I Caused the Undead Disaster

It's really outrageous. The whole world knows that there are secret wolves coveting your family's property. You want to get the first place in the magic competition to scare them. This thing has been repeated dozens of times. Are you afraid that you won't be able to drive away readers? The number of water words is not that watery either.

The author's positioning is wrong, this book should be placed in the Western Fantasy area. Although the premise is that the protagonist is a player and knows the background of the game, the part that belongs to the game uses the background of the game that appears inexplicably. The introduction of the game characters is just a few words, and the sense of the game is not strong at all. On the contrary, the western fantasy part is okay, and even has a bit of writing style. This is something that most authors can't do, and the selection is okay. You can completely get rid of the current burden and use your strengths to write a fantasy novel. Anyway, it is a cool channel like a game channel. You can also test the waters and take a round. You can learn from a book: There is something wrong with my undead. The undead he summons are players. There are not so many narrations to introduce the background, and the background is introduced more smoothly, instead of introducing a large section of the background with narration like your book. Also change the golden finger. Instead of using the entry, choose the golden finger that belongs to the necromancer category. There is no sense of fragmentation. . In short, grasp the core cool points and create a sense of anticipation for your own book

See Chapter 18: Accepting a Maid Are you such a strong-willed maid? When you first came to your master's house, you became jealous because of the interaction between the master and your brother? ?

After reading the beginning, the demon seed is missing and can only be used by necromancers. It is known that this person is from the necromancy department of the college. Now a necromancy student who has been mediocre for three or four years has suddenly become successful. Does the college want to investigate?

No, author, you wrote more than ten chapters of the Goblin plot, and the reward is only a green staff? Although there is still some material, I don't think there is a plot behind these materials.

How can I save the world without players? Simple, direct to the stars. The planet is gone and no one else can invade it.

As of Chapter 7 The setting is actually okay. I don't know if it will be good later, but the specific content in the front is really difficult to understand It's not about cliché. I would rather it be more cliché and classic than watch this kind of shit ☝🤓Ha, a bunch of nonsense, the undead who subconsciously retreats, after defeating the female investigator, he rubs his head and blushes and then stabs him, highlighting an unknown person.

The middle copy of Goblin is also too long.

This is an introduction to the good and lawful camp Undead Oh, I never get tired of this kind of abstract setting Then I made the settings and character descriptions very idealistic and not western fantasy at all.

Thank you all for watching and collecting. In fact, as a newcomer who has never written a novel, I have always been very nervous about the status of new books, so I am also a little at a loss. The last book was a trial work and had no results, but I am not discouraged. I just like writing, so I want to continue to persevere. For this book, the editor said that the results are definitely lower than books of the same type, but I still want to try more. I can't stop writing just because the results are not good. Actually, I read most people's comments and take them into consideration, and the shortcomings are gradually being improved. But sometimes I still have to insist on going my own way. After all, the outline is there. If I change it without authorization, it will also cause problems for the subsequent plot. After much thought, I'd better keep writing. I wonder if I can stick to one million words, or two million words? But I am very happy because I am already on this road, so let's keep going...

Without players, how can we fight against the subspace demonic corruption? It's very simple, I just want to be a player. After that, Ron grabbed the Skeleton King and refined it instantly!

It has been almost two months since I wrote this book, and it is finally on the shelves. I would like to thank all my book friends for their support. Many people praised it, and many people criticized it. I thank everyone for their comments and guidance. What I want to say is that I have always paid attention to everyone's opinions and advice. Some of them I have learned from and corrected. There are also some opinions that I understand but cannot respond to for various reasons. I would like to say sorry. I am also a newcomer and have never written a novel. There are many flaws in both the setting and the plot, so I have been humbly accepting everyone's advice and hope to make some progress. In short, this book has finally reached the stage of being put on the shelves. Friends, go ahead, I need your support, thank you.

There is no way to write the first copy so long, because the secret realm is one of the cores of this book, and many subsequent events and plots will advance in the secret realm, so it must have a long tone. I thought that a secret realm trial must be conducted before the game, otherwise it would be a bit abrupt to write about the secret realm later. Secondly, this secret realm plays a key role, and part of the foreshadowing is in this secret realm, so it must be written longer and give more scenes to this foreshadowing. Of course, I will listen to everyone's suggestions. Thank you for your suggestions.

A copy of Goblin wrote about ten chapters. . .

Um, it feels average and it didn't keep me! Come on! Goodbye!

A first-level Goblin copy has written more than ten chapters.

Why add a Secret Realm Goblin dungeon? I skipped it without even looking at it. It's not interesting at all. Come back to the main story. The purpose of the dungeon is to get equipment, materials, and props. Your current goal is to win the competition. What does it mean to suddenly insert this dungeon? I have no desire to read it. I skipped to the latest chapter and found that I haven't finished it yet? You don't still want to write a copy of thirty or forty chapters, do you?

It's becoming less and less attractive, dry and wordy.

The plot of this gang is really boring

After briefly reading the book, I think the content of this book is remarkable. Many plots are gradually unfolding, and it looks very exciting and enjoyable.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

How did you sign this thing? It's actually on the shelves?