
Under One Person: You Practiced the Eight Magic Skills Wrongly
一人之下:你的八奇技练错了
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- Completed
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- 660k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The first forty-six chapters are pretty good, but for chapter forty-seven I can only say that each has its own merit. I wish you a great sale.
I haven't read the book yet, but the introduction is of a very high level, as high as a 17 or 18-story building.
When I saw Chapter 124, I felt that this was too cruel. Every now and then someone would save the villain, every now and then the little Japanese would be better than the Chinese, and every now and then the protagonist would get crazy and injured and fight for his life. Anyway, it was just frustrating. Let's raise it for a while.
Death from poison
The deus ex machina saves the enemy and it has to be you, the author.
Speechless
The protagonist was pushed down inexplicably, and he was the enemy whom Shen Jiangbao deeply hated. Fortunately, Zuo Ruotong did not die, so I stopped watching it for fear of being poisoned.
Poison
Chapter 47 is really too persuasive. Whether you let him live or not, he will be wanted by the Lu family. Letting him live will make it known to everyone that he can secretly learn other people's skills. When he wanted to kill the protagonist, he didn't stop him, and now he wants to be counter-killed before he tries to sidetrack him. This is the most disgusting thing. Why don't you come out and take care of it from the beginning, or else just leave it alone.
As far as the title of the book is concerned, the eight magical skills with obvious flaws under the guidance are okay, but it is embarrassing to say that the third level of rebirth is to cultivate one's life without cultivating one's nature. If one really has to cultivate one's life without cultivating one's nature, one cannot get through it, so the Trinity Sect requires its disciples to be sincere first. Let's wait until Uncle Zhou practices Xuan Gong again next week to see how well Lu Jin has practiced in the past 100 years and then change this section.
Why did you delete the comments saying that the protagonist is both naive and reckless? Are you so intolerant of criticism from others?
What I don't understand very much is why Lu Ci keeps chasing and biting the protagonist. If the protagonist kills the devil and is not grateful, then he won't mess with the protagonist. Wouldn't it be better to replace Lu Ci with Wang Ai?
It feels quite confusing. I rushed to the Tang Sect to help out and had to be beaten and tortured. I became enemies with Lu Ci out of nowhere. These are not the only things I can't understand in the article. There are too many.
Chapter 47 Death from poison. If you have to write something silly to save people, wouldn't you know how to deviate from the original work?
It's not interesting, it's boring, and the paid chapters are a waste of my money.
This is poisonous before it is put on the shelves, please be careful before entering, deus ex machina, please be careful before entering.
The first plot immediately persuades you to quit
To put it simply, the writing is unpleasant, very unpleasant, not a good article, just look at it as a hammer.
Putting the cart before the horse, the focus is on the protagonist, and the protagonist does things in a disorganized way without even a purpose. . .
Generally speaking, there are three golden chapters, but the writing is mediocre and nothing special. I usually read 20 chapters of this kind of article. Now I just want to say that it is very poor. The protagonist does things without any purpose.
There are very few villains that can arouse emotions and make you want to kill him immediately. The Japs are one of them. Every time I read the memoirs, it was said that the Japanese had good marksmanship and that many of their comrades died with a single charge, and I would scold the Japanese for being so powerful. The alien world is also so difficult to fight. I haven't read much of it, either because it's not well written, or I just feel a little uncomfortable. When I listen to a book, I want to stop and curse a few words.
Collection poster for supporting roles
Everyone can speak freely. If you have ideas, you can leave the name of the character, a brief appearance, habits, martial arts, anything. Write whatever comes to mind, and it will be adopted without any accidents. Currently there is one supporting actor: Quanzhen Sect: "Mijin Taoist" Jiang Yan. Characteristics: It is difficult to choose small things, and while struggling with big things, you have already taken action and made a choice.
Already voted for the monthly vote, please update quickly, I hope you won't always cause trouble for the protagonist.
It's a new day, where's the author's update!
I really enjoyed reading it, looking forward to the next book