From Skaven to God-King of War

At present, the big problem is that the Skaven have always been similar to the role of predators. They have no production capacity and can only keep killing. However, it is difficult to advance in technology and social transformation with unstable supplies. Apart from madness, does he have any advantages? Analogous to the genetic engineering of the Zerg, it must have core competitiveness.

This book is extremely strange and awkward! Why? Because I want to write the history of the Skaven into an epic, that is, a legend. I also wanted to mix the embarrassing experience of the protagonist with it! But this is very contradictory! The protagonist's situation determines that he cannot let the rat man develop on his own! But for the sake of the author, the literary youth wants him to have miracles and heroes! For example, the Craftsman's Heart clearly needs weapons at this time. In order to create characters and create an epic feeling, the author had to be discovered and used by a ratman. In short, the author made too many accidents in order to shape and portray the character, but the protagonist's situation makes it difficult for the Rat Man to let himself go (that is, to maintain his aloofness), so it seems that the protagonist is a fool, but the protagonist has never been a fool, so who is? Of course, the author's writing style is great and I like it very much, but there is something wrong with your idea.

I feel that the writing is a bit awkward. The writing is obviously good, and the protagonist is completely useless. Shen Zhiwen needs adventure, but he also needs farming planning. Surprises should be born in the protagonist's plan, rather than the protagonist being surprised and making a false alarm. It is a blessing rather than a disaster. Moreover, for a second generation, dragons and beasts have been taken out. Yalong can still accept it. Is he able to have a giant dragon without wisdom?

1. Let us be grateful to the messenger in black. Because it was he who built the towering Dark Tower, which has since housed the sacred bell. 2. Since then, the light that exudes darkness has continued to take root in this land 3. Thanks to his grace, the chosen ones have grown sacred horns. 4. Since then, the chosen ones have been working day and night to understand those dirty and cruel philosophies in depth. 5. They strive to have all the neat and tidy stupidity purified by the sacred clutter. 6. Let us be grateful and take care of the female rats he has given us. They can allow selfishness and offspring to grow uncontrollably and die uncontrollably. 7. The thinking he gave us allows madness to be displayed sincerely and continuously. 8. The gem that shines with bright green light in the dark gives us the ability to spread pollution and be polluted. 9. In the continuous reincarnation, the Chosen One teaches his followers to prove his existence and to be evil and unbearable. 10. Teach our compatriots whose life and death are insignificant to feel their own insignificance. 11. Let the incense burner carrying germs wander around the world day after day. 12. Deeply realize that death and survival are the eternal symptoms of us rats. 13. Unity! Because the horned rat will surely walk among us! Yesyes!

This is a novel that I like very much. It truly feels like a Rat Man epic The Rat Man has the advantages of having many people and all the shortcomings except having too many people. So how to maximize strengths and avoid weaknesses? A god provides faith and strength to integrate the rat people There are many rat people, so we don't treat the low-level rat people as human beings, and directly turn them into fuel for the advancement of the rat empire. At the same time, relying on faith to achieve the most basic unity of the rat people A major feature of this book is that the protagonist, as a god, rarely interferes with the rat people. The protagonist is more like a symbol of the rat people's desires, so the rat people worship the protagonist very much But this is the shortcoming. When the rat people entered the universe and colonized the planet, I knew that this book was going to collapse. The Rat People need a hero/tyrant to lead them, but after entering the universe, the requirements for a hero/tyrant are extremely high. Ruling an empire and ruling the universe are not the same concepts. And obviously the author can no longer describe a character who is qualified for this position In the early stage, the author arranged for a god-chosen high priest + army commander to rule/command the operation of the rat kingdom and the battle of the army. But in the universe period, the older generation of heroes has passed away, who in the new generation can take on this responsibility. Similarly, in the universe period, who is worthy of being the enemy of the Rat Man In summary, the Rat Man is suitable for rolling in the mud with the enemy, dragging the enemy to the same level as himself. The universe should not be a place where rat people can set foot

You can refer to the Skaven. There is a plague and you can choose to develop technology.

First of all, he deliberately suppressed the protagonist. Secondly, the protagonist didn't write clearly about the work of the Evil God Chamber of Commerce. The author wrote about a hammer here and a broom here and there. It's a mess. You can't say that it's a big jump. He just wrote wherever he thought!

It looked good at first, and it was good to write something epic with this style of writing, but it became more and more difficult later on. Generally speaking, it would be on the eve of unification or the decisive battle with the quilboar before it was released. But now, even if you fight a lizard, there will be a dragon from nowhere to cause trouble. Isn't it interesting? Even your writing style becomes more and more confusing and boring. I didn't know where the divine eye came from before, it was inexplicable.

Rat man? I suggest Skaven here. Yes! Yes! Poison, assassination, technology. Biology. Frontal combat

In fact, it can be written with reference to the medieval Warhammer Skaven

After reading it for one day and 200 chapters, it didn't feel like a divine story at all. There were no college competitions, no adventures, not many divine domain cards loaded, and no divine domain development (there was only a small plane where all the students were), and there was no manifestation of the power of the gods. It neither understood the laws and priesthood, nor paid attention to and guided the dependents. The priesthood was not reflected, and there was absolutely nothing written about the murderous priesthood. It's so special. The protagonist in the article is completely invisible and has no idea what he is doing. Especially after the priesthood is confirmed, he falls into a deep sleep. The author writes two sentences about his incarnation when he thinks of it. It feels like he is waiting for the race to pull him to become a god. It is more like a group drama. Except that the dependents are more novel, it is completely a story about the rise of a fantasy race. The protagonist has no use anymore. He has not appeared as many times as the supporting characters. I can't remember the name of the protagonist after reading it.

The epic feel and war writing are very good, but the theme of universal gods is a failure, because the author can't handle the reality well and is not as good as the original gods. If the protagonist is a native god, then the multi-dimensional hegemony can cover up most of the shortcomings of this book. In short, if the author writes a new book with the theme of gods or leaders, let me know and I will read it.

I have no desire to read when I see the name of the protagonist. I don't understand why the authors of Western fantasy novels always like to give Chinese names. When watching the drama, they always use modern vernacular. From time to time, they will make some slutty remarks and make some bad jokes. It's not specifically about the author not to pretend to be a certain person, but just to complain about this style. The mysterious author handles it very well.

I think we can give the protagonist something to do in reality, otherwise he will do nothing, and not paying attention to the development of the Rat Man leads people to think that it doesn't matter whether he has this protagonist or not.

This novel is a group portrait novel. I feel that there is no need for the author to keep weakening the protagonist. The protagonist needs to participate in or another protagonist line to increase the protagonist's sense of existence. Then later, we can appropriately bring out the warmth of the protagonist, so that there is a sense of contrast between the protagonist and the rat man. The contrast is still very good at the beginning, but becomes much weaker later on. This Rat Man thing can add a little more conflict and opposition. Promote the change of this rat man, instead of just being a rat war character. The light rat battle, the confrontation between the white rats and some temple troops was a bit boring. I feel like I can add a lot of elements of this opposition. There are too many oppositions that I dare not resist. This kind of struggle is a bit tiring.

For the sake of the horned rat, ring the bell 13 times and initiate the first chapter of world destruction! ! ! ! ! ! !

The author writes well This book is about the protagonist rarely directly intervening in the development of the rat people, and the rat people are crazy and evil The reason why the protagonist does not intervene: God needs a sense of distance, and if God makes a mistake, his faith will easily be shaken. Especially the more capable your subordinates are, the easier it is to disbelieve in God. Therefore, the protagonist ensures that the general direction is correct, and the specific development is decided by the rat man himself.

To be honest, it's a bit... Impatient to directly upgrade to Warhammer The technology tree is like that of primitive people. It's a bit wishful thinking to quickly pull out Warhammer and a combat level, so I will either continue to use the big game to speed up the technological climb, or I will prepare to continue to develop a priest system to strengthen the power and application of divine magic (I have no idea, just tell me) From the perspective of hindsight, if you bump into a world while being dragged, and the indigenous gods and civilizations in it, and then fight a few World War-level wars to gain technology, it may be smoother, reaching almost a Cyberpunk level and then Warhammer is about the same.

The protagonist feels that he has no plans for his family and Goldfinger. The advantages of the rat people are obviously piety, warlikeness and many beliefs. But it feels like the protagonist didn't take advantage of it at all. . .

The content is OK, but the frame is not. How do you want your worldview to be rounded? You start with the Gods Academy. Don't you think the gods and the academy are in conflict? It just fell apart later on. I didn't have any big eyesight so I just wrote it honestly. Your Rat Man content, coupled with a simple worldview of humans and gods, will never collapse into this later on.

This book shouldn't be in this place, at least I don't think it should be. It should go a little higher, instead of sinking to the point where it's not even finished. In a novel, it is always the characters that can leave an impression on people.

Can you see the author? If this book is cut, it will not be ordered.

It started to fall apart in the middle of what I wrote. It started to fall apart after Du Yuan disappeared. What was he writing? There was no outline and he was doing this thing and setting here and there. I copied here and there without writing anything of my own, which is really disappointing.

Looking at the introduction, it looks like the protagonist of Rat Man becomes a god.

The constant civil war... The purge is really tiring to watch.

Always abusing the word "is" and "", adding superfluous information and affecting the reading experience

I love reading, how can I make this book popular! ! ! I will invest 100 yuan in this book every month. Until it gets hot

It's very interesting. The Rat Man's struggle, faith, despicability, and greed are very interesting.