The Old Lord of Hogwarts

I don't know how the watermark got there, but I got it from next door.

There is no main plot. A common problem among many fans is that Voldemort and Grindelwald are solved in the early stage. The combat power is too high, and then it is impossible to write. If I can't continue writing, I will change the map for no apparent reason. A boring and watery chapter. You can run away after reading one or two hundred chapters.

I have read more than 200 chapters so far Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The author's writing is good, the story is also good, and the character is not broken 2. The author personally admits that there is a single female protagonist, and does not make some messy harem stories 3. Not aggrieved, does not deliberately suppress the strength, and there are not too many bloody plots Let's talk about the disadvantages (maybe this is an advantage for some readers): 1. Just like the title of the book, a large proportion of the book travels through time, like the Infinite Stream covered in HP skin. The main story has more than 1 million words and there is still no progress. It is very boring to read. This may be a bonus for readers who want to read some fresh stories 2. The emotional line is almost invisible, and the sporadic daily descriptions can show that the author has a deep understanding of the description of emotional lines, but The author doesn't know why he didn't write it. Of course, this is a bonus for readers who like to read emotionless lines 3. The hook is too big. The first grade has dean-level strength, and the second grade has super-voltage level. This means that the growth in strength cannot become the main plot. In addition, there is almost no emotional line, resulting in almost no main plot line in this book. It is just that the protagonist travels from time to time. The length is several times longer than what he wrote in the real world, and it is very boring 4. I have read more than half of it now, and there is almost no main plot of HP, almost all of which are the author's original plots in the background of HP To sum up, this book is an infinitely flowing daily novel based on the background of HP with almost no emotional line or strength growth line, and basically no HP plot.

So far, it seems that it is a very good daily article, which can be called fairy grass. The author has a lot of daily updates, and the quality is also good. Especially regarding the author's theory of magic, there are finally no blue bars, which is in line with the original work. So far, highly recommended.

The author's writing is very good, the writing is comfortable, and the plot is particularly good. It's really good. It's a new idea. I've already seen a few buried holes. I'm looking forward to filling them in! Come on! Write more

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you finish the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are ten o'clock, the great Confucian's debate on scriptures is deafening, and the attitude of tolerance is implemented both inside and outside. When you are twenty, the memory of the bookworm has a place for you. Even in a long life, your name will leave dazzling traces. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates. So, don't stop. Update, update, update (copied and pasted, I don't have that much ink)

The more I write, the more boring it becomes. The main character is a god, neither a god nor a human being. He is obsessed with making money. Even though he can kill Voldemort, he can't defeat Dumbledore's youth version on horseback. His combat power fluctuates. He was still fighting before. Dumbledore and Grindelwald broke the destiny corner together, and it felt like it strengthened the character Now I'm starting to write the Riddler again😅 Isn't it good to follow the main plot honestly? Why do you have to go here and there? It's a mess, I don't know what you want to do at all, it seems aimless and boring.

Sometimes I really can't understand whether the author who writes HP novels is a BT, because many of them make me gay!

I found the book the day before yesterday and read 195 of it in two days. How can I put it, it was really interesting at first, which is why I read so many words. However, the author seemed to have overlooked one important thing in my opinion. This is a fanfic. It seeks originality in fanfic plots, rather than looking for insignificant fanfics in originality. I saw a comment before that said that the story of this book is too big and it will definitely collapse. I thought at the time whether you would like it or not, but now I don't know whether it will collapse or not. But when I saw the plot of chapter 195 and the following ten chapters, it really didn't surprise me as much as it did before. I found it hard to regain my previous enthusiasm for reading. Originally, the plot setting was quite convoluted and the setting was very realistic, but the fun people were always treated as fun, which gave me a very awkward feeling. It would be a pity to abandon it and it would be tasteless. Maybe it's because I'm not mature enough to read it right now, so I'll put it on the bookshelf first and talk about it later.

The protagonist cheats on the legendary wizard, boasts loudly, and then even those who can't be beaten are still unbeatable. I'm really tired of this routine.

The author made the protagonist's character greedy and childish for the sake of daily life. Otherwise, I would never have imagined why Jin Gallon still had such a big obsession with the protagonist when Dumbledore, Grindelwald, and the 28 Holy Tribes had almost completely surrendered. In the first dozens of chapters, the author himself wrote in the book that the body was an adult's soul, but now I can't feel that the protagonist's soul is an adult at all. I can't think of any other explanation besides hydrology 🙂 Before, I ordered all of Chapter 150, but now I've basically skipped reading.

The only pity is that it is difficult for this book not to collapse, at least in terms of combat power. I learned the three unforgivable curses and the fierce fire before entering school. I am ready to understand the essence of magic mentioned by the author at the beginning of the first grade. If this continues, the protagonist will be able to destroy everything in the second grade and become a god in the third grade. The combat power has completely collapsed. I don't know how to advance the plot normally.

I can't watch the rest of it. The protagonist is too stupid. He repeatedly steps into the trap and relies on the guidance of others to advance the plot. The protagonist himself has experienced so many things and has not made any progress at all. His combat power has also collapsed. He is suffering from stupidity.

The more it is written, the more chaotic it becomes. The male protagonist's IQ is getting lower and lower. He is a typical representative of driving high and driving low.

It was okay in the early stage, but in the later stage there were too many original works, the plot was completely deviated from the original work, and the combat power was increased crazily. It has turned into a fantasy novel.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 88. The protagonist feels like he has some kind of mental illness. He is not happy at all at Hogwarts and behaves neither like an innocent child nor like a mature adult. Like a kid patrolling the streets with a gun.

The writing was good at the beginning, but it became a mess after the time travel started. The plot has nothing to do with Harry Potter, and it has nothing to do with it at all.

There are too many two settings, and the protagonist has forced selective amnesia about the plot, so it is not suitable for friends who are familiar with the plot. Speaking of one word alone, he could name a word "limbo" that was not mentioned in the original work (I am sure it was not mentioned), and the station where Lao Deng and Harry finally met. But he didn't know that the sixth book was the Half-Blood Prince, the "half-Prince" specifically mentioned in Snape's original novel. Harry's new plug-in took an entire volume to write. The whole story was about finding out who Prince was, and the plot points were all advanced by Snape and his old books. Then the protagonist himself wondered, "Which family is Prince?" Then he saw Snape and had no reaction at all. Then I was blocked from commenting because what I said was controversial (?), Which was quite fun.

Man, I'm serious. You're wasting your talent if you take any more pictures. First of all, what you wrote before is indeed beautiful. But since you started to let yourself go in Chapter 250, I guess not many people will read it now. How about you open a new book now? Someone will definitely read your lesson.

I saw Chapter 164. According to the previous writing method, it would have been impossible to stay in the face of the werewolf for so long, and to use the method of forcibly hiding the strength to show off this kind of writing... It feels like the writer has changed, and the subsequent content has received a mediocre response in the comment area, and the comments are endless. Alas... What a pity for a good book.

After chapter 180, your original plot is really boring. The three major pitfalls of fan fiction are Marvel's mutants, Harry's time-traveling, and martial arts' mixed martial arts. As long as it is published in the outline, you will die.

The protagonist doesn't understand that his last name is a little bit poisonous. He said that the protagonist came from time travel and knew about Dumbledore, Snape and Hermione, but he only forgot about Snape's mother.

What's the story behind? I couldn't stand it two months ago. After two months of waiting, I came back to see the plot which was still incomprehensible. I forced myself to watch a little bit and skipped through it, but I still couldn't stand it. It's like you wrote that you are a Shinigami in Naruto and can collect corpses to increase your attributes, and then you are still doing tasks to show off, and suddenly you become a person. I went to Heaven to incarnate as Sun Wukong and cause havoc in the Heavenly Palace. In the end, I found out that you were once the King of Hell who was beaten to death by Sun Wukong. The main plot in the front is based on Hogwarts. The characters in the back are less and less connected to the plot. I wrote that the founder is OK, I wrote that Merlin can barely accept it, and then it feels like other things. Yes, and sometimes there is no need to focus on the Goldfinger thing. It is like adding some points to Deep Blue. Which reader can judge whether Deep Blue is reasonable or not? What is more important is the protagonist and the plot. If you think the protagonist is too strong and cannot be satisfied by Hogwarts, then there is still a lot of imagination, I remember. One of the must-have books is Goblet of Fire, in which the protagonist guest-starred as a teacher, allowing the contestants to travel back in time to the time of the World of Warcraft undead disaster. Harry went there and Voldemort came back. It was quite interesting. With such a high starting point, the combat power must have collapsed. Only those who are purely having fun can write it well. The protagonist's combat power should be for fun.

The writing and plot control before it was released were impeccable. While the protagonist's strength is steadily advancing, the plot is also developing simultaneously. After being put on the shelves, especially those that the author claims are five chapters in one, with one chapter of more than 10,000 words, there are a lot of meaningless descriptions mixed with a very small amount of plot and the growth of the protagonist, making you read hard and not get any positive feedback. It can be seen that the author is addicted to his art

I have read more than a dozen chapters since it was released. The first chapters are quite interesting. At first, I thought the author planned to write a campus fanfic where the heroine is a descendant of Grindelwald. But this talent is overdone, and at the same time, the foreseeable combat power is broken, which is easy to write off.

The later stage is boring. Except for the protagonist, most of them are in The Riddler. Suddenly, a god comes out and pretends to be mysterious. Everyone knows a little bit about the secret of the protagonist's identity. But the protagonist's IQ suddenly drops off, and he has to look for this and that. The founders in the past have all The protagonist is called little raven to his face, and there is a rumor among Alchemists that the true creator is a raven. The protagonist also knows that he was a raven before. With the intelligence and intelligence described in the protagonist's beginning, various legends or gods force riddles and dig holes here. In the middle and late stages, this is a group of people. Pretending to be mysterious and pretending to be the Riddler, the protagonist suddenly turns into an idiot and goes to solve the puzzle together. The timeline is confusing. The point of confusion is that the protagonist can change history by going back to the past due to his identity. History is centered on the protagonist's experience. This is the most central setting in the author's article, but under this rule, the protagonist has not yet Going back to ancient times to change history, some characters are already the memory and state of the protagonist after changing history (such as Morgan, the young version of Voldemort, etc.), And some follow the rules and follow the protagonist to change history and change their memory experience (Merlin, Lao Den, etc.), Which is a mess.

I feel like I have rarely seen comments since I returned to the Age of Gods. The plot is getting more and more boring. It's stinky and long, and there's a lot of water mixed in. The writing style is a bit different from before. Could it be that someone else wrote it?

After starting to travel through time, HP went further and further away. . . . Isn't your writing style original and original?

The Egyptian chapter is 💩. The protagonist is a person who steals meat from the God of Creation, runs through history, and controls the paradox of destiny. How difficult is it to fight a clone (Ghost Bride) of an evil god who only sacrificed a city? Of course, you can still read other parts, but the protagonist travels too frequently and is a bit out of touch with Hogwarts. You can still watch the Egypt chapter if you skip it.

This is the best book I have ever read The front part is really good, so I ordered it all without reading the back part, and then it was a nightmare. I read this book for almost a month, because it was too long and I couldn't read it for a while, so I went out to do other things. The only motivation to persevere was to see how it would end, and then the author didn't finish it, so he was ruined. This author's account was wasted, and all the hard work he had put in before blindness was in vain.