A Common Man from a Poor Family

After reading this book, I feel a little overwhelmed. First of all, this is a world of high martial arts. The level of martial arts should determine the allocation of resources. Therefore, from the royal family, nobles, army, to sects and gangs, they all need strong force to maintain their territory. Position, to protect the resources one fights for, so martial arts masters are very important. Even the high-ranking royal family has to support many masters. For example, the emperor has Jue Ding around him, the Queen Mother also has Gu masters around her, and there are many ninth-grade masters among the imperial guards. Under the supreme peak, the ninth grade is respected. There are five supreme peaks in a country, but in fact it is estimated that there are no more than ten. The royal family's secret power like the Samsara Palace can only cultivate false supreme peaks, so the ninth grade master is not a cabbage. Even if the Shi family has an ordinary status, it is still the tail of the nobles, and there are five ninth grades in the family (the heroine's supreme peak identity has not been exposed). This is rare and has endless potential. Shi Fuyin is not yet twenty years old and is already at the peak of the ninth level. From the time she saved Xiao Ziqing, it can be seen that if she continues to train in the future, there may not be a glimmer of hope for reaching the top. Even if not, her ninth level cultivation is enough for her to stand alone, just like Ye Mo, who is one of the secret agents, is only a ninth-level spy. Xiao Ziqing is An Guogong, but besides the Queen Mother, what else does he have? He went on a business trip, and all the masters around him were killed. If Shi Fuyin hadn't saved him, he would have been saved by Beauty. In fact, the Duke of Ming Dynasty chose him as his son-in-law just because he had a dukedom and had no parents. His foundation had actually been emptied out, probably by the Empress Dowager. But that's it, the Empress Dowager actually wanted Xiahou Huanyan and Shi Fuyin to marry him as his concubines. Why should the Ming government support a son-in-law with a noble concubine? Why should Shi Fuyin, a ninth-grade master, be a lowly person? They never thought about what would happen if Shi Fuyin forced her too much. , She can defeat them to the death, regardless of what the Duke of Ming Dynasty says, Xiao Ziqing and Xia Hou Huanyan are definitely dead. Of course, Shi Fuyin is gentle and may tolerate it, but why does the Empress Dowager think that a ninth-grade master, a master who can kill people like crazy, will endure it for the rest of his life. The pregnancy pill thing was definitely a failure. Even if Shi Fuyin found an excuse to run away from home, such as going to the south to find her elder brother and not coming back, it would be better than this. She would be humiliated by others. Of course, the princess dared to humiliate a ninth-grade master. It was also a big show. Did she have an eighth-grade herself? There were several ninth-grade master guards around her, but it was just humiliating herself, so forget it. The Empress Dowager also granted a marriage, and actually made Shi Fuyin swear to have three legitimate children, otherwise she would not be included in the family tree. Is she a wife or a concubine? If she can tolerate this, is she doing it in vain? In addition, no matter what you think in your heart, for martial arts masters, the royal family should win over them if they can, instead of openly humiliating them. Because Huang Chao was deposed in the palace examination and rebelled, no one was deposed in the future imperial examinations and palace examinations. Shouldn't we be wary of martial arts masters who can turn into powerful weapons in anger? From the empress dowager to the princess, they dared to humiliate like this. The emperor did not care about the contribution of the Shi family in presenting the secret book, and issued an edict to reprimand him. Is this nonsense? Have they forgotten that there is also the Yan Party, the world, political opponents, and enemy countries?

I think of this book again. It's really a pity. I started high and then went low. It was a really good start. As a result, the plot was really annoying after changing the map. I feel like once the map is changed, the heroine seems to have an invincible mentality. In the game world, she has to be a lady, pretending to be a pig every day, and forcibly creating conflicts, which is a bit disgusting. The force has to be hidden. Once the force is clearly revealed, nothing happens. The result is that it has to be hidden, and then it is very frustrating. Use a stratagem, yes, it is a stratagem, but it is awesome, poison the opponent, and then pay a high price to pretend to be a miracle doctor to detoxify it. When my mother was bullied, she would never explode in front of her. She would quietly break her legs. Why? Oh, to hide the force. Why hide it? Oh, be a lady. Also, my father refused to show off his skills, which made several uncles look down on him (I can't remember which one, it seems that there was an official in the Ministry of War or something), and then he straightened his back and became a soldier... All the relationships he had as a military household were gone? A life-saving grace? Bye bye to all those achievements? What promotion path does this soldier have? (It seems to be a small government official, I can't remember clearly, it's been too long since I abandoned the book) I still don't understand what the function of this setting is? Just to make the uncles look down on you and show your own backbone? It feels to me as if several capable brothers in the family look down upon him and do not give him a job. In order to show his integrity, he, who is highly capable and well-connected, finds a job as a street sweeper. She is really smart (like it) And what the heroine said in front of the emperor... (I can't remember clearly, anyway, I was confused when I saw it) There is also the male protagonist, the aura of the male protagonist is really invincible, he is a playboy, but he also seems to be awesome Klass, the heroine is also smart when she encounters the aura. If someone else wants his mink, then they are shameless. The male protagonist throws her a bottle to be filled with mink blood, and the female protagonist directly says: Wow, this male protagonist is a good person and only needs a bottle of blood. Despite your life, what kind of relationship do you have with the male protagonist? What skills does the male protagonist show? What remarkable identity does the male protagonist have that you discovered? (As for the bloody plot, I didn't watch it later) The male protagonist you know is just a good-looking playboy, but the aura of the male protagonist makes you a little suspicious that this is fake. Does a man who seems to be a playboy and good-for-nothing deserve such praise? Is the halo of wisdom really widening? Originally I expected it to come back to normal later on, but then I re-read it, but when I looked through the comment section, there were a lot more complaints, and I knew: Oh, it's even worse later on Oh, and there was another discovery that made me laugh to death: there were negative reviews in the comment section, indeed, like me. As a result, a netizen said: I seriously doubt that someone wrote a bad review. How can the comment section of such a good book be so vicious? Hahahahahaha, I laughed to death, there are indeed many negative reviews, but did that netizen find that there were only a few negative reviews, and the negative reviews were all well-founded? That netizen argued with me a few months ago (when I just gave up the book), saying that I had no social experience and could not understand the heroine's strategies. Hahahahahaha

I feel that the ratio of force in this book is not normal. Whether it is Jin Gulianghuang or other more rigorous high-level martial arts, the highest-end force is basically single digits. These are the pinnacles and cannot be killed by relying on large numbers of people, because they are enough to break through numerous sieges and escape gracefully. From the Imperial Power (Gaowu World) to the Jianghu, their influence is at the level of a nuclear bomb. Those who are lower than the highest level and can crush 99% of the others are only a dozen or twenty people. These people are already in a high status. Except for a few scattered people, they are already the leaders of a major force. The disputes over their interests are greater than others. Once there is a head-on conflict, it will represent a war between the two major forces. There are also direct disciples of peak-level masters at this level. They may be slightly lacking in force, but their status is similar to this level, and they are even leaders of forces at this level themselves. Further down, there are mainly the affiliated forces of the disciples of various forces and some sporadic scattered people in the Jianghu. Their military strength varies, but they are basically at the backbone level. They are also the ones who take action most often. Whether they are fighting for power or doing chivalry, they need to establish their own status and influence. There are hundreds or even thousands of these, depending on the world view, but they will never reach the level of a vehicle. Further down, is the foundation of the Chaotang and the Jianghu. Their military strength varies, but the strength of the people is overwhelming, and the ants can kill the elephant. At this time, the Chaotang's advantages are reflected. They have strong cohesion and broad support. Of course, if it is a world of high martial arts, their advantage is not enough to deter all opponents, but they are definitely the most powerful. To sum up, the distribution of force in this novel is obviously unbalanced. There are slightly more extreme peaks, which is normal, but the ninth-level masters seem to be everywhere, and they are all used as minions. It seems that you can hardly see the middle-level ones, and then there are the cannon fodder at the lower levels. When the heroine's father was a military household, he relied entirely on his luck, and there was basically no way to rise. Then just any dandy, noble princess, can come and go with martial arts masters at the drop of a hat. There is no sense of the threat of a knight using martial arts to violate the forbidden, and no sense of a world of high martial arts. Other high-level martial arts novels, the imperial court is orthodox, often teach martial arts, be lenient in entry and strict in exit, and select and train their own backbone martial arts from the bottom to compete with the sects of aristocratic families with high-end martial arts. However, this book does not see it at all. The teaching of martial arts seems to be limited to a very narrow range, more like a nine-grade Zhongzheng system.

The back is too ugly. . Fuyin's love story was so disgusting when I wrote it. . If there was some clever way to handle this marriage, I would give it a thumbs up, but it turned out that a martial arts master became a child-bearing machine in exchange for love. Besides, except for Xiao Ziqing who came to stop the marriage at the beginning, I didn't see him doing much for this marriage later. He was so indecisive that he almost had to go on a business trip because of his poor health. I didn't think this person was of any use. .

Is this male protagonist sick? He is extremely pretentious. He has a lot of troubles at home, and he seems to have a lot of power. As a result, he cannot control his family, and he has to be manipulated by his family. Are you still planning to cause trouble for the heroine? So disgusting

Even though he was so tough, not to mention his identity as the apprentice of the old man from Tianshan, he was a miracle doctor and a descendant of the Long family, and he was still a top-notch master. As long as she doesn't openly rebel against the emperor, what can others do to her even if they are just right?

If I want to scold the author, will she see it? I'm really fed up with this kind of update, the words are garbled and the lines are a mess. It's not written by the same person as the legitimate daughter of a humble family.

I have to say, it has to be the author. From the opening of the article on July 17, 2022 to August 22, 2023, it was exactly 402 days, and 402 chapters were updated. One chapter a day, which is really good. Author, you'd better not stop updating, otherwise you will be sorry for your own rhythm. Stopping updating is what you owe the readers! ! !

Although the relationship between the heroine and Mr. Fan Xiaohou is a bit regretful, I really think it's sweet from the moment they met to the time they parted! Later, after Mr. Fan got married, he still missed the heroine. Maybe it was a mistake, maybe it was regret, maybe it was a missed opportunity, maybe it was regret, maybe... I really want to know Mr. Fan's perspective. Can the author write a side story about Mr. Fan Xiaohou? I really, really want to see it! As a young reader, I can see that the author is really trying to guide the thoughts of female readers. Most of the heroines in the plot are rational, guiding readers to analyze the heroine's situation, find solutions, output values, bottom lines, and emotional processing. So I really want to know the author's thoughts on this story.        ，， It's really rare to find novels with this kind of input. I think there are so many bad words in the comment area, which is very depressing. Writing is really not easy, and it is normal to have loopholes, and some are just asking for thorns (of course, some of these words can still make up for the shortcomings)...                                                                                                                                   writing! It's really great! So would you consider publishing an extra story about Mr. Fan Xiaohou to satisfy the curiosity of a young reader? (Looking expectantly)

This is still a strong woman. Author, please let the strong woman go. What have you written after marriage? Momojiji, it is all about house fighting between women. Let alone the house fighting, she is still the one who is wronged. On the surface, Pomegranate has attacked everything that should be criticized and threatened everything that should be threatened. Is it useful? People still look down on her, and a concubine comes to her door. The male protagonist is even more of a loser. He wants to crush Pomegranate all the time. The question is, what did you say before marriage, and you are protecting Pomegranate?

I always feel that it is illogical for the Shi family not to pursue the matter. Their son was secretly exchanged and was almost tortured to death. The adopted son who devoted all their efforts to cultivate recognized his ancestors and returned to the family. If they don't pursue this matter, the Shi family is such a fool! In modern times, such things will be punished. In ancient times, no matter how poor the Shi family was, it was still the uncle's house. The Li family was guilty of the following, but it was fine. It was simply outrageous to go back to grandma's house!

Let's change it to the previous author. I don't know what the current author is writing. The previous author, how old is the protagonist in The Secret Passage? He killed people when he was told to kill people, and he gave away a large box of secrets when he was told to give them away. Now what about this? Even if you meet with the prince, you are always worried about it. Oh my God, the ultimate master can still win one against two. If the apprentice is disobedient, it will be useless... If the husband is not good, why not replace him?

I've basically finished reading the ones I've posted so far, and it feels like it's just anticlimactic. It's interesting at the beginning, and it's the part that attracts me the most, but it's really not interesting at the end. It feels more and more like the stitched products of various female pornographic stories, and the stitching is quite inconsistent. I don't feel like I am idle for this poor family. I can't follow it anymore, I hope the author writes better and better

The heroine at the beginning and the heroine now have completely different personalities. At the beginning in the tunnel, she was not even a first-class character at that time, but she could kill decisively, which suited the apocalyptic traveler very well. What now? A great master, with super powers and medical skills, but with a small-minded air. If it was co-written by two authors, that would explain it.

The author has completely failed to understand the value of the ninth level in a martial arts world. The three girls were admitted to the National Women's Prison and were ranked 9th. The Southern Chief couldn't suppress the local martial arts, and he himself was killed. This fundamentally shows that the official force does not have the upper hand, but he still wants to suppress a ninth level. Pin is willing to marry you as a concubine at will. This kind of marriage is the biggest failure. If someone doesn't want to marry you by force, I'm afraid the family will be ruined. Maybe the people in power don't care about Jiupin. When you know that someone who can crush you to death at any time is sleeping with you, can you sleep?

Please change the male lead quickly. The more you look at this male lead, the more unlucky he is. He only married the female lead after knowing her true identity before marriage. He couldn't beat his wife but still wants to engage in male chauvinism. He wants to overwhelm her in everything. How dare you? If the female lead hadn't traveled through time and was a more sober person, I'm afraid she would have been PUAed by the male lead. The heroine is so strong in combat that she is more than capable of flipping the table and becoming the emperor herself. It is unimaginable that she married the hero and suffered so many grievances. She failed to keep any of the promises she made before the marriage. She pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger. After pretending for a long time, she really turned into a pig. Forcibly making the heroine rational, the heroine would not marry like this even if she was really rational, she would simply be causing trouble for herself. 🐷 Anyway, they are really not suitable for each other. In reality, two people with strong personalities will not end well if they get together. The heroine is strong and the hero is not a love-minded person. It is difficult to continue the plot.

Why did Chu Yao suddenly become hypocritical after getting married? She behaves coquettishly and cautiously, especially when dealing with pomegranates. She is not grand at all, like a concubine who cannot stand on the stage. He wanted to be like Pomegranate, but he also wanted to be like Pomegranate. He did things based on his own will and completely ignored her feelings. After she married into the prince's palace, she suffered all kinds of treatment, humiliation, and a ruined reputation. If the heroine hadn't been mentally strong and resourceful, she would have died hundreds of times. In a sense, Chu Yao is really not a man, he can't protect his wife, and he wants to overwhelm Pomegranate in everything. He really doesn't deserve pomegranate. Before we got married, I really looked forward to them joining forces. But after getting married, just this... Ten thousand horses in my heart? …$ Galloping past. Pomegranates really make for better marriages.

The story is very out of the ordinary in ancient Chinese novels, the protagonist is well established, and the narrative is not verbose. That's the end of those shitty relatives, right? I hope there will be less bloody characters in the general's family later. The opening description of the ninth-grade master is like a peak figure, but when the protagonist's force value is so high, he has no status in both families.

Is this plot a slap in the face now? The plot development is so slow, I can't wait to pick up the pen and write a few chapters for you...

I saw some people saying that the author kept changing his writing. According to my understanding of the author's previous books, no, I finally figured it out now. The author is actually a very traditional person. He believes that women cannot live without men. Love is more important than anything, but he has to cater to the market and write happily. I can't write a story about intellectual power and plot, so I can only write about a character with a cool character, which leads to the separation of the heroine's character and makes me write a strong woman with a little girl mentality. But in fact, the author doesn't even want to write about a strong woman and can't write about it. Well, just to avoid this, I don't want to read this kind of irritating article anymore.

Shi Fuyin was really not as good as Shoufu Wenli's sister. She tried her best to study and take the imperial examination. In the end, she had no choice but to take the imperial examination because of the marriage. She could not resist the order for the sake of her family, so she had to give up her dream. But what about Shi Fuyin? She can obviously be a knight-errant freely, but why does she have to give birth to enough children to join the family tree for a weakling who can't protect her? Even in ancient times, women couldn't ruin the reputation of their family members for the sake of love, and they couldn't be willing to be humble.

Is the author's real gender male? How can he write such an article that is so female-competitive, male-congruent, and so unfriendly to women?

So far, I have discovered that many of the people who wrote reviews for this book have ulterior motives and are specifically trying to discredit the author! I really can't bear it anymore, so I would like to emphasize that the author of this book has correct views, reasonable logic, and fluent writing style. His description of the sophistication of people and the portrayal of the characters are very good...

It really doesn't look like it was written by the author of The Daughter of a Poor Family. The emotional line is drawn out and awkward, and many foreshadowings are hastily mentioned. Compared with The Daughter of a Poor Family, it really doesn't look like it was written by the same person.

The first half and the second half were not written by the same person. The second half is all about love. You can't fight. It's grinding and speechless. When you meet the male protagonist, you can't walk?

This novel is not suitable for people who like to read mindless and juvenile novels. The author writes very well. It is not limited to love. The writing is smooth and logical. His behavior and actions are in line with the background of the times. He is also very sharp in criticizing people. The degree of satisfaction is quite high. There is not much to say except that it is too short.

Isn't it right? You were very good-looking before and later turned to the direction of house fighting? Now I dare to say that many people don't watch house fighting or don't like watching your house fighting. At least it's not that the golden finger is useless after being bullied, and the male protagonist didn't feel unlikable before, so he was just dragged in casually to get along with him, right?

I chose to read it, but I still feel that the money was wasted. This article was not written by one person before and after it. If so, is the author a little clever? ? Originally the setting was okay, but the plot became more and more crooked and broken, the characters became more and more contradictory, and became more and more speechless. The plot was a mess, the relationship between the male and female protagonists was a mess, everything was a mess, it was so speechless, it was so speechless.

The writing is very good, the pace is fast, the characters are vivid, and it is refreshing. I have read all the author's books and like them very much. I am looking forward to the next one.

I like this book very much. I have read it many times. Reading the comments, it feels like it is not the same book as I am reading 😰