
Mortal: I Am Mo Jianli, the Greatest Mahayana in the Spiritual World
凡人:老夫莫简离,灵界第一大乘
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 345k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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132Chapters
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Regardless of Dou Po, other parts still have a mortal feel. The author seems to want to write a copy of I. I hope you can write better. After all, there seem to be quite few fans of I.
Author, I see that you banned the book first and then changed the outline, which shows that you are not too low-minded. To be honest, Dou Po is actually very good at writing. First of all, the title of your book shows that you are writing an invincible novel. So, does Spirit World deserve 4 points of the space? After all, the protagonists fit together. Then, the protagonist written by Dou Po has no character at all. It is like what others said, a nanny novel. When writing a world with a slightly lower force value, you have to write something that is beneficial to the protagonist, or write more about improving strength, or just pretend to be a little bit more. However, the reason why Doupo failed is because the protagonist does not have a B box. It has a feeling similar to "The Domineering President Falls in Love with Menopausal Me". These days, this kind of writing is no longer popular. If you are the president, then you must have the airs of a president. If you are fighting to break the ceiling of combat power, you have to feel that way. You have no scruples, you know.
The first few dozen chapters can be read as a Dou Po fan
As the title states, those who want to read the story of the spirit world can wait until the end of the battle and skip this world directly. I will make a summary at that time and sort out the system points and mission rewards. If you want to read Dou Po Fans, you can read it. Anyway, this book will definitely be read thoroughly, and the first world will be finished. Just read it as a copy of the three-year contract with a slightly faster pace. The fan value comment limit is opened because of a glass heart. Oil devils don't have much time to write a book every day. Reading too many comments will easily break the defense. Readers, please bear with me, but from time to time, you will open the comments completely if you feel itchy [fn= 2]🌹🌹 Just make some extra money, please show mercy if you want to scold me The environment is not good these days, just get some cigarette money After all, my wife is very strict, so it is not easy to get some private money.
The plot goes by too slowly. I guess I'll have to do another 60 chapters after finishing the fight.
It's quite interesting to see this way of writing as a mortal fan.
So there is still the same intrigue within the human race. Among all the races outside, the human race is weak, and then they continue to fight monsters and upgrade. If they are short of elixirs, teammates come to ask for a team. If they are short of broken mirror pills, they are also given by teammates/a certain copy who were assassinated or something 😄😄😄😄😄
How many points does it cost to exchange 10 points a day for 100 points?
Can the author be more bold? Why does it look like a little boy can blow up your body and fly a hundred thousand miles a day with all his strength? You don't have a fighter jet, so you can fly so fast.
I have finished writing Dou Po, and I will definitely write the plot of the spiritual world honestly.
As the title states, I don't like to read those who are fighting, and those who criticize a lot, saying that the nanny is a dog licker... Forget it, I probably don't like the articles that I write on the street. In short, the spirit world will write well, at least one or two hundred chapters can last. Speaking of which, I want to go to the next world to be the Supreme Being. This book is really good-looking. Brother Bird Thief is awesome. I won't write about the invincible flow. If you go through it, it will be at the level of the ordinary Dharmakaya. After all, the expression of that worldview feels more powerful than the immortal world among mortals.
Doupo will be finished soon
I've gone back to the spirit world. Is anyone still willing to take a look?
A generation? Did you come back from cheating and suppress the world view with one hand?
Actually, the subject matter is quite interesting.
Are you a eunuch? The writing is pretty good, why don't you write it again?
One million words go to the alliance leader, and the author comes to take the lead
Although I am not a rich woman, I still hope that there will be a normal mortal fanfic that can finish the spiritual world and then go to the fairy world. Write the number of words of "Bie Shui" carefully, otherwise don't blame me for being a scumbag 🙂 Remember to keep it at the top, maybe one day when you want to commit suicide, you won't be able to do it.
I like to read about mortals, but rarely read about other books. Alas, after reading the introduction, I really don't want to read it.
How about you write the plot of Dou Po? We love to watch that kind of pretentious plot 🙂🙂🙂
You have not attracted the readers at all. I know you want to write about Dou Po and attract readers, but your Dou Po writing is neither fish nor fowl. Your Dou Po writing has a monastic style, not a fantasy book, but a fairy tale. You completely wrote Dou Po as a kind of cultivating immortality, one by one cultivating Taoism, and then the exercises are completely based on the content of cultivating Taoism and cultivating immortality. You completely misrepresented Dou Po, so no one read it. I know you wanted to write about Dou Po to attract readers, but it was completely off track. The readers felt awkward when watching Dou Po.
Author, what is the title of your novel? Please select the theme.
The author's writing is good, but there are some problems with his thinking.
It's rare for a fanfic to start from a high level
Are there any fanfics that start from Nascent Soul and above? Please recommend
We can no longer write plots about extraordinary people. If we write about people again, we will run out of time.
Don't vote, everyone. It's a tattered book that's about to be cut. There's no need.
I took a look at the backstage and found that several brothers have voted for monthly votes in the past two days. Please stop voting. Although I deleted the post on the shelf (the one that advised everyone not to subscribe), this book will probably be discontinued next month. Your votes are wasted.