The Prehistoric Kunpeng Will Never Give up His Throne

I know that the author is the biggest master of a book, and he can write whatever he wants, but when writing about the prehistoric era, you have to look at the current background, the starting point to write about the thousands of people in the prehistoric era, various settings, and the routines have gradually become fixed in the evolution of so many years. Readers usually see the prehistoric era as "Three Qing Dynasties NB, and there is a certain category in the world." You just casually wrote that the Kunpeng flower bloomed in the ninth rank, overwhelming the four. I only saw the second chapter and stopped reading. I will not judge the subsequent wisdom reduction and other things. But the author, you should write this book for beginners, so what kind of people will read a book about prehistoric times? In addition to those who have read it, it is probably the novices who are interested in Journey to the West who will come to Honghuang to read it. Putting aside the conspiracy theory, monkeys can cause trouble in heaven. Wu Chengen has been given the heel of the four monkeys in the world. How can Kunpeng and He De surpass the Nvwa of the Sanqing Dynasty? Author, it's not easy for you to cheat the system or something. You didn't even mention giving readers a nine-level cheat. But anyone who has done a little bit of research on Journey to the West will think you are talking nonsense. Moreover, the general environment has determined that the now famous prehistoric books are not good at all. At least the setting is rigorous. The rigorous setting means that even if this book is criticized, the author will not be punished, and the readers will help become trolls. So there is a problem with the setting of your book. And from the analysis of the protagonist's personality, the character card is clearly written, decisive, and does not give up a single opportunity. Well, I actually think it's a failure to make the protagonist stronger than you are. For a protagonist with such a character, your talent is at least as good as that of a powerful one. I think it's not a big problem even if the flower blooms at level 7. Your talent is not as good as others, and then you rely on the protagonist to make up for it. In the end, it succeeds. The protagonist who is not as talented as others keeps moving forward bit by bit on his own, seizes opportunities, and changes his destiny. It is obviously better than the flower blooming at the ninth level. You, the flower blooming at the ninth level, make the hard work scene described in the first chapter useless. Write like this, and the protagonist with this kind of character continues to work hard. It would seem strange if you don't write Jackie Chan Aotian. Of course, if the author feels that his writing power is amazing and he can control it, then you can delete this post. The main purpose of writing online articles is to make money, especially for novices like yours, but the second is fame, and even more important if you want to write a book for a long time. After all, a book can only earn a few tens of dollars per person at most. Only when you are famous can you have a fan base when you open a new book, and then you have the foundation to compete with the big guys for the New Book King or other awards. However, readers who read novices are famous for recognizing the book but not the author. Moreover, the theme of your book is Prehistoric. The people who can read your book without the editor's recommendation are Chinese mythology lovers. However, the setting of Prehistoric has been perfected by generations of authors and has been accepted by most readers. Kunpenghua blooming at the ninth level is simply equivalent to challenging our common sense, and Prehistoric itself is also a What an author writes in series with Chinese mythology is equivalent to a second creation of Chinese mythology, that is, a fan. The current Honghuang novel is a second creation based on this author, which is equivalent to a fan of a fan. The basic principle of fan works is to respect the original setting, so the setting of this book is problematic. Of course, if the author is really successful, then I would like to congratulate him. The life and death of this post will be decided by the author, waiting for a slap in the face.

I vomited. After reading five chapters, it poisoned me to death. I have read so many great novels, but this is the first one that is so poisonous. Basically, there are about ten poisonous points in one chapter.

From my personal point of view, the basic settings of Honghuangliu cannot be changed. Changing it means writing a new story by yourself. Not everyone is a great writer like Chen Dong who can create "Perfect World" by himself.

Under the law of heaven, there are nine saints. The descendants of Pangu and the Three Pure Ones can become saints.          Nuwa is the demon emperor, with Xihuang's platform, the emperor is male, ignore it, the demon clan's Qi is Nuwa's, not enough to become a saint, but with a gentle push from humanity, it is more than enough to become a saint. Emperor Jun's Qi was quite different. The ten little Golden Crows almost completely divided the Sun and Star Qi of Emperor Jun Taiyi. Jie Yin and Zhunti inherited Western cause and effect, wiped the butt of the first saint, took the blame, and were completely puppets of heaven. It doesn't matter whether it is difficult or tiring. He is just a registered disciple. In the end, he is not even the authentic Taoist sect. It doesn't matter. In order to become a saint, he finally changed the Western religion to Buddhism. There are three thousand avenues and eight hundred side gates. None of the avenues can be entered. One word, suffering, two words, true suffering. In the end, Jiejiao and Chanjiao were conferred as gods. I had the same idea, and three thousand people from the world of mortals joined the religion. On the surface, it seems that the Western religion has flourished. The two saints have to accept it if they don't accept it. If you don't accept it, you, a sect of the Western religion, still want to reject the great prosperity? If you accept it, will it still be your Western religion? Hey, they are all wearing the guise of Western religion. If you don't become a god, you can still take a period of time to practice. If you don't believe it, look at it. Maitreya is the future Buddha, and the future is yours. The present and the past are for interception and interpretation, and are not under your control.            ，？ Isn't this just looking for death? Kunpeng was the Lord of the North Ming Dynasty, and he had some luck. He took advantage of the slope to join the demon clan and become a demon master. He was able to seize a glimmer of hope. Needless to say, he was stared at by Nuwa Empress. He was a monkey on his journey to the west and killed demons. You can taste it carefully. Three friends are taught together, so only Nuwa is the close disciple of the first saint. 😎

If you don't follow the basic settings of Honghuang Liu, you can directly write a new novel that is not Honghuang Liu. It's just a matter of changing a few names.

Daluo Jinxian transcends the long river of time, has no life span limit, and is immortal, but will be destroyed by the quasi-sage, because the quasi-sage is already an existence on another level.

Pangu opened the world in order to attain the Great Dao, but as a result, the creation of the sky failed and he fell. Pangu must have been plotted by the Great Dao.

After reading the introduction, I was just a disciple. Since I have great ambitions, why not defeat the old thief Hongjun 😁

It's very interesting. I give you a five-star review. I hope you work hard and don't be proud, otherwise the book will not be published. Thank you to the author.

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Come on, author, you have a lot of ideas.

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Previously, the combination of Kunpeng's three corpses was only the pinnacle of quasi-sage. How could Donghuangtai become a saint when combined into one? If not, he would be a sub-sage, and wouldn't there be restrictions on innate spiritual treasures?

A rare good article from ancient times, no longer stupid 😄

The seat is not a question of whether you want it or not, it has already been decided. To put it bluntly, it is a concrete manifestation of strength. Let's not talk about the three pure things. Pangu transformed into the three pure things in one breath, possessing most of the merits of opening the sky. Pangu is authentic. If you compare the prehistoric world Likened to a large group company that has successfully gone public, Sanqingduoduo is the biological son left behind after the death of the original founder. He himself has a lot of original shares in the company. He later joins the board of directors and becomes the person in charge of the company's rights and interests. It is already destined that the real power boss will be there. Nuwa and Fuxi, two technical tycoons, even though the two brothers and sisters brought some of their own funds to the venue, they only dared to ask for one seat. Are other people who are born with great supernatural powers who have lived for hundreds of millions of years really stupid? Can't you really see the mystery of those six seats? People know that if they force themselves to sit on it, they will end up asking for trouble and be kicked off in disgrace. Di Jun, isn't Taiyi awesome? Don't you just sit in the back obediently? Hongyun and Kunpeng are two idiots, but they are a little unaware of themselves. To put it bluntly, their morals are not matched. Even the Western duo, even if they don't use tricks, they can't sit still. Who knows, other accidents will happen and they will give up their seats. Besides, do you really think that the Western duo got their seats through purely shameless tricks? Is Hongyun really a good person? Is Kunpeng really a coward? Can ordinary people really understand that a person with great supernatural powers has his hand broken? The Western duo entered the Zixiao Palace the latest. Could it be that they really arrived late? Maybe the duo had arrived early and didn't go in to grab seats first. Maybe they had been hiding in some dark corner and secretly observed everyone present. Until you have repeatedly observed and considered all the possible variables, you finally enter the market. First of all, Sanqing cannot be messed with. Nuwa does not seem to be a soft persimmon. The duo can handle the rest. After deciding on a plan, the duo entered the Zixiao Palace. On the surface, they cried and behaved and rolled around to pretend to be pitiful. What tricks did Hongyun Kunpeng secretly do to Hongyun Kunpeng? Who knows? Why did Hongyun suddenly become soft-hearted? Why did Kunpeng suddenly become intimidated? Why did Yuan Yu suddenly say something out of nowhere: How dare you, a man wearing fur and horns who lays eggs in wet places, sit with us? Did the duo secretly promise any benefits to Yuan Yuan? Requesting an assist? Have you secretly given Hongyun a magical power such as enchantment, causing him to take the initiative to lift his butt off the seat? Did you secretly use your magical power to intimidate Kunpeng and make him confess coward on the spot? At least strategically, the duo's steps to grab seats are absolutely brilliant. Pretend to be pitiful when entering, and do not rob them openly (at least it will not arouse the resentment of most people with great supernatural powers. At most, they think these two people are quite shameless and a little shameless) Then focus on finding the weak persimmon Hongyun Kunpengxiu to operate. Secretly, I asked Yuan Yuan to give me some help, which was exactly what Yuan Yuan said: How dare you, a man wearing fur and horns, living in wetness and laying eggs, sit with us? With the final word, the Western duo successfully took the last two positions, and no one came to compete for them. (Let's make a complaint here: Among the great supernatural powers present, except Sanqing, who was transformed by Pangu Yuanshen, and whose natural Tao body is the same as Pangu's, how many other great supernatural powers can there be. Can the prototype of the body completely escape the original poisonous tongue summary? Even though Nuwa's body is also made of heaven and earth, her lower body is also in the shape of a snake) It was not until the final seats were decided that Daozu Hongjun officially appeared, set the rules, and began to preach. Daozu Hongjun appeared at just the right time, neither early nor late, and this can also be seen. The Zixiao Palace racing qualifying competition seems fair, but in fact it has been predetermined: the top three seats must be from Sanqing, and should be the direct descendants of Xuanmen. The other last three seats will depend on strength, resources, potential, and later contribution, all in a comprehensive consideration. Nuwa➕Fuxi, who is capable and has core technical advantages, can also invest a lot of money in the later stage (to mend the sky, create humans, Fuxi gave up his innate Tao body and reincarnated into the human race, creating the innate Bagua). He can have a position, and Nuwa can be a formal disciple. Receive ➕ Zhunti, with excellent strength, he will have to work hard in the later period and go to the west to open up wasteland. First, he owes a lot of debt to the company, which may never be repaid. He can barely have two positions, but if he has to fight for it, he can be a registered disciple. Other great gods will also give you a chance. The last shortcut to the holy position (the seventh Hongmeng Purple Qi) is that after you graduate, you should work hard in various departments of the company (prehistoric world) to strive for the top. You naughty kids, take the initiative to book your seats according to my ideas in advance. This can also reflect my (head teacher) Daozu Hongjun's fair and selfless character, right? If you have reserved your own seats and it is not in accordance with the school regulations (Tiandao) and the wishes of Hongjun Daozu (principal➕head teacher), do you really think that my class teacher cannot adjust your seats? After graduation, Hongjun divided the treasures between the treasures and the treasures. It can also be seen that the best treasures were not given priority to Sanqing? So judging by normal logic, if you have the strength, skills, courage, resources, and ability to carry accounts in the last three seats in Zixiao Palace, you can try to earn some money (but if you don't earn it, you will probably have to lose your luck) The first three If there is any blind young man who ignores the rules of heaven and the wishes of the Taoist ancestors and insists on earning the Sanqing, he must first tell the class of 3,000 students based on his strength, why are you more awesome than the son of the founder of the school (Sanqing), and want to be the class president as soon as you come up? I want to try the three brothers of Sanqing again. Is the fist as big as a sandbag tough? Three brothers kick you in three circles and ask if you are afraid? If you are not afraid, the three brothers also have a combined soul summoning skill (called the parent) Pangu transformed the three pure beings in one breath. Even the 12 unpopular illegitimate sons of the Twelve Ancestral Witches can combine to temporarily create Pangu's true body. Do you think the three pure beings will not be called parents? (If you really earn the top three seats, your luck will be negative immediately. I don't know how you died.) Finally, I'll say a few words: the Battle of the Gods, Laozi transformed into a Hu, Duobao became a Buddha and became an ancestor, and three of them entered Western religion and became powerful Bodhisattvas. This may also be regarded as a successful penetration of Taoism into Western religion. According to the introduction, Zhunti actually retreated behind the scenes without any sense of disobedience. This can also be regarded as repaying Zixiao Palace's original offer to help when he was fighting for his position.

It's enough not to give up the seat, but to fight for the first place, why should a demon want to be the first in Xuanmen, unless he insists on writing invincible articles or other things, I always feel that the writing is unreasonable, I don't like invincible cool articles and systematic articles that do not trigger thinking. There are so many prehistoric articles. If you want to be unique, the author has to work hard, and I feel that I will not be able to do it.

Looking at the prehistoric literature, it is full of chaos, opening the sky, three tribes, lich, interpretation, journey to the west, and the end of the law. ~ I really don't know why the Great God Pangu opened the sky. Should the prehistoric world be destroyed one by one? What's the point? Is it just to prove that it once existed? The current book finally makes up for the regrets about the prehistoric novel, and it is worth reading.

There is something wrong with the setting of this thing. In the prehistoric times, it still depends on qualifications? Is Kunpeng still better qualified than Taiqing? They are Pangu Sanqing, who are you? At most, it can be regarded as the transformation of the broken soul of the Chaos Demon God. Pangu created the world in the prehistoric era. Are you comparing your qualifications with other authentic descendants in the prehistoric era? I explain it forcefully, and I really believe it! Don't ask for good writing, just be more rigorous! !

It doesn't matter what I want from this book, but what about Sanjiang?

Will there be no updates when it is released? Hi Bai Xingxing

In fact, I just want to say, if you add a little IQ, can Sanqing, Holy Mother, and Buddha be surpassed so easily? There are too many cool articles in Honghuangliu, can you come up with something meaningful? A dignified saint must be a bad person? It's just an idea, don't write like a villain.

I think it is too easy for the protagonist to grab the futon. Why do you say that? Let me explain it. First of all, what is the purpose of Hongjun's preaching? I think it is to harvest luck, because becoming a saint requires a lot of luck, and prehistoric times are based on causality. Sanqing and Nuwa are both people who have great luck. Two Western monks, It also has a causal relationship with Hongjun, because Hongjun and Luo Hu fought in the West, which caused Luo Hu to self-destruct, and Hongjun was involved in the cause and effect, so there must be a position. What does the protagonist have? When he travels to Kunpeng, he does not earn any merit except for practicing. Under normal circumstances, why should the protagonist get a position. It is better to tell the protagonist to go to the wilderness to collect merits and gain reputation. I will not have these questions. If you are Hongjun, what will you do? I will accept a disciple, and I will definitely accept someone with great luck. And history also proves that if you get two monks in the West, you will have great luck, otherwise you won't be able to get a position by saying a few words. After all, there is a secret in the ancient times that can blind the soul, which can make people confused.

Why do today's prehistoric novels always have Hei Nuwa... I don't understand 😥

The difference between the seats of Kunpeng Hongyun and Sanqing Nuwa's Zhunti. Sanqing's heels are top-notch, she has Pangu's merits and fortunes, and her strength is also top-notch. She has a normal seat, and Nuwa's heels are top-notch, but at most she is weaker than Sanqing. She has destiny to create people, and she is protected by Fuxi, the crazy sister-in-law. Her own strength is at most weaker than Sanqing. It's normal to have a seat, and it's normal to get a seat. If you don't talk about Sanqing, at least you are not weak to Nuwa. You are brothers and they are of the same mind, and their strength is also top-notch. There is also Hongjun's Western Karma. It is normal to get a seat. You Kunpeng Hongyun is not as good at luck, virtue, luck, and strength as heel. Hongjun doesn't owe Karma. How can you sit securely in the seat?

I didn't want to give you a ticket, but when I saw so many people trolling you, I gave it to you. Of course, I don't have a monthly ticket, only a recommendation ticket 😁😁😁

A broken bird. To develop power, you still preach. Preaching also has merit. Mentally retarded? Even Taoist ancestors dare not preach before they become saints. The Six Saints also dared to preach only after they became saints. If you continue to develop your power, you are seeking death. Looking back, didn't the dragon and phoenix lich finally disappear? How much cause and effect does a force have to involve? The Tao should not be taught lightly. What you are afraid of is the great cause and effect. How to become a saint when you are entangled in karma? Liang Jie is used to kill guys who are entangled in cause and effect.

The Great and Wilderness is too difficult to write. First of all, the plot is basically limited, and there is only so much that can be done. Secondly, this is destined to be a genre that is almost impossible to become a god. And the character setting is also difficult to operate. A normal counter-attack and slap in the face plot will destroy the prehistoric situation. A life span of 10,000 years and a life span of 100 years must have different thoughts on one thing. There is a huge difference between thinking about eternal lifespan and 10,000-year lifespan. The ants will only work hard to satisfy themselves. People will work hard to have enough to eat later. It's the difference between lifespan and IQ. Writing about prehistoric times must be done with style. It also needs to be novel within the prescribed framework. At the same time, all the bugs in the traditional prehistoric era must be eliminated. The more important thing is to have a brain. It is more demanding on the brain than ordinary books. I quite like this genre, but I basically don't read Hong Huang's books that much. It's so hard to stand out

The ancestor of Styx is written down too low. The ancestor of Styx claims that the sea of ​​blood never dries up and the river of Styx is immortal. Even the saints can't do anything about Styx. What does the protagonist rely on? Heaven on the River Styx still carries all the clones! Can you improve the IQ of the supporting characters? At least arrange a reasonable plot.

I have to say that the plot is good, but in terms of artistic conception, it does not have the grandeur of the prehistoric world, nor the feeling of great power moving the heaven and earth. Some people can write martial arts with a fantasy feel, but this civilization has reached the level of saints, and it still looks like a gangster slashing people with knives.