
Picking Up Fragments in Douluo Dalu
我在斗罗大陆捡碎片
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- Completed
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- 750k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- ACG Fanfiction
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- 2mo ago
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- Qidian
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- Douluo Dalu: Fragment CollectorOn RandomTranslator
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Just picking up pieces, without any specific data analysis? For example, those messy fragments you mentioned, those golden soul coin fragments, well, there are a lot of them. . . I just mentioned the attribute fragments. White, yellow, and purple martial soul fragments. Have you picked them up? Is it useful? In other words, it can be decomposed after picking it up, and how can the decomposed things be used. What's the use of picking it up after synthesizing it? Brother, I read Chapter 20, and you didn't describe the function of your golden finger at all.
The underlying logic is wrong. This is the real world, not the game world.
The setting of the protagonist's martial spirit is too complicated and redundant. Why not add an attribute column for picking up fragments, which is more elegant and neat? Don't be as innovative and bad at writing as "Dragon of Fantasy".
The protagonist should be the same as Tang San, who was born through birth, equivalent to a local. How come he doesn't have a martial spirit? The rule of Douluo Dalu is that everyone has a martial soul, and only with soul power can he practice. How can the protagonist cultivate soul power without a martial soul? Come on, Chun Chun should write whatever he wants. At least there must be underlying logic rules.
Qian Renxue
Qian Renxue
The martial spirit is too messy, and why keep cultivating it after picking up Luo Sanpao? The water-fire alchemy body was eaten by Luo Sanpao and he made a conscious Luo Sanpao. The Silver Dragon King came out and said a few words to the descendants of the dragon clan. Don't let Luo Sanpao let you get a body again at the end. You still use ordinary martial arts. So if you pick up so many, can't you upgrade the martial soul? I took out a panel and took a look at what I picked up. I always felt that I picked up everything, but it was confusing. There are still things that can be fused. So if you keep merging the unwanted ones into a more powerful one, is it not more powerful than a large piece of useless martial arts? It's not like you can use several martial arts spirits at once.
Zhu Zhuqing
Zhu Zhuqing
Is Dai Mubai so forbearing? It's so fake. It feels like I'm whitewashing him. Since he is so forbearing and rashly reveals his identity in a hostile country? In the original novel, Dai Mubai is very secretive about his identity.
It was useless when you were around Chapter 10. Do you really think that the city lord's son and his family don't dare to touch you? Tang San is in a head-to-head confrontation. He has talents and Yu Xiaogang seems to be unable to do it, but the title is there, are you worthy of touching them? It's not easy for low-level soul masters to hang around
It feels like the author's level was written indiscriminately.
There were too many factors that were not considered. For example, the Blue Silver Grass picked up from Tang San was only yellow, and the Clear Sky Hammer was also black. They completely forgot about the settings of the twin martial spirits. The Blue Silver Emperor should be black even if he has not awakened. Then the Silky Bone Rabbit is set to purple? Can the purple quality guarantee mother and daughter for a hundred thousand years? The fact that the original novel didn't mention it doesn't mean that they are just ordinary soft-bone rabbits, or at least they are also soft-bone rabbit emperors.