Naruto: Amegakure Unites the Ninja World

I've placed my bet! I bet he'll definitely be castrated. 🙂

When you're fighting, don't explain too much. You can supplement the explanation with narration, but don't add too much.

It's actually not bad, but it relies too heavily on dialogue to drive the story; the battles are written rather dryly. Also, it lacks a certain sophistication; the incantations for the ghosts are too realistic. It should be more abstract and artistic, like the Grim Reaper, and not necessarily just recounting their life stories.

It's ridiculous that Konoha is putting all its fighting power into Sunagakure.

What have you written in the last few chapters? You've been using tired tropes, weaving in bizarre things, straying from the main theme, and just writing filler. Are you planning to abandon this project altogether?

The idea that the author's Hyakki Yagyō (Night Parade of One Hundred Demons) could destroy the Earth is utter nonsense.

Don't make the dialogue so verbose.

In the Naruto world, the only beings capable of destroying planets are the Otsutsuki clan. Even the Sage of Six Paths couldn't destroy a planet. Furthermore, the moon was formed from a portion of land taken from the Naruto planet, so it's not a true planet. The idea that the Night Parade of One Hundred Demons could destroy the Naruto planet is absurd.

Keep it up, author! The old Naruto series was all boring, dark, and cruel. All they do all day is cultivate and kill. It's either fighting and killing, or engaging in pornography. I'm so tired of watching it, it's so boring. The last two years have been much more interesting. The richest man in the ninja world, leader of the straw dolls, defector—the system has arrived. There are many more interesting and fun works. Monthly pass given Keep it up, author!