
Honglou: I, Jia Huan, Will Get a Hundredfold Reward for Copying the Book!
红楼:我,贾环,抄书百倍奖励!
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- Alternate History
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After reading Chapter 30, I realized that I couldn't read it and had to write in vain.
It's a coward to open a book, it seems to be Jia Huan's hallucination before he was punished to copy books and died.
Mrs. Wang asked Jia Huan to copy the book, so Jia Huan copied Mrs. Wang.
The author has no idea how serious the consequences of an unkind mother in ancient times would be, so he writes like this
Once Mrs. Wang is convinced of the rumor that her aunt is unkind and treats her concubine harshly, housekeeping means lax housekeeping, political enemies will attack, and the worst is to be suspended from office and go home to reflect. Jia Baoyu's reputation will be ruined, his path to the imperial examination will be directly cut off, Mrs. Wang's natal family will also be implicated, and Mrs. Wang's power to run the family will be gone. Mrs. Wang would only do this with a big head.
It was acceptable in the beginning, but it was very toxic starting from the moment when Mrs. Wang wanted to burn the protagonist to death. Mrs. Wang is petty and jealous at best, and the protagonist wants to kill someone just after passing the child test? The person who was killed was the young master in the mansion, the place where the fire was set was Jia She's study in the mansion, and the person who set the fire was an ordinary servant who was under threat. Is it so casual? Don't you think the author's conception of these plots is outrageous?
There is no need to deliberately add conflicts. According to the original work, Jia Huan and Mrs. Wang have no conflicts.
In the original work, Mrs. Wang's attitude toward Jia Huan and the others was to turn a blind eye, and Jia Huan repeatedly complained to Jia Zheng about Jia Baoyu's behavior, but Mrs. Wang never got it back later. There was even a time when Jia Huan deliberately knocked over a candlestick when Jia Baoyu was acting coquettishly towards Mrs. Wang, causing the hot candle oil to burn Jia Baoyu's face. Jia Baoyu also protected Jia Huan from punishment.
It's out of line with the character of the original character.
Copying books in the snow, Mrs. Wang's second room in the main courtyard is in a wrong situation. If the situation of unkindness of the aunt's mother occurs again, Jia She will definitely attack and take the opportunity to take back the power of the family. How stupid Mrs. Wang is. Mrs. Wang casually gives the subordinates a wink and figures out the food and clothing expenses. It is enough for the concubine to feel uncomfortable. When something goes wrong, there are still servants who are shocked. The character of Mrs. Wang collapsed from the beginning and did not stand up.
I thought it was a cool article, but I realized it was a female video article when I saw the house being set on fire.
A good book, the foundation is a source of food. The beginning is upright and upright, the writing is smooth and comfortable. It can be seen that the author has really put in the effort, and the character description is also vivid and vivid, which fits the original work. However, the writing falls off in the middle, and the conspiracy and tricks are like a villain. Reading the comments, I found that the author changed the outline after reading the readers' comments, and then took revenge on Mrs. Wang. Although it meets the taste of some readers, the overall enjoyment is reduced. It is a pity. If it were written according to its own outline, this book could be better. Write your own, don't listen to what readers say. Readers' comments should be the best, and most of them are just words to express emotions. This book is really good and worth subscribing to.
The Jia family is written as if Mrs. Wang is a bad person
It feels so disgusting to see the protagonist and Jia Zheng being a loving father and a filial son! It is written as if Jia Zheng and Jia Mu are treating the protagonist like that because of Mrs. Wang, so they put all the responsibilities on Mrs. Wang, and everyone else is forced to have no choice. It's so awkward! There is also the extension of grace mentioned by the author. Can this extension be extended to the concubine? The author simply didn't understand the difference between concubines and concubines! Even if the protagonist succeeds in reading, unless he gets the top prize, otherwise in the Jia Mansion, Jia Mu, Queen Jia Zheng and others will not treat him too much and take him too seriously! In addition, Mrs. Wang is not the only one who will suppress the protagonist. Jia Mu and Jia Zheng will not make the protagonist feel better, which will make you deeply understand what the difference between legitimate concubine and concubine is! Mrs. Wang's operation to kill the protagonist is too bloody and fake. It would never be this plan. Those books are more valuable than the protagonist. How many families can Mrs. Wang find children from the Wang family? He was born into a military aristocracy, and his elder brother was still a general. It's too sloppy. Given the protagonist's situation and the resources at Mrs. Wang's disposal, it's too easy to deal with him.
It's a bit like literary youth disease. Can a doctor take a look?
The characteristics are as follows: The writing style is very good, especially good at describing expressions and movements. You can even make up some beautiful poems and short sentences. The protagonist has an awkward personality. He is a coward in the first thirty chapters, but in the later chapters, he is idealistic and slow to take revenge on his enemies. After the revenge is over, he wants to make up for Baoyu, which makes him look like a holy mother. Some people guess that it is the author of a female video. I have never seen a female video and I can't tell, but it feels very literary and youthful...
Well, Li Shimin was originally the legitimate son, but he was the second legitimate son and his status was much higher than that of the protagonist, the bastard.
Living like a tortoise, the whole world is targeting the protagonist, so why do you need to use plug-ins? The writing is wasted.
I read other people's comments saying that those who write about Red Mansions are women, and they are absolutely right.
If you want to copy by yourself, you have to go to Mrs. Wang's place to copy.
Calling it a piece of dog💩 is all praise for this book
At first glance, this book seems to be well written, but in fact, there is no distinction between priorities and priorities.
I really just opened a superman trick, and then used superhuman abilities to move bricks at the construction site!
Between hay and grain
The author probably has some literary problems. In order to make the article appear inscrutable, even the most basic writing is not smooth. I have read more than fifty chapters, and the first chapters are fine and can be regarded as good food, but the later chapters about going to the Imperial College can only be said to be nonsense.
I can only say that it's so red that it's really fucking ugly.
The writing is quite good, and the characterization is excellent. The plot is really a big mess, the desire is to be promoted first, and the suppression is done at the front, but the counterattack at the back is to poison Mrs. Wang. It is really a clandestine trick. Mrs. Wang went crazy and was sent to Jinling to worship the Buddha. It's so unpleasant. Even if you do nothing, there will be people behind you, and the title of Jinshi (Tanhua) will be able to suppress these nasty things with the general trend. It is no better than poisoning. The timeline of the Red Mansion is also a mess. Maybe it's really a female video author
Thoughts after reading
In fact, it can be seen that the author is very careful. He designed the golden finger for copying the book. The writing style is also delicate and artificial, echoing each other. In fact, this kind of historical writing is well written and can be read. You can try to replace the protagonist with a female, and you will find that you have seen a similar plot in a TV series Especially the one about power, your scalp will go numb every time you watch it. Isn't it good to make a lot of money by writing female videos? Why come to the male channel to earn these three melons and two dates 🙂
Suffering, all aggrieved, just waiting to die without fighting back
I can read Chapter 2.30 At the beginning, and then I started to eat it💩, what the hell is it written. It's so disgusting. It's written in a vague way. It doesn't even have the focus. It's all poisonous.
Reminder
As mentioned, please don't stop here. Thanks.
When I saw the article I was writing, I fainted and couldn't hold on any longer, so I started taking poison all the way.
It's too early. I thought she was in her teens when I took the imperial examination, but it turned out that Lin Daiyu didn't even enter the Jia family. According to my Baidu search, Lin Daiyu entered the Jia family and Jia Baoyu was seven years old. Jia Huan was one to two years younger than Jia Baoyu, so she was only five to six years old. Then she was only four to five years old when the winter started. Do you really think she was writing this as an adult? Even if a child prodigy is still a top student, I have never heard of a child prodigy who skipped a grade and ranked first in every exam. If a person is so powerful, why should he take the imperial examination? He can make rice. And do you dare to believe that Mother Jia was chatting with five-year-old Jia Huan about Mrs. Wang? What can you do as a child? If we were really being reasonable, nothing would happen. There is also Mrs. Jia Zhengwang, Jia's mother, who all colluded to take revenge on Mrs. Wang. No matter how you look at it, it smells like a junior sister in the foundation building stage forcing a senior sister in the Mahayana stage. It's really disgusting. Can you explain some logic?
It seems that Jia Baoyu is not a direct descendant, right? Jia Baoyu's father is Jia Zheng, right? It seems that Jia Zheng is not qualified to inherit his father's title. His father's title should have been inherited by Jia Zheng's brother. However, because Mrs. Jia did not like her eldest son and liked her second son, she did not allow the family to be separated, so Jia Baoyu and his father lived in the Duke's Mansion.
This book collapsed because I felt unhappy and frustrated reading it.
Writing fan fiction is already taking a shortcut, but the author still can't grasp it. Let's practice writing a two-dimensional fan fiction or a bad Siheyuan fan fiction first.