
Muscle Saint in Tokyo
肌肉圣人在东京
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 730k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The more I read, the weirder it gets. I thought I could see a very powerful plot, but after reading more than fifty chapters, the more I read, the more romantic it becomes?
Confucian scholar was reborn in Japan and did not commit suicide on the spot
There is almost no description of the appearance of the characters, and there is no location or background. The only person who has a little more description is the protagonist, but not very much, and the whole thing is inexplicable.
It turns out that Confucius taught how to pick up girls, and it's so dark
Can you please stop being so stingy with punctuation marks? You won't make gold if you save them
The idea is good. If the writing was better, it would be a good story.
There were so many female characters when they first appeared, but none of them had a character.
The author's writing style cannot be said to be bad, and the level is there. However, one of the highlights of this book is Jin Baqiang. The current main line is youth love. The writing style is light and the protagonist's character fails to highlight his characteristics, which makes Jin Baqiang's bright spots dim a lot.
Too rushed, too dry
The subject matter is novel, the intention is ambitious, the writing is a bit immature, and the plot arrangement is cumbersome. As of Chapter 5, I feel like one word: rush rush to get connected, introduce, and plot. When the plot line is not yet clear, the heroine/heroine plot is like the seeds in the grape. There are a lot of them... It's like ignoring the main plot when starting the game and running to clean up the branch plots. Except for the "ejaculation" part where there was a hint of color, the girls took turns to come up one by one and get to know each other. It was like watching a slide show. I passed by without any impression. Instead, I had a headache because of the name. After time travel, the first thing I don't want to do is understand the times and learn from them. I should go to a bookstore and go around, or explain why I let nature take its course and inherit the original owner's thoughts: for example, "School is a good place for me to understand the present." And this is just a youth campus love comedy, why not talk about how to become a saint? I'll keep looking.
When Brother Kong does his morning exercises every day, he will first step on Brother Meng's skull and look far into the distance, watching the river go eastward and sighing at the passing of the dead.
🐎Yes, this is exactly the book I wanted to write.
Not enough waaaagh! ! !
It's almost 100,000 and only costs 300. It's so volume, I immediately feel like I shouldn't be reading a light novel 😭
I take back what I said before. The author is the freest author in the world. Seeing the light of the sun, the world will be bright.
So far, I have gradually embarked on the path of self-pleasure, which is not necessarily a bad thing. Come on!
The chapter "The God of Archery" is very interesting. It has a semicircular style of bragging about combat power, and it is very pure.
Almost all female characters have psychological problems
The character descriptions in the latest chapters are very stereotyped, and the transitions are also very blunt.
There was no foreshadowing before the big mistake. A disciplinary committee member, a madwoman who only knew how to shoot arrows, suddenly turned into a rock musician It feels like the author mygo has watched too much and made a fool of herself.
Dashan Meng is so cool, it's just like what I imagined 😭
Come on, there's really no need to write it down if the 270,000 words can't be put on the shelf, and the paid follow-up reading probably hasn't reached 200 yet. There's really no need to generate electricity for love like this. Summarize the mistakes and poisonous points, and start the next book.
I'm suing you, don't know what is good and what is bad😁😁
Some thoughts after reading Chapter 300
The first hundred chapters really get better and better, and the characters are still relatively three-dimensional. In the middle, I started to feel inexplicably self-excited, some group fights, and some angry settings and plots that had no bearing on the rest of the plot. They were all deleted without affecting the rest of the story. The further it goes, the more arrogant and arrogant it gets, and it starts to look like an inexplicable literary youth. I have every reason to doubt whether it was written by AI. The separation between the front and back is too serious. Friends who subscribe, please be careful, start high and go low. Chapter 300 with pictures has been fully subscribed