CS: I'm Only 16 Years Old, and You Want Me to Counterattack All the Time?

6657， There are three reasons. First, the growth trajectory of the protagonist is too bad. He is a talented boy, and his talent is nothing when he debuts. However, the subsequent training in awareness, props, body skills, etc. Are all taken care of by a mouz youth training. It has a feeling of being invincible in the world for three days. Everyone knows that he is strong, but he is so strong that it is inexplicable, giving people no sense of involvement. On the other hand, in the North, there are clear explanations and vivid and profound descriptions of the exercises such as previewing, sweeping, mixing smoke, and practicing props. There is even a map for practicing body skills. Everyone knows where he is strong and can understand why he kills indiscriminately, and it can be immersed in his experience, so it is cool. Second, daily life. The daily routine of this book is okay in the early stage, but becomes more and more disastrous in the middle stage. The formulaic passerby game with a 5e gift carriage convoy to increase the points is nothing new. Moreover, this also touches on the first point mentioned. The protagonist is killed by everyone inexplicably. Is this what I want to see? I want to watch Killing. Why don't I watch the 24 Cato donk collection? Similarly, looking back at the North, there are daily conflicts with NIKO Gym, which improves the life of the family (by the way, the part where Xu Nanfang opened an Internet cafe was really good, there was a series of connections and care, and a good combination of the family's life and the e-sports theme of the book), even if it is a p l is not "a top-notch consciousness-free stand-up gun that shoots the head with one shot", but contains a lot of interesting interactions, such as using the "wall-hanging" technique that cannot be used in the game in the passerby game. It is fun and reminds the V club to fix bugs, such as encountering apex and zywoo in the passerby game. Simple foreshadows the little bee coming later. Third, competition. Everyone who has watched the game knows that it is impossible for someone as strong as Dong Zai to kill three or four in every round. It is common for a breakthrough to be replaced or even not hit, and there are many times when the dog hole is accidentally touched. What about the protagonist? This kind of description is almost impossible to see. They are all "excellent position selection, no solution to throw the gun, pistol headshot, win the endgame" and other words that are neither ornamental nor technical. What's even more difficult is the protagonist's teammates. The whole bo3 has barely seen a few performances. The players are not very well-known and popular. They basically rely on the protagonist to lead the team with a single core to win. Let me put it bluntly, you might as well have written down g2 in the first place. Shrimp and sea cucumber are much better than this team in terms of popularity, strength, and fun. To put it simply, the protagonist is written as a sniper version of Donk, with higher values ​​than him, more friendly teammates on the side of the road, and more hip team daily routine (Green Dragon vlog is really a dynasty, right). If you want to be a general's wife, then you should first marry a lieutenant and stay with him on the border, in the desert, and in the forest for twenty years. Similarly, if you want to write about a talented boy Donk, then you should start from the time when he entered the Green Dragon Youth Training at the age of 14 and began to grow and struggle, not from the 24th Cato. The crux is very simple. After the major, I was rushed by readers and couldn't bear to change the outline. I started to fill in the values ​​​​without thinking. Now that it's fine, the values ​​​​have collapsed. Is it difficult to accept that young is not as good as donk? Is it a bad protagonist to have less than 4000h and not be able to hit 17000? If the characters in the novel cannot compare to reality for a short period of time, will it be impossible to continue writing? There is nothing wrong with online literature authors catering to the needs of readers, but you must understand what you are writing and what you should not give up. Having said so much, this book is actually not that unbearable and can still be read. One family member said that I wrote these more than a thousand words simply because I couldn't bear to watch the game between the two great teams.

Can I write about China next time? After reading it, I feel like it is not the ultimate weapon of CNCS.

I feel that this is a little closer to the original one. Uemoto is the protagonist who listens to the advice and works hard (although it has become a little farther away from the initial setting and turned into a genius who listens to the advice). I hope this book is more pure. A genius is a genius. There is no need to be nondescript, just like donk who confused everyone when he debuted.

Alas, goblin, alas, north, alas, 3000 words

It looks good, I'll give it to you at the end of the month too

Hurry up and update

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🦌, It will make your marksmanship deformed and your reaction slow. Remember 🦌 don't play on the ladder, and don't let your teammates fighting alongside you be at your weakest.

The God of CS will remember everyone's efforts to reach the top of S.

21 Stockholm has no background stickers, so the team logo is easy to get. Just find a helmet-like team logo and dim it. Signature concept: First of all, Young is a sniper, so he extended the y and added a sniper scope, and the lengthened tail of the g combined into the crosshair shape of the sniper rifle scope. Oun is combined into a more playful expression, showing the youthful vitality of this young man. Finally, the team logo background is provided and you can also make your own signature. Updated a version that will definitely not be adopted by V agency hhh Although I no longer go to mouz, as the saying goes, if you have done it, how can you not release it.

Author, since you deleted my friendly comments before, I won't act anymore. Your gl outline is a failure among failures. Template niche teammates are not even as good as self-created characters cncs; your language and expression descriptions are all thought to be humorous, and foreign players' own cousins ​​often come up with Internet slang such as "can't stand it anymore"; your daily plot is that you only know how to steal and make awkward things. Where do you play a buffoon in a formulaic live broadcast and then barrage people around you to laugh? You think it's humorous?

When will you be No. 1 On the new book list? You deserve it.

I have been following updates before, but now I feel that there is nothing to see. Let alone benchmarking donk, this is the level of being kicked to death by donk.

No, with Yang Shen's current level, why should he be Donk's old enemy? Can you feel donk's leg hair? 😵

If Donk beats Faze, he will be MVP plus top 1, he is only 17 years old! Novel would dare to be written like this. A smart commander, a sniper good at m4, a tool man who can shoot guns, and a Zong who can't stand up most of the time. Lao Lu led these four teammates to the finals, making him a peerless prison king.

Author, should you reflect on this? You are 17 years old, major + MVP + TOP1, and the protagonist in your novel is also the top talent, and then you have a system that requires you to control even the top eight of a major. Can the novel have the flavor of a novel?

I will help you think about the outline of the next book. A talented boy who refused to fake matches, and then was taken away by the palace, turned to European CS, won the championship with a certain team, named the brat in the top 20 award ceremony or the championship speech, and finally rebuilt CNCS after the CNCS cleared up the environment.

Donk debuted less than a year ago, and at the age of 17, he achieved the highest rifle rating in CS2 so far. At the age of 17, he led the second-tier team to win the major. At the age of 17, he was the number one shooter in the world. At the age of 17, he was ranked in the top 1. It was so unreasonable.

Why are you competing with Donk? Someone else won the championship at the age of 17, but you are still trying to figure it out in the team at the age of 17. Can you do it? Is it useful to touch so many timings? If you do anything directly, you'll be seconds when you see someone. If you can't be seconds, it's still too weak.

It feels like the protagonist is so strong that he will die if he is kicked by a donkey's leg 😰

I won't watch it without donk being awesome. I saw someone mentioning whether the main character keeps winning. Damn it, does it have anything to do with winning? At most, the plot is not well written. It's just not as hearty as the previous one, and it doesn't have as interesting jokes as before. If you can win, you have to lose. I can only say that there is no hard work. The biggest problem between this book and the previous one is the dialogue. Well, the tone of the dialogue is too obvious in Chinese style. This has always been the author's weakness.

Hope to see Jiang Yang live every hour during the live broadcast

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha abstraction, the author is still trying to balance the fighting power, I suggest you directly follow the next book

Ordinary authors imagine the talent of professional players, just like old farmers imagine that emperors hoe the ground with golden hoes. You use system cheats to level up and enter the professional arena, which is like a huge cheat. As a result, in reality, people will reach their peak after one year of debut and reach the top. Compared with real-life novels, it is like a mess. If you meet someone, you will be kicked to death😃

Byd, fortunately you finished early, otherwise Shu Kebai broke the news and everyone who wrote that CNCS and Sun Baodi formed a team would be thundered.

I feel like I can write a CNCS book. Now the firepower is enough. The protagonist + Xiaoju feel that they can reach the top 8 regulars in the competition.

Failure is normal in e-sports. I think readers can accept troughs and failures, but the key point is that after failure, the bond of teammates, active adjustments, trial and error, rather than blind transfers and an invincible winning streak. Difficulties encountered during a schedule, games between opponents who sympathize with each other, encouragement from fans and cheering from the team during low points. I feel like I can write about a lot of things. E-sports is not just about winning, but also about facing failure and showing your own style when you are at a low point! You can also try to write some key scores in the third person (from the perspective of the fans) to understand the hearts of the fans and the team who are on the same line. Fans are also disappointed when they are at a low point, and they are also praying when they are nervous. These can increase the tension of the content. E-sports is not just a competition, and a team is more than just five people competing. I feel that there are many things that can be written about, so why not write about them? The interactions with fans, the wishes of a certain big brother, there are really many things to write about! I have read a lot of e-sports articles from Qidian. There are many games. Why do all the authors have a winning streak or blindly break up teams? Can't readers accept failure? Everyone can accept it, but you have to write about the mutual understanding and active struggle of a team after failure! For another example, an old captain is your guide. This captain retired but brought you out. It is difficult to appease his feelings and the fans' opinions. These do not necessarily have to be completed, but you have to write out these emotions! If I really can't write it, I will fart, and if I really write it, I can't even imagine how awesome this book is!

It's right not to write cncs, it's fucked up

The author's outline is completely impossible, because anyone can collapse and anyone can be a ghost.

I was confused when I opened Douyin when I got home today. I only found out the whole story after looking at the slices. I didn't expect that "the longest river in cncs" would be cut off due to something like this. I was a fan of RA for a while during the Shanghai Major. I can only say that things are unpredictable. Seeing those pieces of evidence, I felt that if Sun didn't come up with very crucial evidence or make some other reversal, the game might not be overturned. Sun is basically out of control on the Internet. It's just that for something like the Internet, with a screen on it, no one knows what the final outcome will be. Let's let the bullets fly for a while.