Day and Night Wandering God

The Golden Three Chapters are quite good, but after the first story, it becomes boring. The silence is deafening, there are no books, and there is nothing about cultivating the relationship between siblings. It's just for fun 😁

In addition to the difficulty of entry, the taste gets better and better later on, so far it has reached chapter 72.

The book was slow to pick up in the early stages, but now it's getting better. More to come.

Nowadays, most of the beginnings of online writing have become formulas. How many words are used to describe the protagonist, how many words are used to describe the world view, and a sense of crisis and a hook that breaks the situation must be written... Supernatural writing, the most important thing is to exaggerate the atmosphere, especially at the beginning! And it also needs to be novel and reversal... This kind of imaginary world during the Republic of China is really a natural soil~ Writing group portraits has always been the most labor-intensive. It can be seen that the author is very ambitious and does not look like a newcomer... Who is this monster and what is his masterpiece? Please name your name. Don't force me to beg you 😡

A great book, with an unconstrained world view, mature writing style, and good character development of each character. Recommended for book lovers who like folklore.

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Such a good book ranks ninth on the new book list, and it's a great starting point. Take a look at what the others on the list are talking about, just a gimmick, and then start writing. There is no plot, twist, or rhythm at all, and I can't even name it. Who is reading those books? Really good articles are ignored. I don't believe that a normal person who has eaten delicious food can still look at things that taste like crap. I don't believe that there are so many reading software and so many people have not developed aesthetic standards. The rankings have reached such an extent.

All comments are like human and machine, I dare not read them

The front is really beautiful, but there are a lot of plug-ins in the back. My sister is the boss of the Night Travel God, Master is the boss of the 7-pillar incense, and the hand of the god is spread. The weird blood well has also turned into a wishing bottle. If you want to know about murder and sacrifice, you can go back in time if you have an obsession with clearing the wrongs. If you encounter questions, you can also ask the encyclopedia in the painting. Now the Bone Elder Guild is still very close to the protagonist. A weird story turned into a cool story, a good start was wasted, the gap is too big, right?

I can't understand why such a good book isn't popular! As a 30-year old bookworm, I have checked the list hundreds of times, but there are still no books I can read!

Chapter 105 has been read. After it was put on the shelves, it felt worse and worse. The rhythm of driving high and going low. The inexplicable Jiangzhi and Long Aotian... Are not as fascinating as the opening chapter. Ask your book friends, is there any improvement in the future? Is it worth reading on? As of Chapter 105, I already don't want to read anymore.

There is currently a big logic bug in this book. The protagonist, who was so bad in his previous life, has become so good after his return, and no one else in the Zhou family class has any doubts about it. This cannot be explained by a sentence about experiencing life and death and achieving enlightenment.

It's rare, it's rare to refresh a book and come up with a good new book. I almost forgot that the last time a decent new book came out was in the Year of the Monkey. Generally speaking, although the subject matter is a bit small and follows the path of side-by-side Jianghu craftsmanship, the storyline is complementary and integrated. The background is chosen in the early Republic of China. In the story, it is a collision period of [old and new eras], where technology and tradition go hand in hand. Writing, judging from the twenty pictures so far, I can say that the last one is pretty good. This book has something good, I hope it doesn't end badly.

I suggest the author delete and rewrite all the chapters after a hundred chapters. It felt like a lot of historical stories were crammed into my mind in a short period of time, and then I started to skip reading. Then the Stone Buddha, the five gods, Miss Qiang, Peng Hou, and Tianzun all came. Then the book changed from folk weird to fantasy? I don't know how to write two million words🙂

When I saw 208, I couldn't stand it anymore. The first 100 chapters, until the protagonist fakes his death and is resurrected, are top-notch. Both the atmosphere and rhythm are very comfortable to watch, and the foreshadowing is also good. From changing the map to becoming a wine-cooking monk, the level has been declining, and the overall style has gradually changed from folklore and weirdness to a cool novel for novices, but it is okay to read it as a refreshing article to pass the time. Several foreshadowing hooks also make people want to keep watching. Looking further back, I almost lost my sight. The part about killing Lu and the Archmaester of Pain hardly makes any sense. Blood Well has gone from being a big threat in the early stage to becoming a cute and cheat-like character, and then he starts to use various props from others. The early setting is: basically seven sticks of incense are the ceiling in the human world, and eight sticks of incense are already demigods. As a result, the protagonist has less than 200 chapters, and he kills two incense sticks, five sticks of incense, and six sticks of incense, all of which can't be seen. The folklore, weirdness, and suspense of arresting people in the early stages are all gone. The setting directly involves the Lord of Mysteries, and all the channels and powers are revealed, without any of its own characteristics. I even have a suspicion: Is the starting point now "producing novels" on the assembly line? There are masters who develop imagination and come up with settings;

This book would be better if it wasn't so big. The main character feels invincible and he's number one in everything. This kind of script is a bit inferior, and the main character is too much.

I feel that the rhythm is a little off. The events that the protagonist encounters are getting bigger and bigger, especially the protagonist's current two-level incense. If this trend continues, the combat system will jump. Now you have to fight with various gods and Buddhas. How to write the subsequent plot? Is it going to be the kind of high-incense that is full of incense? Is there a routine for stronger gods and Buddhas above the gods and Buddhas? It is understandable to jump to the third and fourth floors, but it is not appropriate to jump too much. The layers are originally clear. The combat system is conducive to readers' perception of who is strong and who is weak. If you destroy it too seriously, it will easily cause confusion among readers. Originally, a strong enemy can give readers this understanding from the perspective of high incense. But after the system is gone, the author has to rely on other means to describe how strong the enemy is. After all, a large part of the pleasure of fighting comes from winning against a strong enemy. Doesn't this put an additional burden on oneself?

It's amazing. Before, there was no book shortage and I couldn't find anything to read. Suddenly I discovered a new book mine, which is suspenseful and supernatural. The few new books I encountered were of very high quality. Does anyone have any recommendations?

Why did Erzhu Xiang begin to lose strength?

Tomatoes should have been posted 😐 Looking back now, it was not eye-catching at the beginning, but the logic of putting tomatoes is pretty good, and it should be popular.

I have seen the latest, the subject matter is novel, the writing is good, some settings are based on the Twilight Divide, the author has also avoided the problem of the book being too slow, and the plot changes are very smooth, but you mentioned it too fast, rushing towards the road of refreshing writing, which can only be said to be a pity. If this book is polished well, it really hopes to become a phenomenal novel like Lord of Mysteries. Unfortunately, the pace is too fast, various opportunities deepen the body, and the combat power is full, but it lacks the core of the story, and it becomes pure and enjoyable. In fact, each volume is called "Tangkou" that the protagonist has learned along the way, and the first volume is called "Storyteller", which enriches the core of the story and slowly opens the curtain of this mysterious world. But these two incense sticks of yours have the appearance of killing gods, so it's hard to look forward to them any longer.

The first chapter of the first hundred or so chapters is quite good, the writing is smooth, and the various foreshadowings are recycled just right. The second half of the chapter begins to be abstract, the plot is streamlined, and it is purely based on expanding the world view to add freshness. The characters behave like machines, and the facial expressions are shaped like machines. Gold fingers are given randomly. In more than two hundred chapters, the world view has changed from killing the White Walkers to facing the alien Buddha. The protagonist's level of strength is still at the level of Mingjiang Mansion.

The truth behind The Conjuring is also written inexplicably. Existences like Ren Ao, who are innately capable of reasoning, are not considered the protagonist. When the protagonist is still in Muhun City, the ancestral tree can be regarded as the protagonist? The ancestral tree has such ability, how can it be made like this by Ren Ao? It would be better to write that Zhou Xuan was deceived by someone when he was a child and took things from the blood well. As a result, little Zhou Xuan failed. Three souls and six souls disappeared into the well, leaving only one soul, which was repaired by the Zhou family using secret methods. The descendant of the failure, Ao Ao, learned from the pain and began to lurk and plot against the Zhou family. Only the restored little Zhou Xuan was left, just like a blank slate of birth that had been randomly daubed by design, and gradually turned into a bad boy. The protagonist is Zhou Xuan, who was reincarnated into modern times by three souls and six souls. After death, he returned to this world. When he was in Muhun City, he was sensed by the ancestral tree and was taken back by his grandfather. The only brother who is good to his sister is the protagonist from beginning to end, and the protagonist is Zhou Xuan and Benxuan.

What was written after it was put on the shelves was all rubbish. It must have been sold and replaced by someone else.

This book was written in a way that I thought was more appealing to me than Twilight Divide, so I read it in one go. The main thing is that the book is too open, and it has been basically invincible since the old tree stump This book has almost a million words, and it was written to the best of my ability. The outline is very detailed, and several events are connected. The hook hasn't broken in five chapters.

It is a book that is expected to become a masterpiece. In the early stage, both the characters and the structure of the world view were first-class. However, starting from the second stick of incense, the character design collapsed sharply, and the description of the combat power was also watery... I even doubted whether someone changed the writing later. The writing power is too different from the description of the first stick of incense... It's a pity to start high and go low.

I have read a good book three times, but I am too short of money to read it. This is my first reward for the author. I hope you don't mind reading it through other channels.

Give me some cum😜

Before changing the map, I regarded him as Guigao, but after changing the map, I abandoned him and entered the defense 🙂