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The description of the battle is rather awkward, and the battle that is supposed to be cool is written inexplicably. Typical examples are the battle between Alyssa and the True-Eye Bishop and the time the protagonist fights with that group of weapons, which were all confusing In the scene with the bishop, they were evenly matched in the front, and then the bishop's eyes gradually gained the advantage. Alyssa was defeated and dying. The protagonist came to help, and Alyssa fought back. Such a plot was written too fragmented. The most important thing was that the sense of danger was not written, and the relief of the protagonist's rescue was not written, so it was inexplicable. The wonderful protagonist lit up the furnace, and the bishop was killed. The bishop didn't react at all when he saw Alyssa exploding. His eyes were so dazed, and it was so shocking to him that it was a true god coming to help. I hope that this part of the plot can be polished up. The appearance of the orange card should be a lot of fun. Then the weapon group battle is even more inexplicable. It is clearly said that the weapon group is a bunch of hands fused into one and a bunch of legs fused into one, but it doesn't say how to use it in the battle. It just says that it is used. I don't understand what this thing is. It's just a blur. Let's polish it up a little bit more.

Given the abilities of the protagonist, Dr. Fallacy, and the respect that machines have for him, he should go to the City of Machines to raise his arms and establish himself as the God of Machines. Maybe he can grab another authority.

There are flaws, but overall the flaws are outweighed.

Two possibilities 1. The world needs variables, the gods are stuck in the channel, and the world is a stagnant water 2. The world is promoted, the gods are mostly heritage, and now they need one to migrate The gods master some of the underlying codes, and the belief of all living beings is equivalent to strengthening the computing power and assisting the gods to deduce more underlying codes. The pig's feet are played by outsiders, and the golden fingers are the part of the underlying code (leftovers) that has not been eroded. It starts from the human world and gradually rises to plunder the faith of all living beings to strengthen the computing power and weaken the gods. The will of the world slowly modifies the underlying code.

I can watch it, but there are too many unnecessary impurities, which makes readers feel disconnected because of the unflattering third-rate realistic plot.

The portrayal of this protagonist is really exciting

The writing was too spacey and not compact. I wanted to write about how high the mountains are, but all I wrote was about climbing the mountains. The writing is okay, but the plot is a bit slow and the foreshadowing is too deliberate. It makes me think that the author has not thought about what to write next, or wrote three or four chapters just to write certain words.

The plot progress is too slow, a lot of content is meaningless, and there are few key updates. Many people are disappointed with the large number of updates on the premise. If the updates are not enough, there should be less updates.

The writing is very good. I read nearly a hundred chapters at once. I couldn't get enough of it. The author added more entries and characters, and then tried to set it up at once. It was a bit too slow to add slowly, and it was confusing to read.

It's too long-winded at the end. I read several chapters in a row about setting up the background and introducing too many qualifying words. This kind of thing can be written in half a chapter. It's a headache to write so much.

It's good, but it's a bit watery, and it's only orange epic. Also, is Sublime too weak, and why is it divided into stars?

The protagonist's role is very average, and there is no masochistic tendency.

Behind-the-scenes articles should write less about the protagonists

It's interesting. When Demian was a wandering boy, a bird flew to God, and the name of God was Abraxas.

The last sentence of the introduction is more meaningful than "We have gained the power to deny the world from outside the world"

It is recommended that you write less about the reality of the protagonist, and if you have time, you can play a few supporting roles and do a good job behind the scenes.

It is very important to follow the new book issue. Can you use your little fortune-making hand to scroll to the last page?

Why don't you just transform and come out? You have to take out the game console and transform.

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It's quite interesting. In addition, I can talk about the level and quality of the cards, as well as the strength level. It's a good book.

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