Starting from the World of Jiu Shu to Suppress Evil

With Deep Blue adding points, you still have to rely on your own efforts? It's all about plug-ins. Just tell the truth, don't open your eyes and tell lies, okay? Unless you develop a Deep Blue system yourself and become a system god directly.

I have watched all Lin Zhengying's movies, and I feel that the most reasonable conclusion is that there is no so-called martial arts in them. The way to increase the law is to burn two sticks of incense in front of the ancestor in the morning and evening, and then you can increase your daily mana. You can practice it at other times. Drawing talismans, drawing spells, various rituals or exercising muscles, this is basically your daily routine. Of course, there is no one who is as talented as the senior brother. His mana can slowly turn into thunder and lightning. Others can survive normally and the mana they accumulate is very different.

The original heroine of the fanfic is boring and I don't know what she looks like. If I accept 2 original ones, then don't put the 2 original female characters in the character list. I saw other people asking why I didn't accept them. The author said I don't understand the bus. The original characters are quite good and she is brave in the face of zombies. I label them for no reason.

The original meaning of Uncle Jiu's world is the world where Uncle Jiu lives. It is composed of a set of basic underlying laws. There are people, ghosts, gods and demons. It would be meaningless to write about Uncle Jiu's world if it only revolved around Uncle Jiu, because it has already been written too much! If you want to write something fresh, break out of Uncle Jiu's social circle and start a new story with Uncle Jiu as the background!

If you don't learn good spells, you have to learn how to raise corpses, and you'll get deducted merit. Isn't it uncomfortable to carry the corpse around every day?

If the author is a newbie, it would be great to be able to write like this for the first time. Brothers, don't come up with random ideas and let the author write according to his own ideas!

In fact, Ren Tingting's original work is quite good. There is no need to reject it just because of the gossip of some YY book friends. Isn't this the same as believing in rumors? Besides, the emotional scenes are not very well written, so don't hold back. How many times did you hold hands with Cui Lingguang at the beginning, and then kept dragging it on? This is not an urban love story, so you should be decisive when accepting girls! The emotional drama is not the main plot, so it needs to be detailed appropriately.

I don't know why, but I don't really like Cui Lingguang as the heroine. The character image is too weak and the sense of existence is too poor. Author, since you can't write original characters, don't force yourself and force yourself to write Cui Lingguang. This way, you might as well write the original character Ren Tingting. At least many readers come here for T.

Your golden fingers can make up magic spells out of thin air. What's the point of writing about the Republic of China?

Wuyu has always emphasized that Qiu Shengwen is not a bad person. The two of them are not bad, but they can harm people. I don't know how many people were harmed by releasing the Hundred Ghosts, because the protagonist only mentioned it briefly. He is not a bad person, but he is definitely not a good person.

Bai Rourou

Damn it, you're here to tell me Wanjie Wife, you're making a deadlocked variety show and using an original heroine, you might as well create a whole world, I feel cheated

I only read the introduction, but I didn't expect you to have a female protagonist. You just defeat monsters and add some points to become an immortal and ascend to the sky. What's the use of having a female protagonist? Even if she can practice, can she keep up with you?

If you don't know how to write about love, love, love, don't write about it! ! !

You haven't traveled through time, you've entered the game world

The last few chapters I have read are not as good as the heroine. If I don't know how to write, I won't write about women. It's very uncomfortable to read. I have been reading it. I hope the author will pay attention to it.

，，，，       ？ What were your thoughts on sewing so many sci-fi elements? It is obvious that he is the Lord of the Underworld, so he has the full power to create a Fushan Seal to suppress the Underworld Lord. Or use the power of the magic domain to refine some materials such as divine sand, and create a big clearing move such as the three-flavored divine wind and the wind-calling curse. If it really doesn't work, it's okay to use the evil-breaking power of the magic domain combined with the thunder method to create the evil-breaking god thunder. The battle scenes with science fiction elements are nondescript. As a reader, if I want to watch a science fiction battle, why don't I go to the science fiction area? I want to see what you look like in a Taoist robe and holding a machine gun

After seeing the latest chapter, Chapter 121, I would like to give the author a small suggestion, that is, don't dwell on the plot point of the Cui family. The protagonist has such an awesome golden finger. Instead of taking the reader to see the beauty of the vast universe, he repeatedly rubs the Cui family's little karami. Originally, when the heroine left the Cui family, I thought the plot of the Cui family was over. I didn't expect you to continue it. It's really unnecessary. First, the Cui family itself is not a trivial matter for the protagonist. Instead, a large number of Cui family members may cause trouble in the future through their relationship with the heroine (Cui Lingguang). Second, the protagonist supports Cui Lingguang in developing his career. That is because on the one hand, Cui Lingguang is the heroine appointed by the author, and on the other hand, the protagonist owns half of the shares. Even if Cui Lingguang is in charge of the development of the business, it is the protagonist's own family's business. But now, the author, you let Cui Lingguang take over as the head of the Cui family and take over the family business. Then who will own the family business that Cui Lingguang earns? Is it considered the big Cui family? Anyway, as a reader, I am very uncomfortable with it. I don't know why you, the author, are fixated on the Cui family. Is it because you want to write a plot where the protagonist goes to great lengths and pretends to be a slap in the face, and then gives the heroine some air? But author, you don't have to. The way you write it now makes readers suffocate. It's like a company with the protagonist and heroine Cui Lingguang controlling all the shares. It doesn't matter even if it's called "Cui Group". After all, there is only the protagonist. If you introduce the Cui family into the company, the protagonist becomes an outsider. Doesn't the protagonist become a son-in-law with a strong Taoism?

The fairyland in your writing is really useless

You can either write Ji Do-ryu or practice martial arts and become immortals. The painting style of wearing armor and casting spells is too weird.

It's very well written, with more food and grass, almost like grass jelly. If I hadn't run out of monthly votes, I would have voted for it. Brothers, just watch it!

I have to say, it's very well written, and there's nothing poisonous about it so far.

It's been three months since I stopped updating. This book seems to be a eunuch.

Damn it, is it a eunuch? No update in 12 days

I've already given you two monthly passes. I hope you can add two more, because it's not enough. What you wrote is also good.

To support yourself to death again? What the hell is this? If you keep one, you will die.

It's okay. I saw that there were no poisonous points until it was put on the shelves, and the values ​​​​were well controlled and didn't collapse.

Jiu Shu is one of the rare authors who uses words and sentences fluently and seasonedly. He also does a good job in setting up the world view. I like the flow of details. Come on.

Although I didn't read it much, I read the comment section and roughly understood some of your problems in writing books. It's just that Kavinka doesn't know how to write or how to conceive the plot. The protagonist upgrades too quickly, and the overall plot speed is also too fast. The personality characteristics of the protagonist and supporting characters are blurred, making it difficult for people to feel involved. Although I don't write books, I know that the most important thing for a good book is to make readers feel involved. When what you write can make readers remember even a roadside NPC, it means that your book has a sense of immersion. Especially for ghost novels, what is needed is a sense of immersion, and what is needed is slowness. Only slowness can make readers immersed in the scene. Just like the corpse hunter, one chapter can contain 10,000 words, but the plot advances very slowly, but it can make the reader feel immersed in the scene. The protagonist is like the reader's eye camera. The protagonist's only task is to help the reader understand the environment, people and customs of another world... As readers, we don't want to see how the protagonist upgrades. What we want to see is the scenery of another world.

The writing will be better after it is put on the shelves. Please give me more updates. All orders are included!