The First Iron Rice Bowl in Jin Dynasty

First of all, what makes me most uncomfortable is the author's tone of voice. No matter what the characters say, most of them have to be added. This makes the originally outstanding villain character particularly obvious, and the heroine also appears to be particularly useless. At present, I want to write a heroine, but there are some inexplicable characters in the article because the heroine is a girl and starts to bully the heroine at a young age. There is no way to write in a Machiavellian way, which makes all kinds of villains smart. The quotient is also low. The female protagonist is always a lone wolf and solves the problem personally. And no matter how good the female lead is, she is inexplicably looked down upon just because she is a woman. Although she will fight back in the end, it is not that good at all. I hope the author arranges the plot reasonably and does not forcefully reduce the intelligence of the character. The fact is that everyone will be afraid of strong people and want to be friends. No one is stupid enough to think that he can defeat the boss, okay? Secondly, this is a heroine novel. In ancient times, it was reasonable to write that the heroine was restrained. But as the heroine's strength improves, the heroine's family and supporting characters should show respect for the heroine within a reasonable range. This is human nature, but there is no such thing in the article. Then why does the heroine become stronger? In order to become more cowardly? The development of the plot at the beginning of the article was okay, but in the later stages, it seems that there is still no change. The villains are all doing well. The heroine, no matter how powerful she is, has to go through hardships before she gets better. Reasonable development is right, but the unchanged plot is a bit bloody. I hope the author can portray the characters more deeply and arrange the plot properly.

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Be careful, the heroine has a mental problem and discovered a spiritual stone mine. Originally, there was only one mortal who had been guarding it for who knows how many years, and the mortal didn't know what it was. Instead of digging it secretly, she had to negotiate cooperation with a few mortals. Not only did she wonder what this was, I told people the things, and they had to divide them into four levels to become monks. As a result, these mortals opened their mouths and talked about it, and other immortal cultivators knew about it. This is the first time I have seen the protagonist of a novel being so stupid. Do you dare to think that this is an operation that a modern person can do after time travel? I gave it up, I'm afraid I'll be fooled to death by the heroine if I keep reading.

What impressed me most about this article was its consistency in terms of "characters" and "situations" that never failed from beginning to end. From the beginning, the protagonist's Nascent Soul has "closed eyes". This is not a simple appearance setting, but a symbol throughout the entire text: he always lives in his own world, living in his own set of outlook on life and values. He does not pay attention to the outside world and is not easily influenced by the outside world. Many times, he is "invisible" to the people and things around him. This "closed eyes" state is not only his protective shell, but also his biggest shackles. Because of this, he has been unable to break through since Yuanying. On the one hand, his "eyes" are closed, and his vision is firmly framed by his cognitive boundaries; on the other hand, there is always a "black flame" in his heart. This black flame is his fear, his instinctive rejection of death and danger, and also his overly rational and overly calculating self-protection mechanism. He was unable to ignite the "white flame" not because he was incapable, but because he was unwilling and afraid to truly "see" the world. He is used to treating everything with his own very rational cognition, and is used to using his own principles and logic to weigh all choices. He is afraid of facing death and danger, so he will instinctively choose the safest, most reasonable, and most "cost-effective" path. He sometimes has a spirit of dedication, but it is often on the premise that it does not violate his "fairness" principle, rather than a truly unconditional and self-burning contribution. More importantly, he always carries with him the set of values ​​formed on the earth. After arriving in another world, he still judges and acts according to the moral standards and logic of dealing with things on earth. This is not a mistake in itself. In the eyes of many readers, it will even make him appear more "sober" and more "bottom-line". But the problem lies precisely here: he is always a "spectator with an earthly perspective", rather than a participant who truly integrates into the new world and breathes with this world. What he lacks is not ability, but "the power to change the people around him." He can protect himself in danger, remain rational in conflicts, and stick to his own principles when making choices, but he rarely truly affects others, leads others, and saves others. It's more like he is continuing to live his life on earth in a different world, rather than learning to use new ways to face death, sacrifice, and things he once didn't want to touch in a new world. This is why I feel that the most critical point in this article is not when he will upgrade, but when his Nascent Soul can truly "open its eyes." When he is willing to let go of his closed rational self, is willing to face his own fears, is willing to face death and danger, is willing to seriously look at the world, listen to other people's voices, and understand the rules and emotions that are completely different from those on the earth, then the black flame that has been entrenched in his heart can be illuminated, and the white flame that has been slow to burn can truly burn. And this is why I like this article: It always maintains a high degree of consistency in the depiction of situations and characters. Whether it is his hesitation and retreat in life-and-death moments, his calmness of "measure first, then act" when others ask for help, or his stubbornness in adhering to the rules of the earth in another world, these seemingly scattered details are actually constantly strengthening the same core setting - his "closed eyes", his black flames, and his overly rational self-protection. This kind of writing method that echoes back and forth and has internal logic and self-consistency allows the character to not suddenly change based on "the author's words", but to slowly expose his limitations, his fears, and his contradictions as the long plot progresses. Readers can also gradually understand in this slow accumulation: why he has been unable to break through, why he is always one step behind, and why he seems to be very strong, but always gives people the feeling of "not really alive". This article does not use exaggerated plots to forcefully create a sense of excitement, but uses this very restrained but patient characterization to make readers suddenly realize at a certain moment: Ah, it turns out that he has kept his eyes closed. It turns out that the black flame in his heart has never been truly faced. It turns out that every hesitation, every retreat, every "rational choice" he made pushed him towards a more closed self. It is precisely because of this unity from setting to plot, from external behavior to inner world that this article, in my mind, is not just a simple story about leveling up and killing monsters, but a growth story about "how people face their own fears", "how to get out of their own world" and "how to learn to really burn once". So, I will say: I like this article because it is consistent in the situation and characterization from beginning to end; And I look forward to this article because I want to see - what a different person he will become when his Nascent Soul finally opens his eyes.

After reading more than 200 chapters, I thought the heroine had stepped on a trap and slowly grown up, but in the end... She was still so naive. In the early stages, we can indeed see that she was very brave in resisting other people's influence on her thoughts, but after more than 200 chapters, her resistance became other people's suggestions and she couldn't listen to them at all. The mountain spirit (who has the inheritance) said that just one person's practice cannot make him the strongest. She was not worried at all when he heard it as a joke. Many people later hinted to her intentionally or unintentionally that she should not develop her own power alone. She did not think at all about the feasibility of developing her power. It seemed that just hearing the words "Don't do it, do it" stimulated her resistance. In order to suppress the black flame and find a young monk who can ignite the white flame, she was told that she didn't believe in herself, so she couldn't ignite her white flame. She reacted very angry and turned around and left, saying that the young monk was wrong. Her brother told her that no matter how powerful she was, there would always be things she couldn't do, and that when she climbed high, she should look at the people below and find more helpers. She didn't understand some of her brother's good intentions, and felt that her brother was threatening her and asked her to use her resources to take care of and help the people in the clan, otherwise the clan would not help her if she asked for help in the future. Then she got upset and said that her brother was fake and hypocritical... After seeing this, I suddenly didn't want to continue reading. The heroine's family members were slowly getting better for whatever reason, but the heroine seemed to be stuck, stubborn and unable to listen to suggestions. Also, I knew the significance of the existence of the holy land and didn't want to be responsible, so I didn't go to the secret place to light the incense. However, I lit the incense and found the secret place. I was responsible and unhappy. The same goes for Lingguang Palace. If you want to be a hands-off shopkeeper, do you have to find a reliable person to look after you first? ? A good hand of cards is played badly, but you still keep to yourself without asking for help. Now I feel a little bit sick from the heroine 😫 It's a pity that such a different cultivation

As title. . . . In a world where personal power is paramount, strength is everything. When the heroine's strength has increased, she should not ask others to be included in the series. If she can practice level 6 elixirs or even higher, she should be brave enough to go to people and tell people that she can practice it. She is also afraid that she will not get an iron job. Looking at the title and name at the back, she will not be kept behind. Don't let the heroine jump out, and try her best to let her hang around in the service room and change the male channel. With this buff, I went to a large pharmacy to gain some experience as a handyman in the early stage, and then I stopped eating beef. I was a teenage 6th-level alchemist and a martial artist. Unless the court was so mediocre that it declined, I could not imagine the possibility of not investing. Looking at the chapter titles of more than 80 chapters, they are still in the handyman room. Is this book going to demote all the staff, just not reporting the heroine's situation, and then make an appointment to practice in the name of it? Because women in the family do not invest, they have to mess around to reflect the plot of a non-military feudal world. .

What does this introduction mean? Does it mean that after cultivating immortals, you will still eat the royal food and roam around in the palace?

Just like this humble family, they are also a disgusting family. Why are readers so disgusted? 😌 Others rely on plot, but this author does the opposite and relies on being scolded to gain popularity 👍👍👍👍

On the surface, this book is a fantasy cultivation novel, but at its core it is a otaku essay. The author has given Hua Changxi so many golden fingers, but Hua Changxi only cares about fighting with the Hua family and running around, paying no attention to the management and development of the 100,000 Suzaku Army. She does not know the battle formation and is still enjoying herself. From now on, Hua Changxi and the Suzaku Army will only die when facing the opponent's war formation! !

Ever since Chang Xi couldn't light up the white flame, and the old monk said it was because she "didn't take the initiative to do good", people around her (including those who were friendly to her) always said that she "didn't understand the ways of the world". They believed that Chang Xi lacked spiritual practice, was possessed by anger, could not see her own heart clearly, and could not find her own bottom line. But if you think about it carefully, is this true? 🤔 First of all, Changxi's wrath usually occurs when she encounters injustice. The aggression she displays is the most valuable quality of a revolutionary. She has the power to fight back against evil and the sense of responsibility to uphold justice. Secondly, can she really not see her own heart clearly? The author has long said that all Chang Xi wants is to live freely! If she wants to live freely, she must overthrow the powerful and establish a system that she agrees with. She may be passive, but she is actively establishing this new rule. This system is her bottom line. And if Chang Xi really listens to those people - she will become a spiritual recovery tool who is good at sophistication in feudal society, sacrifices herself to help others, and can sit back and watch unfair persecution but remain calm. She was brainwashed and assimilated by this decadent idea, and lost her most important revolutionary character. 😰 Chang Xi does lack experience, but it is by no means the experience to adapt to the rules of the human society game that is about to be eliminated by the general environment. What she lacks is to stick to her own ideas in these benign or malicious environments, resist all pressure, and establish a world of new rules - a world of freedom and equality, breaking of privileges, sharing of knowledge, protecting the weak, and the flow of resources to value creators. The above is my speculation about the development of the storyline. I think the author only writes the comments and words of others to express the public opinion environment Chang Xi is in, and to show that she can still persist in herself despite being constantly brainwashed. 😅 But in these two chapters, Chang Xi was actually persuaded by Jing's sophistry of "If a dog bites you, do you have to bite it back?"! He actually reflected that he would become the same person as Liang Guogong! Go to the same people! 😆How can a person who beats dogs, punishes evil, and a just person be reduced to being compared with a mad dog and a person who does evil? ! Dogs are crazy when they bite people, and they experience the pleasure of biting. People hit dogs purely to protect themselves and avoid harm! Buddhism also says that you can kill one evil person to save many. Chang Xi didn't want to kill the innocent maids of Duke Liang's mansion, so why did she become the same as Duke Liang? To become a person like Duke Liang, you have to take action against innocent people. Besides servants and servants, how many innocent people are there in Duke Liang's house? The relatives of Duke Liang are the biggest beneficiaries of his power, and they are not innocent in the first place! And those who are obviously capable, but only watch from the sidelines as Liang Guogong oppresses the Hua family without reaching out, and say that only Chang Xi can do this, and only after Chang Xi does it can he see his own heart clearly (this is really disgusting and hypocritical), they are the accomplices of evil! ! ! 😡 I can't figure out the author's writing intention. Do you really want Chang Xi to listen to those people and go to the world of feudal society to refine his heart? Or should she waver and insist on being herself? I have been inexplicably struggling with this all day 🥺. As the story progresses, Chang Xi's stubbornness, lack of smoothness, and imperfection make her different from most novel protagonists with high emotional intelligence. They are her most unique charm and the most critical reason why she becomes a reformer. If she really compromised, the writing would be ruined. . .

There is obviously a better choice. Find a doctor to learn medicine. Once you learn it, you can cure diseases and save people. If you can make money, you can get out of the family. If you don't understand, you have to seek punishment. Improvement of force is the right solution. Go and collect the medicine yourself. If you can't get any precious medicine, it will be like wearing a footband.

The author's vision is related to the height of the characters. These two chapters make me think that the author should be more suitable for writing otaku fighting stories. The character Gu Xing is not outstanding in writing. In the early stage, it made people think that he is not afraid of the imperial power. It hasn't been established yet. Her subordinates don't know what she is up to, and her parents don't want to know her true identity. She is wearing the skin of a cultivator and is actually a otaku? She is already at the highest point and is about to be promoted. There is really no need to waste words on describing everyone's contempt for the heroine. After all, they are not at the same level. Their strength will speak for themselves. Let's start fighting monsters. As soon as a new stage is released, everyone's attitude towards the heroine will be copied and pasted again. The reading experience is really bad.

The heroine's personality is really unpleasant! There is no sense of being two people in two lives at all

Finally I know something is wrong. The characters in the last two books written by Hua Bi are a bit awkward, or the contradictions are written in a large space. It seems a bit awkward and does not solve the problem. It stays for a long time and seems to be deliberately calculating. Life should not be like this. Free and easy and peaceful have been lost. I have read Wei and Jin Dynasty Fans and Peasants repeatedly. The heroine of the family is a bit naughty; the heroine in the Wei and Jin Dynasties is a bit naughty, but she is generous, free and easy, has conflicting character relationships, and is also warm. Women are very good at dealing with problems; (most of the characters of Xiaofunu are peaceful and warm, and the viewers feel very comfortable); the story of the painting brush is well written, but because of the conflict I left it there without taking the initiative to solve it, which seemed uncomfortable. The length of the article seemed deliberately calculated. It made other people's writing a bit intellectual, and the characters were flat and not full of life. However, the stories written by Paintbrush are novel and attractive, with advantages and disadvantages. I hope the stories written by Paintbrush will get better and better. Come on, personal opinion See for reference only 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹. Although I don't know why the brush broke, many people still like the stories you wrote. I hope you can continue to write. Everyone is growing.

It is indeed very witty. It is the whole supporting cast but the supporting characters are also witty. In order to fit in with the plot, alas, my dear, in fact, you have a good imagination, but the shaping of many plots does not conform to the objective development law of the situation, so it seems very awkward. I think you should read the book "The Evil Girl Cultivates Immortality, and the Whole Clan Sacrifice to Heaven" for possible inspiration.

This author's negative review is really the truth. I ask why, because I read it.

The author writes well, don't read bad reviews, just write according to your own plan. The author's writing is good, and the heroine's psychological journey is very detailed and very real. The unhelpful low-level people in real life are those who don't know many things that others think are common sense and do not understand human accidents. I look forward to the author's subsequent development, come on 👏

The story is very exciting. I read more than 400 chapters in one go, but it was not enough. Unlike other Shui novels, the heroine has a perfect personality and suddenly becomes very powerful, defeating everyone. This book actually creates an imperfect heroine. In the process of cultivating immortality, not only does her strength increase, but her state of mind also improves, and she cultivates her body and mind. The magic lamp with black and white flames feels a bit like Tai Chi, with the balance of yin and yang. I am looking forward to the use of this magic weapon. As for the sophistication of people, I feel that the heroine is also growing up. Maybe some people think that the heroine written by the author is too high in strength and is still limited. But I think this is one of the highlights of this book. In life, it is impossible to fight alone, and it is impossible to rely on force for everything. Throughout ancient times and modern times, those in power are generally chess players, rather than people who rely on force to suppress everything. Some of the doubts other characters in the book have about the heroine are also from the perspective of being a ruler. But slowly, you can find that the heroine is also thinking and changing. How to use the resources around you instead of working alone all the time. I also like some of the settings in the article. Regarding the author's writing style, I feel it is better than before, and it is very immersive to read. Hope, hope, the author will write more!

I saw this book recommended on other platforms. After reading it, I can only say that the author is really great, so I came here specifically to tell those who have been persuaded to quit. This book is really good, very good, very good. Actually, I read a few chapters of this book more than half a year ago, but at that time I couldn't see the essence of the book, and I couldn't calm down to understand the growth of the protagonist. I didn't feel comfortable seeing the protagonist's awkward temperament, so I gave up. But after such a long time, I encountered some things, read some books, and my mood changed a lot. When I re-read this book, I found a difference. What I saw was not the protagonist's awkward temperament, the unsatisfactory plot, and the repetitive storyline. These are just the surface. The protagonist I saw was like Countless past selves, her awkward temperament, the self that didn't want to open her eyes to see the world, the self that put herself in a box, the self that was pushed away, the self that was repeatedly tested by repeated difficulties, thought that she was living a sober life, but in fact this was all her own wishful thinking, and she was just using her limited knowledge to shape the world she thought she had. Seeing that the protagonist has gone through so many hardships and been reminded by so many people, he still lives in his own world and does not want to open his eyes. I seemed to see myself, and I was reminded by my classmates and friends that there was a barrier between me and me, that they couldn't see the real me, and that I lived too "noble". I didn't think there was anything wrong at the time, and I was even complacent, thinking that I was living a more sober life than others, but in fact I was just a big fool. Seeing that the protagonist clearly has resources and capabilities, but does not convert them into her own energy, she does not want to "complicit" with others or "fight for power". I used to think so too, but these actions are just "small kindnesses". If a kind-hearted and capable person (the protagonist) does not take responsibility and puts the responsibility on those who only play power games, then I can't imagine how bad the world will be. The protagonist in the real world may live better this way, but in a world where spiritual energy is revived, personal strength can be "one against ten thousand", and people like the protagonist can be braver. Rights themselves are not dirty. Rights and responsibilities are integrated, and if we keep them in our hearts, this world will be clearer. So this book can only be classified into the fantasy category. In other categories, it would be difficult for the protagonist to survive to the end (those who initiate changes often end badly, such as Shang Yang and Zhu Fuyan), and will become victims of the power game and become martyrs. The protagonist has gone from being ignorant to being aware of the situation now. The shell she has put on herself has cracks. She is slowly awakening from a tool person driven by the plot. Isn't my life also developing according to a "script"? When I was born, my horoscopes and my birth family have already determined my personality, plot, and future development. If I can't "see myself" and don't break free from these shackles, I will just be an NPC (like a programmed robot), living in confusion. The human heart is like a pearl, originally dust-free, but now covered with dust. It is also like a rusty knife. If you want the blade to be bright, you must polish it. The difficulties and hardships in life are all whetstones. Every time you polish it, the blade will become brighter. It's a bit like hitting a stick and giving a sweet date, but not everyone can receive the sweet date. We must also avoid "too strong and easy to break", which requires us to be as good as water. Cultivation of the mind, mentioned many times in this article, I think is very crucial. Cultivation of the mind can help you see yourself, and it can help you get rid of the script, from ignorance and hindsight to foresight. This book is not just a story. To me, it is a story about a person breaking away from the script and awakening. Let me write this for now. There is also some content about centering, but I am also in the process of comprehending it myself. I can't explain it clearly, so I won't mention it. I have to mention it again. This book is really well written. It seems to be a story about upgrading and fighting monsters, but it is not an allusion to the reality of me. I know that everyone has different views on this book due to different experiences and perceptions, but please leave a mark on this book after reading my review. If you see it again one day, you can open it again and take a look. I hope that every reader can see his own mind as clearly as the protagonist, live soberly, and write his own life. This is the second time Big Data has recommended this book to me. The first time I only read a few chapters. At that time, I only saw a process of upgrading and fighting monsters that was not a cool article. I thought the routine was old-fashioned and I didn't like the protagonist's character, so I gave up. But the second time I watched it, I always thought of myself. Many people here have my shadow, the "arrogant", arrogant, selfish, awkward, unwilling to take responsibility, and often complained about me. Fortunately, I can now be aware of my own emotions. Although I don't have the consciousness of the protagonist, I believe that if I stick to it, I will be rewarded and it will be better than before. This is my first time to write a long review. My writing is not good, please forgive me 😌 Don't scold me, you must scold me, then you are right.

The overall story structure is good, and the protagonist doesn't have to be perfect to see the conflict and substance. This article has the most votes for me for a few reasons. 1. Can discover the structure of the world and the overall view 2. The story line and stance of each character are relatively full 3. The description and characterization are more in line with the psychological structure of each character

It looks weird, and it feels like everything the heroine encounters is like thunder and raindrops, and she doesn't see the price paid by the person who made the mistake.

The writing is not as good as before. If I try to squeeze in the word count, I will give up. Hey~

I feel outrageous when I read these chapters about cultivating the Yuanying. The Yuanying is a divine body that has been cultivated. The body that is cultivated by oneself has the final say. How can it have independent consciousness.

Damn, there are fewer and fewer updates every day. Does the author just need to update every day? Isn't there a word count requirement?

Dear author, please be a human being! Originally, Chang Xi had already opened the mourning platform, but he insisted on going back and said that Chang Xi would not be allowed to open the mourning platform. Then I made an island and flew for more than ten chapters. Are we going to do a Star Wars or something? Everyone comes here to read stories and interesting articles, not to make up for the word count.

I want to give up. With this update speed, I don't plan to make a living.

I have been following this book and I like it very much, because I think this is a very deep fairy tale novel. Especially the last dozen or so chapters have been well written, especially the part about the Way of Yin, which is very profound and enjoyable. It not only makes Chang Xi reflect on it, but also makes me, the reader, reflect. I am also particularly looking forward to how Chang Xi will slowly step into the path of Yang, and I am looking forward to the author.

Now you have the courage to face your true self, right?

Everyone is here just to read cool articles. Come on, feel good. You are already so strong.