Dream of the Red Chamber: I, Marquis Champion, Yingchun’s Cousin

Why is the title of Champion no longer used in later generations? It only talks about Huo Biao's bravery, not the ambition to be a champion. It is actually because after a eunuch named Wang Fu was awarded the title of Champion, people in later generations were not happy. After Emperor Zhenzong of the Song Dynasty granted Zen to Mount Tai, it was the same reason that no emperor in later generations would ascend Mount Tai to grant Zen... There is no other way

The emperor's surname is Ji The protagonist's surname is Ying. I don't know how other people feel about reading it. Anyway, I feel quite awkward. Is this a hint that Ying wants to compete with Ji for the world?

So far, the writing is okay and can be read, but the details are not handled very well. When Chen Chuan went to deliver the letter, Yingchun should not have shown up, Si Qi should have gone to get the letter, and Feng Lazi was not so open about sex. As for marrying a wife, I think Yingchun should be an equal wife, and the first wife should be the legitimate daughter of a wealthy family even if she is not a princess.

I asked why I haven't written about garden dramas, and I gave the answer without even thinking about it. The author doesn't know how to write it at all. He takes the outsider directly into the inner courtyard to meet the girl who has not left the palace. The protagonist's maid flirts with others in front of the protagonist. Not to mention the Red Mansion, normal ancient novels would not write like this.

When Huo Qubing was there, the Marquis was second only to the King. Without the title of Duke, the Champion Marquis was the ultimate Marquis. However, there is a Duke in Dream of Red Mansions. Where do you want to place the Champion Marquis here?

After reading four chapters, Menzi went into the inner house by himself, Yingchun went out by himself to get the letter and said goodbye.

I want to laugh when I see the champion. Authors who are ignorant of history really shouldn't just slap their heads and use names blindly.

All these can be done in Sanjiang. It seems that I don't want to do it at the starting point.

Bro doesn't even write novels based on research. Even female channels don't do this. The history you write is more intense than the TV series.

What's the wrong surname? Win, it's too unconventional.