Immortality: Start by Cutting Paper and Turning It into a Soldier

The protagonist is currently on the fourth level of the first realm, a total of nine levels. Awesome

The book is good. You can bring a woman with you. And you should learn more about other things. You are systematic. Accepted

Has the protagonist never seen a woman?

The writing is okay, but it feels a bit effortless. If you have a cheat, you won't improve secretly. You have to wander around. In order to watch the excitement, you are in deep danger, and you have to rely on the author to force cheating to solve the problem. The author needs to strengthen his transitions, they are too stiff.

If you don't write about women, you'll feel like the protagonist has never seen a woman before.

The realm system doesn't have any good-looking settings, so eunuchs may be needed.

Alchemy and then physical training. I didn't even understand the exercises.

The writing is really bad, just like the Qiankun Wuji Kabuto, which fuses the red gold essence. You have to understand that it is a fusion item, not a characteristic that is fused to the protagonist. It is like when I make an alchemy, the second-level elixir I made before becomes a third-level elixir before I become a third-level alchemist. Isn't this nonsense!

Isn't there the peak half-step of Dzogchen at the beginning of the fourth level of the first level? Still not enough water

Can I be blocked? I really don't want to get it. I saw this crap when I came in.

There is absolutely no need to read any more. If you don't believe it, just try the poison yourself.

What should I say? You can take a look at some of the strategies used by Wu in Water Margin. How can you take a look at your so-called water bandit white paper fan? Is there really such a stupid white paper fan? It has been destroyed long ago. How can it wait until now? ?

Women only affect the speed of swinging the knife

The combat power and realm settings are poisonous, and a paper dragon can be as tough as a two or three level one in the first realm...

From the beginning of the paper-cutting, nothing was achieved.

The more I watch, the more speechless I become. The more I go up, the worse it gets.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I have accumulated so many talisman soldiers, but I don't use them very much, and I don't realize them very much. 100 Points is one hundred, and then I can't use up the two hundred or four hundred of the second, third, and fourth levels. I keep stacking levels without thinking. The plot advancement has nothing to do with the golden finger. I keep working hard to draw the talisman, and the role of the talisman is upgraded every time. Use it once, once, and you will pass. Without the golden finger, there is nothing wrong! More than tasteless, just eat some food

The disconnect between realm and combat power is too serious 🙂

Well written! It's a pity that the plot is too slow

It's well written, but I don't see that woman at the moment. Just pull half of it

The plot begins without any foreshadowing, so the author must have foreshadowing.

The people around the protagonist are always geniuses. Come on, this is too fake.

Not to mention the realm, he keeps leaping ahead. Fighting

I can't stand it anymore by the second chapter, the plot is too thin

It doesn't work in the first plot. He arrests your eldest brother, but you won't arrest his parents?

There is a typo in the introduction. In the first sentence of the last paragraph, "escape road" is written as "escape road"

Can you continue to write ancient novels?

Do you have to share everything you get? Can't read

This book is pretty good. So far, the protagonist's IQ is online, and there is no deliberate attempt to lower his intelligence.