CS: I Am Only Sixteen, Yet You Want This Old Gamer to Make a Comeback?

🦌, It will make your marksmanship deformed and your reaction slow. Remember 🦌 don't play on the ladder, and don't let your teammates fighting alongside you be at your weakest.

The God of CS will remember everyone's efforts to reach the top of S.

21 Stockholm has no background stickers, so the team logo is easy to get. Just find a helmet-like team logo and dim it. Signature concept: First of all, Young is a sniper, so he extended the y and added a sniper scope, and the lengthened tail of the g combined into the crosshair shape of the sniper rifle scope. Oun is combined into a more playful expression, showing the youthful vitality of this young man. Finally, the team logo background is provided and you can also make your own signature. Updated a version that will definitely not be adopted by V agency hhh Although I no longer go to mouz, as the saying goes, if you have done it, how can you not release it.

Author, since you deleted my friendly comments before, I won't act anymore. Your gl outline is a failure among failures. Template niche teammates are not even as good as self-created characters cncs; your language and expression descriptions are all thought to be humorous, and foreign players' own cousins ​​often come up with Internet slang such as "can't stand it anymore"; your daily plot is that you only know how to steal and make awkward things. Where do you play a buffoon in a formulaic live broadcast and then barrage people around you to laugh? You think it's humorous?

When will you be No. 1 On the new book list? You deserve it.

6657， There are three reasons. First, the growth trajectory of the protagonist is too bad. He is a talented boy, and his talent is nothing when he debuts. However, the subsequent training in awareness, props, body skills, etc. Are all taken care of by a mouz youth training. It has a feeling of being invincible in the world for three days. Everyone knows that he is strong, but he is so strong that it is inexplicable, giving people no sense of involvement. On the other hand, in the North, there are clear explanations and vivid and profound descriptions of the exercises such as previewing, sweeping, mixing smoke, and practicing props. There is even a map for practicing body skills. Everyone knows where he is strong and can understand why he kills indiscriminately, and it can be immersed in his experience, so it is cool. Second, daily life. The daily routine of this book is okay in the early stage, but becomes more and more disastrous in the middle stage. The formulaic passerby game with a 5e gift carriage convoy to increase the points is nothing new. Moreover, this also touches on the first point mentioned. The protagonist is killed by everyone inexplicably. Is this what I want to see? I want to watch Killing. Why don't I watch the 24 Cato donk collection? Similarly, looking back at the North, there are daily conflicts with NIKO Gym, which improves the life of the family (by the way, the part where Xu Nanfang opened an Internet cafe was really good, there was a series of connections and care, and a good combination of the family's life and the e-sports theme of the book), even if it is a p l is not "a top-notch consciousness-free stand-up gun that shoots the head with one shot", but contains a lot of interesting interactions, such as using the "wall-hanging" technique that cannot be used in the game in the passerby game. It is fun and reminds the V club to fix bugs, such as encountering apex and zywoo in the passerby game. Simple foreshadows the little bee coming later. Third, competition. Everyone who has watched the game knows that it is impossible for someone as strong as Dong Zai to kill three or four in every round. It is common for a breakthrough to be replaced or even not hit, and there are many times when the dog hole is accidentally touched. What about the protagonist? This kind of description is almost impossible to see. They are all "excellent position selection, no solution to throw the gun, pistol headshot, win the endgame" and other words that are neither ornamental nor technical. What's even more difficult is the protagonist's teammates. The whole bo3 has barely seen a few performances. The players are not very well-known and popular. They basically rely on the protagonist to lead the team with a single core to win. Let me put it bluntly, you might as well have written down g2 in the first place. Shrimp and sea cucumber are much better than this team in terms of popularity, strength, and fun. To put it simply, the protagonist is written as a sniper version of Donk, with higher values ​​than him, more friendly teammates on the side of the road, and more hip team daily routine (Green Dragon vlog is really a dynasty, right). If you want to be a general's wife, then you should first marry a lieutenant and stay with him on the border, in the desert, and in the forest for twenty years. Similarly, if you want to write about a talented boy Donk, then you should start from the time when he entered the Green Dragon Youth Training at the age of 14 and began to grow and struggle, not from the 24th Cato. The crux is very simple. After the major, I was rushed by readers and couldn't bear to change the outline. I started to fill in the values ​​​​without thinking. Now that it's fine, the values ​​​​have collapsed. Is it difficult to accept that young is not as good as donk? Is it a bad protagonist to have less than 4000h and not be able to hit 17000? If the characters in the novel cannot compare to reality for a short period of time, will it be impossible to continue writing? There is nothing wrong with online literature authors catering to the needs of readers, but you must understand what you are writing and what you should not give up. Having said so much, this book is actually not that unbearable and can still be read. One family member said that I wrote these more than a thousand words simply because I couldn't bear to watch the game between the two great teams.

I have been following updates before, but now I feel that there is nothing to see. Let alone benchmarking donk, this is the level of being kicked to death by donk.

No, with Yang Shen's current level, why should he be Donk's old enemy? Can you feel donk's leg hair? 😵

If Donk beats Faze, he will be MVP plus top 1, he is only 17 years old! Novel would dare to be written like this. A smart commander, a sniper good at m4, a tool man who can shoot guns, and a Zong who can't stand up most of the time. Lao Lu led these four teammates to the finals, making him a peerless prison king.

Author, should you reflect on this? You are 17 years old, major + MVP + TOP1, and the protagonist in your novel is also the top talent, and then you have a system that requires you to control even the top eight of a major. Can the novel have the flavor of a novel?