Cyber ​​God World

The setting is good, but it's a bit uncomfortable to watch. The paragraph is too long. The description is not very detailed either.

The writing behind it is a bit like cyber cultivating immortality, arranging artificial tendons for the Zerg, and also adding tendons to the Zerg Leviathan mothership.

The Xiaojing family is full of spirit, full of Xiaojing citizens' thoughts about the emperor also using a golden pole. A true immortal who has been cultivating for hundreds of years can actually see ten meters away... He can't see further than my surveillance camera.

The author has written too many names of people from the Conferred Gods period. As long as the protagonist is not a fool, he must know there is something wrong. Now the protagonist looks like he is not surprised and is speechless.

The most important thing for researchers is theft of research results Total disrespect, both sides pay. Once (secretly photographed), it was an inevitable result The second time, induced to enter the prototype, stole the enablement (taken without telling), and then beat him up, the protagonist resigned and became a dog The third time, the test came again. The problem is that the protagonist did not feel at all, you are a researcher, I was not happy when my teacher borrowed my idea without telling the source. And that's not to say that it can't be given. I said that it would be okay for the protagonist to just give it to him, which makes both characters problematic. Shi Ji has more bosses than the protagonist, can he be guilty? And if you assume that she is a first-line researcher who is still in the upper circle, she is a serious researcher. It is difficult for me to imagine that when a scientific researcher encounters something curious or does not understand, the first thing he thinks of is to sneak a look and go to a first-class area. Personality can be despicable or even despicable, but you must respect knowledge and be honest in research. Otherwise, if you don't get results through research like this, rely on Tencent's victory method. There is no way your world setting can support this (three families fighting for hegemony, endless infighting). It feels very disrespectful to myself and the other person.

Awesome, full of imagination. Keep it up and it will be a hit!

Chapter 4 is too weird to persuade you to quit. The settings of ancient martial arts battles are too weird and not reasonable enough. At least there must be appropriate technology and tactical coordination. You are too weird and easy to quit.

Looking at it now, I can only say that the idea is very good, but the author probably doesn't have an outline, which is a pity.

Low expressiveness: ¹ Ace machine cannot attack from a distance, ² The laboratory does not have full-system defense capabilities, ³ The expressiveness of several major groups is too low and those who don't know it think they are studios, ⁴ This is the age of the Star Sea, please be more open-minded, the population cannot start at one trillion. ⁵In addition to mechas, do you have other things that express social characteristics? New materials, new energy, new social theory.

Basketball Pangu, Wing Chun Day of Destruction, Ten Meters True Immortal

The rebirth at the beginning of the chapter combines the knowledge of the two worlds to open up a new track. But after entering the group, it becomes a mess. Now in the latest chapter, it is okay to get the best materials to design a new product. The problem now is the sense of fragmentation. Your cultivation is like a human being. This is unreasonable for special machine players, and the expressiveness is really stretched.

I admire the author's imagination, it's well written!

A mess

The author's starting point for the same interstellar apotheosis is really good.

The main character is written like a fool!

The book is good, and it is somewhat innovative. At least it is much better than many old-fashioned books that are the same but do not change the medicine. It is a good book that can make old bookworms want to read it. I hope the author can keep writing and give out monthly tickets to encourage

I feel like the main character should be more selfish. I always feel like the writing is not quite right. The same goes for the previous films.

Mysterious and mysterious, watery and watery, the protagonist who appears at the beginning seems to know nothing. If he comes from the countryside and has never been online, I would believe it, but obviously he is not. You can search cutting-edge technologies online, and you can guess what you can't find. For example, many theories in the past have not been implemented in modern times.

Text description of blockbusters. It doesn't make sense to read The prehistoric technology flow of changing skins. The original crew from the prehistoric era directly changed their skins into people from the technological world...

After reading it, the so-called universe has only five large star fields and two small star fields. The population setting is too chaotic. One moment it is billions, another moment it is tens of billions. One moment all the people in a star field are dead and then they just sit back and watch. This is the so-called for mankind. I laughed.

There is a problem. The author divides it into multiple paragraphs. The look and feel of one paragraph after another is not very good.

Vegetables grow without intention, and people die without intention. I read it for so long, but I lost all interest in this book later on. The author never tires of explaining a bunch of fake space fantasy battles, down to the details of the battle line advancing 100 meters to the left and front. However, it is still based on the path of Internet writing, and there is no real science fiction writing from science and technology to the world. His foundation is in online writing, and he writes about law and science fiction. The result is that it becomes more and more watery, wordy and hollow. As a web article or even a novel, it is completely unqualified. The three elements of the novel, characters, environment and plot, are completely lost. For dozens of days, the plot has basically not advanced. I really can't stand it anymore. Alas

Saw it till the end. Although I don't like the big war scenes. But everything else is fine. I hope the author will update it, but it's a pity.

This title is a bit embarrassing and I can't substitute it.

The pace is too slow, too watery, the main line is unclear, there are few conflicts, no tension, and a running account

There is too much nonsense, one chapter has 2,000 words, and there must be 1,500 words of all kinds of meaningless explanations. I can't keep up.

I have a suggestion and I don't know if I should say no. I found that in the later stage, I can open the multiverse and fight with wizards, mages and so on.

There are new ideas for writing mythology, but since it is an alternative mythology, why not completely remove supernatural powers and training and so on.

For those who have never read Yanshi, writing about cyber cultivating immortality is purely for the sake of setting and does not have its own set of logic.