Immortal Cultivators in the Cyber Era

Author, generally speaking, we write fractions, numerator/denominator. Your writing habits are a bit different from ordinary people. Although it does not affect the writing, it affects the perception. I hope you can modify it.

I'm speechless. At the beginning, Goldfinger felt like it had an idle effect, but as I went on, the effect seemed to disappear. It felt like it was something the protagonist practiced instead of being idle. Goldfinger became a skill that was simply acquired through bonds with people.

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. Don't be just some old man's trumpet.

There is no twist at all when changing scenes, and that bond, can you give it a frame every time you write it?

There is no desire to read this introduction.

Very well written, Liang Cao. Cyber ​​cultivating immortality is neither about exporting cyber content blindly nor completely wearing cyber skin. It's pretty good. If you keep writing steadily, your grades won't be bad. In short, just don't be too proud. There are still typos that need to be corrected.

It feels like the cyber world was deliberately set to make it impossible to hang up, and then set the hang up to have a golden finger feeling 🤫 Otherwise, as a robot, it cannot handle multi-threading, which is too ridiculous.

It feels good, I will keep it for the first half of a year and observe it.

Damn it, this book is good. If you keep it up, you will become a god.

The overall writing is pretty good, but as a book friend said, the characteristics of hanging up are a bit unprominent. Shouldn't hanging up mean lying down and being fed? Your grades are average at the beginning of the book, but as long as your level is online, you may be able to get ahead if you persevere. Are you sure you don't want to persevere?

It feels good, come on! 👍

It's well written, the plot is smooth, and there are no poisonous points.

The story is well written, but there are many places where the sentences are not smooth. There are too many words and too few words, but there are a lot of typos that could be corrected.

Can you focus more on it? Do you have to open it both ways? Who can see one picture? If you take one card a day, that's just over 300 cards a year. Do you know what 300 is enough for? Who can wait for you to get one this day? When the time comes, those who are raising them will be raised to death. Quickly cut off the other one and concentrate on updating this one

Is the protagonist the kind who benefits himself at the expense of others?

It always feels a bit familiar, Saibo, Huangquan Sect, and I also thought that there was a similar novel before, and it seemed that I needed to give money to the founder. I just can't remember the name at the moment. Has the author read it? That one seems to have also entered the palace.

Why haven't I settled the old book yet and opened a new one?

Ah, I just added the bookshelf a few days ago, and I cut it before I even started reading? There are dozens of chapters and so many comments, are you sure you don't want to continue?

I feel like I'm on a collision course with Xionglanggu's new book. I can understand the author's discontinuation, and I hope he writes better next time (of course, the author can also read Gouzi's book, and maybe he'll be inspired to continue it)

Is it like the new book of Bear, Wolf and Dog? Is there a Shen Nong?