Lijunxian

I gave up the book. The author's writing is very good and the character creation is very profound. However, the protagonist's worldview feels very childish to me. The cultivation of the protagonist is not worthy of the worldview that he should have.

Other books have the main text of the book, but the title of this book is the introduction.

I am originally a Sandan person from Wollongong, and discussing Yin and Yang is like holding the palm of my hand in my hand to stabilize the universe. The late emperor went to Nanyang to ask for three invitations, and finally settled three points of the Han family's business. He was granted the title of Marquis of Wuxiang and took charge of the commander's seal. He conquered east and west, conquered the north and south, and suppressed the ancient and modern times. King Wen of Zhou Dynasty visited Jiang Shang and the Zhou family was greatly energized. How could Zhuge Liang compare to his predecessors? When I have nothing to do, I play the music of the piano in the watchtower. (Zhuge Liang plays the piano.) Zhuge Liang (laughing) Hahaha? (Xipi Adagio) I lack a close friend in front of me. Sima Yi (original version of Xipi) sat on his horse to meditate. Sitting on the tower was Zhuge Kongming. Left and right piano boys came to bring wine and clean up the old, weak and disabled soldiers in the streets. I was supposed to send the general's order to attack the city, but everyone (with Bai) drink! Sima Yi (Bai) Wait a minute. (Xipi shakes the board) I'm afraid I fell into his clever scheme. Don't hide your strategies from me. Every opponent in chess is the same person. Zhuge Liang (Xipi 26th board) I was watching the mountain scenery from the tower when I heard a commotion outside the city. The flag fluttered and turned around, but it turned out to be soldiers sent by Sima. I also ordered people to inquire about Sima leading his troops to the west. Firstly, Ma Di was clueless and ignorant, secondly, the generals were at odds and lost my street pavilion. I was lucky enough to win three of my cities, but I was greedy and took away my western city. Zhuge Liang is waiting at the gate tower, waiting for you, Sima, to come here. Let's talk, talk, and talk about our hearts. There is no need to show any respect when you enter the city. I only have lambs and fine wine, and fine wine and lambs to reward your three armies. There were two Qintong people on the left and right, neither ambush nor soldiers. Don't think so wildly, just come, come, come. Please go up to the tower, Sima, and listen to me playing the harp. Sima Yi (Xipi Shaking Ban) is thinking about things uncertainly, and there must be an ambush in the city. "Empty City Strategy" is a classic play of traditional Peking Opera. It tells the story of Zhuge Liang losing a street pavilion due to Ma Di's self-restraint. Wei general Sima Yi took advantage of the situation and led 150,000 troops to attack the west city where Zhuge Liang was stationed. At that time, Zhuge Liang's elite troops had all been sent out, and the west city was empty. There were only old and weak soldiers stationed there. They were outnumbered and in great danger. Zhuge Liang planned an empty city by opening the city gates wide and calmly climbing up the tower to enjoy the scenery, drinking wine and playing the harp as if nothing had happened. Extended information Main characters Zhuge Liang: Laosheng; Sima Yi: Jing; Sima Shi: Jing; Sima Zhao: Xiaosheng; Zhao Yun: Laosheng; Laojun A: Chou; Laojun B: Chou; Historical evaluation "Zizhi Tongjian" records that Zhuge and Ma are close friends: "Ma Di is very talented and good at discussing military strategies. Zhuge Liang attaches great importance to him... He joined the army as a soldier. Every time there was an introduction and discussion, from day to night, he marched to Qishan and led the troops to fight with Zhang He in the street pavilion. He violated Liang's control and moved to disturb the city. Ginseng

It's really weird that the heroine has a cousin. In ancient times, there were cousins ​​who married cousins, but there were almost no marriages with the same surname. Moreover, the bloodline in the novel is so close. The fifth server has not yet been released. Just like a biological sister. Wouldn't it be disgusting to think of having such desire for a biological sister? Either change the cousin's life experience, or write the cousin as the main heroine. She is the heroine but not married to the protagonist. I have a cousin and a biological sister, so it is really hard to imagine that my sister who has been growing up will marry him and have children when she grows up. Really...

The writing is good, but the male and female protagonists are cousins, which would have been considered incest even in ancient times. But there is no condemnation in the article, and there is even a hint of matchmaking. This setting is difficult to accept.

It is normal to have such a result. Although it is much better than the assembly line, it is also another extreme. The author is most likely from Beijing. Eating dumplings is a lot of trouble and is not pleasant.

Why do you like to write based on the background of Xuanjian Immortal Clan's foot-binding book? The ones in Jiangnan and Jiangbei seem to be from the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, right? High-level immortal cultivators can move mountains and seas and assimilate heaven and earth, but they still have to find some reflections in history and make some adjustments to the ruins of the Northern and Southern Dynasties. It is really tasteless. The author's writing skills are not bad.

He is a native, and his experience before being burned by Qilin was nothing special, but he became mature at the age of 10, with a very wealthy look; and the protagonist's family is not flattering at all. So many fantasy novels about cultivating immortals and assigning orphan time-travelers to so many protagonists are just to avoid stepping on this trap. You have to go through both of them, you are really high-spirited.

Brother, who is this Lian Yue? More important than the protagonist's father. Everything else is good, but this woman gives me a headache.

This is the first time I see someone marrying my own sister!!! Isn't the author a sister-controller!!!

I asked the artist to draw the cover. Do the readers like it? This facial makeup mainly draws on the three-tiled face of Peking Opera (which is somewhat different from Tu Anjia's facial makeup in the book). The color of the whole picture ranges from light to dark, especially the eyes, which express my inner feeling very well (the boss is really great!) To a certain extent, this painting is also my reaction to the tone of this work. Can you see the metaphor 😏

Is this a palace fight novel? I have read more than 20 chapters, but I haven't written a word about how to practice cultivation. It is full of all kinds of intrigues and intrigues. Wenqing is good but don't get angry. I have written two or three chapters to make a big show. What does it mean for a group of cultivators to perform on stage to advance the plot?

I feel like the title, introduction and text of this book are not good enough.

A book without a female protagonist is not necessarily a good book, but a book with a female protagonist from the beginning is definitely bad.

The writing and plot are quite good, but Dao Zi and Ha Bi Lian Yue are a bit more poisonous, inexplicable and forced into the story.

If there is no fairy spirit, the author should not write about immortals. The writing style is not elegant. He should write about weird and historical martial arts. Even if he writes about immortal family, he must have fairy spirit.

The writing in the back is a bit crooked. The character of the protagonist in these pictures is very different from the previous ones. It is a bit too deliberate to suppress the protagonist. And I want to ask, the protagonist has gradually become a strong person since he became an immortal. But is what he has on him worthy of it? Was it not conceived at all? Now that I have established my foundation, I don't even have a few magic weapons to use. I only know two or three spells, and they are all of low quality. Fighting relies solely on Dharma images and magic strategies, which is not very advanced.

It takes you two years as a cultivator to sing in an opera. I don't know what you think. Your Chen family is just a vassal family. They don't think about how to earn cultivation materials all day long, don't think about cultivating the various arts of immortality, don't think about cultivating well, and don't want to be a person who has the luck of Qilin to sing in an opera. He also said that he is afraid of being seen by others as practicing too fast. If he is afraid of being seen as practicing too fast, let him practice the immortal arts. Isn't it better to make alchemy, refining tools and making talismans than to act in an opera? If I were to give you a star, it would probably be one star, no more.

Good book. I just can't accept the incest between cousins. But if I can accept it, it's still a good book.

There are so many calculations and so many mental activities. I think it would be better to use this thought to write an essay about the power of the dynasty. .

I've read Chapter 14 and it's all about conspiracy, so boring.

This is the content of the book, and it is so direct that it cannot be said to be taken out of context. I hope it won't be deleted. It's already in the book and you're still afraid of people reading it?

A novel about cultivating immortals is worse than martial arts

In fact, I used to like to read all kinds of interesting articles, but after reading them for more than ten years, I have long been tired of aesthetics. I wanted to read something more in-depth, but it turned out that it was very difficult to find them, and there were too many assembly-line works. This novel is very well written. I hope the author can keep writing it.

Can the author summarize the immortal foundation and functions, Taoism, and aura that appear in the book?

🙂 One chapter per day is too short

The layout of this book is too small, and the early writing is too slow and verbose. It is as smelly and long as an old lady's footcloth.

Well written, start a paid subscription. There is no monthly pass this month. I will leave one for you this month.

It is not as superficial as ordinary novels about cultivating immortals. It explores the problem of the end of the story in the world view of cultivating immortals where great power is concentrated in individuals: excessive personal abilities force everyone to face the total number of resources. This problem is actually unsolvable. You can only relieve your own pressure by plundering the outside, but what if there is an upper limit on the outside? Of course, writing to this point is a bit self-indulgent and asking for trouble.

This is a cut in half... I feel like I still have more to say. The world view is over just after it was laid out. It's uncomfortable.