norton who was approaching, and both saw the determination in the other's eyes. Even with the eyesight of the mirror, Zero could still only see two flashes of light, constantly colliding, densely covering the entire Nibelungen battlefield. After being affected by the aftermath of this battle, Bronze City automatically responded, magnifying the Nibelungs on the battlefield more than ten times. The changes on the battlefield were naturally sensed by the two combatants, and they completely let go of the fight. Norton's sword technique is a pure killing technique, with all the bells and whistles removed. There is not a trace of unnecessary movement in the flipping of the long knife. The incoming and outgoing moves, rising and falling, are all directed towards the vital point. They are dangerous and sharp, leaving no room for error. Lu Mingfei's fighting technique is another style. The attack is majestic and majestic, and the long sticks are flying like feathers. However, each stick is heavy and unstoppable, like a round and unprovoked, impeccable. After hundreds of rounds of fighting, Norton's eyebrows grew tighter and tighter. The swirling golden flames on Lu Mingfei's body were not only as hot as Jun Yan's, but also had an indescribable sharpness. Combined with the iron rod in his palm, it could also suppress Jun Yan's head, so he had to increase Jun Yan's power to compete. Also, Lu Mingfei's attack was too stable and precise. No matter how small the flaw was, Lu Mingfei could catch it and strike accurately. Norton had to hold the sword wholeheartedly to prevent the sword from flying away. What's more terrible is that from the first move until now, Lu Mingfei's strength has been consistent and absolutely precise. Norton has never been able to find a chance to counterattack. The disadvantages at the beginning snowballed, getting bigger and bigger, and the room for maneuver became smaller and smaller. The defensive circle of swords was finally broken by the heavy stick. The stick continued unabated and hit Norton's breastplate hard, causing him to fly backwards like a cannonball. The mark left on the breastplate was deep into his bones. If it weren't for the Bronze Throne's strong blessing to the body, this stick could directly cause Norton's myocardial infarction. After all, Setsuna is not a word spirit of the bronze and fire lineage. Although Norton can use it and has high attainments, he cannot maintain that accelerated state for a long time. I wanted to use the split second for a quick victory, but I never expected that Lu Mingfei could keep up with the rhythm and maintain such a rapid, stable and precise offensive.       ，，，， Lu Mingfei, who had entered the city first, was about to pursue him when he saw that the sky he looked at was filled with countless suspended sword blades. Without waiting for Lu Mingfei to react, the swords came at him like a gust of wind and rain. Instinctively, the stick flower flew around, and the shadow of the stick filled the space around him. It was airtight and could not be penetrated by splashing water. It collided with the sharp swords that were shot, making a harsh clanking sound. The sword rain did not break through Lu Mingfei's defense. All the sword blades that hit Lu Mingfei's defense circle were bounced away, but this was not the end. A considerable part of the bounced sword blades were still controlled by Norton. He rotated around Mingfei and struck, leaving no blind spots in all directions. Lu Mingfei was momentarily dragged down by the torrent of swords. He had no way to go to heaven and no way to go to earth. Seizing the opportunity, Norton manipulated the rain of swords to surround Lu Mingfei. At the same time, countless sword blades gathered together and turned into a giant sword like a hill, hitting Lu Mingfei. Suddenly, a golden light burst into the sky from the center of the sword circle. Thanks to Erlang Shen's Kaizi Jue, it instantly broke through the surrounding swords. The iron rod in Lu Mingfei's hand suddenly surged, sweeping across thousands of troops, and hit the side of the sword blade heavily, deflecting the sword's attack direction.       ，，，，，，，，，，， An unprecedented sense of crisis enveloped his whole body. At this time, Lu Mingfei was at a moment when his new strength had gone and his old strength had not yet regenerated. Norton was really good at seizing the opportunity. With no time to make any more moves, Lu Mingfei reluctantly dragged the iron soldier back and placed it across his chest, blocking Norton's fully charged attack. The timing was perfect, and he was even more likely to win with his sword. Dang!                                                                                                                                                                                                         Being guarded, but not completely warded, been hit by the huge impact, pressed onto Lu Mingfei's chest. The blade deflected and struck the burning protective flame, making a clanging sound. Norton's eyes sharpened, and his divine power increased. The lines on the long knife, like flowing lava, erupted into even more dazzling flames. They broke through the protective flames and struck the golden armor, leaving a knife mark, and severely slashed Lu Mingfei away. It's a long story, but from the moment Lu Mingfei was restrained by the sword rain, and saw that the situation was not going well, he forcefully broke through the sword rain with an open-stroke decision, to the decisive counterattack behind Norton, the duration only lasted for a few breaths. In fact, after falling at a disadvantage in the early battle with Lu Mingfei and being unable to regain the disadvantage, Norton was already making plans.        ·，·，，， After flying backwards and falling a few times, Lu Mingfei straightened up and stood still, staring straight at Norton, guarding against further pursuit. But Norton did not pursue after falling back to the ground. This was a huge drain on his energy. But more importantly, he did not expect that Lu Mingfei's protective flames, in addition to the terrifying attack power, also had such strong defensive power. A fully charged sword could only break through it. It had insufficient stamina and could no longer injure Lu Mingfei. It was hard to say whether he could expand the victory by pursuing him relentlessly. He really couldn't see through Lu Mingfei, no matter what he was wearing or his fighting spirit that was as bright as the morning sun. It was better to stop and regain some strength. At this time, on the battlefield, apart from the sound of molten iron flowing, there was only the sound of two people breathing heavily. These rounds of offense and defense ended in a draw on the surface. "For the last time, if you admit defeat and save your life, I will give you all the wealth I had as a human being. You will also have a girl who can accompany you through life and death, and live a life with her that many people dream of. Don't be disrespectful!" Norton broke the silence first. "Impossible!" Lu Mingfei shook his head in a funny way. After traveling westwards for ninety-nine reincarnations, in addition to his actual combat power, the most profound quality he was honed was tenacity. If he gave up once, he would never be able to bring back the Monkey King. How could he give up? How could he give up! "Say it again, admit defeat!" Norton raised his long knife and pointed it at Lu Mingfei. "Say it again, impossible!" An unquestionable response and an unshakable will will not allow a close friend to go to extremes and act alone. "Then, go to hell and regret your current stubbornness!" As he breathed, the fire element between heaven and earth began to riot. "Wait." He raised his hand to interrupt Norton's momentum. Lu Mingfei didn't feel nervous at all. "Oh? You can go as you like, I won't stop you." Norton really stopped. Shaking his head, Lu Mingfei pointed the iron soldier in his hand at the outer edge of the battlefield. A golden light flew out and landed in front of Ling in the distance. The golden light fell to the ground and instantly criss-crossed, drawing a golden Bagua array. The light curtain rose and protected Ling in the center of the Bagua array. This is the shelter method he learned in Journey to the West. Originally, he just drew a circle and divided the inside and outside of the circle to protect himself. However, he felt that it was not flexible enough to deal with the enemy, so he went to Yuan Shoucheng for advice. It was not about learning the method of fortune-telling, but the changes of Qimen Bagua, and incorporated it into the shelter method to arrange the battle array against the enemy. Of course, it is purely defensive at this moment, placing Zero in the safest position. "After waiting for a long time, Old Tang, this battle should indeed be over!" After confirming that Zero was safe, Lu Mingfei said softly, letting go of his last concern. The sound fell, endless, indestructible, and the burning fighting spirit rushed into the night, reaching far and wide, shocking the world, like the rising sun, dazzling. The terrifying momentum set off a hurricane, pushing away the molten iron around Lu Mingfei, and rushed straight towards Norton, blowing his cloak. Norton squinted his eyes slightly and looked at Lu Mingfei, who was so imposing. The corners of his mouth, which were covered by his mask, curled up with an inexplicable meaning. The next moment, the fire element riots between heaven and earth converged towards Norton, not only the Bronze City, but also the outside world. You can see the sky above the Three Gorges. Due to the lack of fire element, elemental turbulence, wind and cloud surges, lightning and thunder, painted the Three Gorges extremely white in an instant. The turbulent cloud waves surged, forming a cloud vortex with a huge diameter, slowly rotating around a certain point, making it difficult to tell whether the sky was rotating or the ground was moving. In the Bronze City, golden flames filled the air, and Lu Mingfei's figure disappeared. The infinite fighting energy gathered into a golden sun rising. Under the bright sun, the shadow of the vast earth appeared, exuding ancient connotations. At some point, a figure appeared on the horizon, whose appearance could not be clearly seen. Compared with the vast and boundless land, it was too small. However, his aura filled the world, making people involuntarily cast their eyes on him.        ，，，，，， At this time, Norton was also surrounded by a dark corona, as if intercepting sunspots from the sun, flashing blazing patterns from time to time. Yan Ling·Candle Dragon Blue Qiong·Qingtian The black tyrannical ape jumped, crushing thousands of miles of rivers and mountains, as if to cross the boundaries of time and space. He raised his fists high above his head and gathered them together, coinciding with the big sun, bringing it down heavily with it, colliding with the candle dragon flames that exploded like solar flares.       ，，，，，，，， The battlefield Nibelungen eventually disappeared in the aftermath of the collision, but under the deliberate control of both parties, the aftermath was not allowed to spread further. As the light dissipated, in the center of the Bronze City, Norton, or rather Old Tang, clad in tattered dragon scales, lay sprawled on the molten iron, breathing heavily. "Do you have to beat you down before you are willing to do it?" Lu Mingfei said helplessly. He was in a stronger state than Old Tang at this time, but there were a few more burning knife marks on the golden armor. However, the power of the candle dragon finally broke through the fighting spirit and the defense of the golden armor, truly traumatizing Lu Mingfei. "You can't even fight me like I am now, how can you face the bigger storms in the future?" Old Tang sat up with some difficulty and looked at Lu Mingfei intently. Lu Mingfei didn't mind Old Tang's behavior, so he calmly sat down next to him while carrying the iron rod. After Lu Mingfei sat down, Old Tang calmed down and asked a question: "How much strength did you use in this game?" "How much do you want me to use?" Lu Mingfei answered the question. Of course, Old Tang wanted to confirm his strength, but there must be a follow-up. "I hope you only used 30%..." Old Tang turned his head and looked at Lu Mingfei. "It turns out that what you have to face is really heavy!" Lu Mingfei lowered his eyes.

Have you ever been Sun Wukong? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Stack the armor first, only read the free chapters, and only make comments on the free chapters. I feel that the plot so far has no excitement and ups and downs. It feels like drinking boiled water. The protagonist has no strength but is swimming throughout the whole process. For example, in the plot of Old Tang, the protagonist is paddling. I can see that the author wants to write that Lu Mingfei relies on Kassel's background to show off in front of Old Tang. But to deal with a few gangsters, you are destined to rely on Kassel Academy to send weapons? If you have the strength, wouldn't it be better to just take Old Tang up and act recklessly? Is the coolness you are pretending now your own or Cassell's? Then there is the cool part of the classic Free Day fanfic, but you told me that the protagonist missed it and watched the live broadcast on the way back to school. Caesar's character is also a bit OOC. In the original book, Caesar is very generous, but this book is written as a villain. Logically speaking, Caesar's character should appreciate Lu Mingfei's strength and recruit him because he defeated his men. However, this book makes Caesar care about his men and say he wants revenge because his men were defeated. He has no mentality of a superior at all. The protagonist of this book has simply changed from a bad boy to a completely rational person. He does not have the wildness of the monkey like the Destiny Man, and is more like the Destiny Man behind the golden hoop, without any thoughts that break common sense. The fighting scenes are also written in a foggy way, without a sense of picture. Instead of describing it in such a vague manner, it would be better to use the names of the moves in Black Monkey directly, which would have a more picture-like feel. In the end, I am writing so much because I like the subject matter of this book very much. If you don't like it, there is no need for me to comment so much. Come on, author.

Can the author please tell me, single or multiple, who is the heroine? Please give me an accurate answer, otherwise I won't dare to pursue her.

Author, did you write Caesar this way to create a villain? ? ? Is Caesar in Dragon Clan really a sore loser? Are you really a petty person? I'm not a Caesar fan, but in the dragon clan, Caesar is probably very open-minded except for women who can't share.

First, let me share a very amazing setting: only ghosts can kill ghosts! In the same way, if you want to write a dragon fan fiction well, you must abandon the original approach of Lu Mingfei as a super god and write: Only the Dragon King can kill the Dragon King!         ：----+， "Don't abandon each other" and "Always be the person who is useful to you" is ridiculous to say that two people are just a contract or an agreement. Xiami: Before the revision, Jiangnan clearly said that Xiami's feelings for Chu Zihang were not between men and women. This is only reasonable. Not to mention the issue of experience, Dragon King and hybrids are fundamentally two different things. Dragon King fundamentally despises hybrids, and only monsters are worthy of monsters. ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Nono: If it was really a family affair, then Caesar would not be a good match either. Not to mention that the two of them were just controlled "free love", even Nono's "destiny" could only be solved by Lu Mingfei, which was enough to cost his life. Lu Mingfei is willing to do this kind of thing for his sister-in-law for free, but do you like to see it? Would you like to see it in a fan fiction? Therefore, the single heroine in the fanfic "Dragon" and the original official pairing are both unreasonable. Chu Zihang and Caesar are too weak not only for the fate of Xia Mi and Nono, but also for the entire fight against the Black King. Forcibly pulling official pairings will only hinder the performance and make fan readers feel that they are acting as babysitters for everyone. As for the fandom that cannot be split into official matches, take a look at what I said above and think about it carefully. Zero, Xiami, Nono, and Eriyi are the "official matches" that the fan monster Lu Mingfei should have. This is a reasonable fan fiction logic, rather than forcing the creation of a match based on the original work.

Black Mythology and God of War basically have the same origin. It's just a fantasy background dressed in Journey to the West. Its combat effectiveness is really not that good. I'm afraid it's not as good as the Dragon Clan.

In fact, going to Kassel to take the main route is really profitable for the Monkey King. After all, it would be better to stay in China.

I saw the chapters before they were released, and I couldn't stand it anymore. The dead child said that he had changed his character. He was a person who died eighty-one times from an environment like Black Mythology. Is this it? I wouldn't be able to write it without the original plot, right?

The plot is too bland, not even the protagonist of Free Day appears, only those two are mentioned... Ah? It seems that what I read is not the original work. Since you are writing a fanfic, the protagonist does not appear? In the chapters before it was released, there were no other battles except for a few simple sparring sessions with sticks. The original works were even more intense than this.

Can the author go on a killing spree? 😍 Destiny Road reunites the six roots. I have walked it 81 times. Along the way, I have killed countless bad guys. I can't think of it in vain. I can only say that killing will increase merit... But good people also kill. Father Shi's family and the little monsters with merit are all very impressive to me. After being a lazy monkey for so long, can you kill, kill, kill, kill, kill! Of course, it doesn't mean that after being a monkey for a long time, you will only be able to swing a stick. Brother Monkey is also very understanding of people and the world, and he is very good at doing things. Can the author bring a little monkey style, and feel like eating Jiangnan three meals a day (there is no opening chapter, the opening chapter is great) Youth pain literature is of course the original flavor of the dragon family, but the original work is full of pain, so it is not a bad idea for fans to adapt and lubricate their skills.

I can't be the only one who sees it

Black Myth, I feel that the biggest shortcoming of this game is that the plot is incomplete. I originally wanted to try writing a fanfic, but when I was summarizing the plot, I got confused. There were many key points that I didn't understand...

Brothers, I have a question. When I bought Longyi, I remembered that Angers' spirit was called Eternity. I don't know why it changed to Time Zero later on. Did I remember it wrong?

I have read forty chapters so far. It is quite interesting. The writing style is also very good. It is not too literary or novice, and it does not feel like reading a running account. The monthly ticket is gone, so I can only vote for a few recommendations. Please support me.

But there are too many common sense mistakes One chapter per chapter

The author has good ideas and good writing skills, but there are too many details...

Does anyone know why the Nioh book was suddenly removed from the shelves?

Did Lu Mingfei, who returned from Jiadou, directly follow the path of heaven and take charge of everything?

This is the most satisfying Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever read. I subscribed to all the following chapters as soon as I read about 100 chapters. I really like this book.

I feel pretty good. Why are my grades so bad?

What about Hui Liyi and Xia Mi? Since Lu Mingfei and Old Tang played together, it means that Lu Mingfei didn't insist on slaying the dragon, right? Then Xia Mi doesn't want to be with Chu Zihang?

The Japanese chapter is too slow. After entering Japan and leading Uesugi to Tachibana Masamune, I can still write more than 200 chapters from more than 100 chapters.

I rushed but I still couldn't finish it yesterday, but at least I finished it. Let me briefly share my thoughts. It can be seen that the author's main outline is relatively clear and the entire story is clearly explained. This is quite impressive for a newcomer and deserves praise. However, looking at the shortcomings, what I care about the most is Lu Mingfei's change of mentality. How could Lu Mingfei refuse to accept his fate during the Black Monkey's first round and then continue to be stubborn? There is no reasonable explanation for this, and it failed to convince me. This is also related to the fact that the author is not prepared to write the story of the Black Monkey at all, and directly enters the Dragon Clan world line, which leads to the creation of the characters to be false from the beginning. In the original story of the Dragon Clan, Lu Mingfei was just a bad guy. He was so stimulated that he would occasionally explode, but then he would fade away again. How could such a character persist for ninety-nine and eighty-one reincarnations? The character change part in the middle must be written clearly and convincingly. There is also the choice of the ending. The author arranged for Jedi Heaven to return to the ordinary. There is nothing wrong with this. It does represent the author's own values. But I'm different. The ending I want to see more is a supernatural recovery, where everyone is like a dragon. It's just a difference in values. Here I also hope that the author will write better and better books in the future. Of course, I may not continue to follow it. I read this book mainly because of the subject matter. After there is no black monkey, plus the difference in values, we can only get together and part ways.

No, why do more than half of other websites start from Group Vision?