I Am Picking up Pieces in Douluo Continent

Just picking up pieces, without any specific data analysis? For example, those messy fragments you mentioned, those golden soul coin fragments, well, there are a lot of them. . . I just mentioned the attribute fragments. White, yellow, and purple martial soul fragments. Have you picked them up? Is it useful? In other words, it can be decomposed after picking it up, and how can the decomposed things be used. What's the use of picking it up after synthesizing it? Brother, I read Chapter 20, and you didn't describe the function of your golden finger at all.

The underlying logic is wrong. This is the real world, not the game world.

The setting of the protagonist's martial spirit is too complicated and redundant. Why not add an attribute column for picking up fragments, which is more elegant and neat? Don't be as innovative and bad at writing as "Dragon of Fantasy".

The protagonist should be the same as Tang San, who was born through birth, equivalent to a local. How come he doesn't have a martial spirit? The rule of Douluo Dalu is that everyone has a martial soul, and only with soul power can he practice. How can the protagonist cultivate soul power without a martial soul? Come on, Chun Chun should write whatever he wants. At least there must be underlying logic rules.

Qian Renxue

Zhu Zhuqing

Is Dai Mubai so forbearing? It's so fake. It feels like I'm whitewashing him. Since he is so forbearing and rashly reveals his identity in a hostile country? In the original novel, Dai Mubai is very secretive about his identity.

The martial spirit is too messy, and why keep cultivating it after picking up Luo Sanpao? The water-fire alchemy body was eaten by Luo Sanpao and he made a conscious Luo Sanpao. The Silver Dragon King came out and said a few words to the descendants of the dragon clan. Don't let Luo Sanpao let you get a body again at the end. You still use ordinary martial arts. So if you pick up so many, can't you upgrade the martial soul? I took out a panel and took a look at what I picked up. I always felt that I picked up everything, but it was confusing. There are still things that can be fused. So if you keep merging the unwanted ones into a more powerful one, is it not more powerful than a large piece of useless martial arts? It's not like you can use several martial arts spirits at once.

It was useless when you were around Chapter 10. Do you really think that the city lord's son and his family don't dare to touch you? Tang San is in a head-to-head confrontation. He has talents and Yu Xiaogang seems to be unable to do it, but the title is there, are you worthy of touching them? It's not easy for low-level soul masters to hang around

There were too many factors that were not considered. For example, the Blue Silver Grass picked up from Tang San was only yellow, and the Clear Sky Hammer was also black. They completely forgot about the settings of the twin martial spirits. The Blue Silver Emperor should be black even if he has not awakened. Then the Silky Bone Rabbit is set to purple? Can the purple quality guarantee mother and daughter for a hundred thousand years? The fact that the original novel didn't mention it doesn't mean that they are just ordinary soft-bone rabbits, or at least they are also soft-bone rabbit emperors.

I can tolerate everything else, but I can't tolerate the messed up martial soul.

The writing is too messy and full of nonsense, and the writing style is not good. Wuhun is a drawback, there are too many and too complicated. Moreover, there are too many psychological descriptions of the protagonist and he likes to make jokes, which affects the viewing experience and makes it slip away.

I really don't know why you have so many useless chapters.

The introduction is not well written. Will the protagonist be okay when he encounters Tang Hao who teaches him the Three Hammers of Tang Dynasty? Peeping can lead to death, but seeing Tang San use it and then the protagonist picking up the pieces is just fine.

Your martial souls are in such a mess, it feels so uncomfortable to look at them. How many martial souls do you have? Do you want to major in the ordinary finger-tiger and stick ones?

Alas, I feel tired. Fan authors should write the original work well, as this will change the world view of the original work. It won't be a problem if you give the protagonist a few plug-ins or create some supporting characters. The origin of martial arts, the image of the Dragon King (the original is a big lizard, not an oriental dragon), and the Dragon God War have all been changed. I can't stand this poisonous point anyway.

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Is there Hu Liena or Ning Rongrong as the heroine?

What's wrong with writing? The protagonist's martial arts are in a mess. Even the main martial soul hasn't been picked up yet. That martial soul can use poison.

The protagonist doesn't have many traces of understanding the growth process. He is a bit weak and may be on the verge of death.

After reading it for a long time, I realized that it doesn't have two heroines and it has a huge harem. The author should update the characters quickly. There are only two heroines in the characters. It's a bad review and I was deceived again.

Don't you want to go to PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds to pick up pieces? Here comes Douluo

The author is quite thoughtful about the plot and the writing is good. The only bad thing is that the original setting of the God Realm was modified. In the original work, the God wanted to inherit the God's position because he had reached the end of his training. From Dou 1, it can be seen that as long as you inherit the God's position, you can get the corresponding level of power, but you still have to practice slowly by yourself.

The plot is quite good. I don't follow the crowd in terms of plot, I have my own ideas.

Is the little dance party resurrected? The relationship between the protagonist and Xiao Wu in the book feels very good, and Xiao Wu and Tang San are not too close like in the original book. It feels like a pity to die (referring to the kind of friends who have no relationship between men and women).

Not bad. Don't listen to other people's nonsense. It's a fine product.

Xuantian Kung can enhance innate soul power

Are there any Douluo fanfics of this type?

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

I don't understand what's going on with the protagonist's martial soul. He doesn't have a martial soul himself, and then he adds a martial soul, but it seems that after he absorbed the soul ring, all the martial souls have soul rings. Why is this so different from the original work? You should at least be more reliable. There is also whale glue. If you don't use it earlier and want to wait until later, I don't understand what's going on with you. Different martial spirits require different soul rings.