A Journey to the Heavens Starting from the Lotus Lantern

Sounds good, hope to update two chapters a day.

If Erlang Shen has a child and denies it, then he is no longer Erlang Shen. His Taoist heart will skip a beat and all his magic power will be lost. You don't know why Erlang Shen beat Liu Yanchang. The most important thing for Erlang Shen is family affection. Your introduction makes my head hurt. If you say that Erlang Shen doesn't know that he has this child, you can still say it.

It is impossible for Yang Jian to disown his son or even abandon him. Yang Jian of Baolian Deng would like to snatch away his nephew and raise it himself. You said that he would not raise his son. This is too false. Yang Jian of Baolian Deng cannot give up his blood relatives.

The so-called new rules of heaven are a joke! Immortals cannot be sentimental. Once they are sentimental, they will be selfish. The resources of the three realms are limited! The lust of the gods is unlimited!

When Chen Xiang was born, Jiao Enjun said, "My Yang family has a baby." . . Xiaotian Quan said that his surname was Liu, and Yang Jian said that that was also the blood of my Yang family. . . Are you disowning your own child? ? ?

Another waste of investment, too impulsive

The Erlang Shen of Baolian Lantern really has a child and if you don't recognize him, then he is not Erlang Shen.

With a face thrown into the street, "the father does not recognize" has come, and the writing is trivial.

It's fine if you write about Yang Jian being bad, but if you write about Baolian Lantern (drama) and it's so shady, Yang Jian really doesn't take Er Ye's fans seriously. For fans who see the title of your work coming in, it would be polite to just leave. To be honest, if you write content and start with Yang Nuzhan Chenxiang, the number of people who can scold you will probably be reduced by half, and the number of viewers will double.

I didn't understand what was written at all. Please cut it and reopen it.

The eggs are very messy, they are messy and mute, and they even fast forward

Another person who plays too much with Black Mythology

Traveling through the world is unclear and makes it foggy. The author of "Erlang Shen Regardless of His Descendants" is really imaginative. The author has no storyline and everything is messed up. I don't recommend reading it.

Author, if you write the story of Zhutianliu honestly, this book can still be read, don't commit the literary youth syndrome

I haven't watched it since, it didn't suit my taste.

It's so messed up that I don't even know what to complain about.

Personally, I feel that it is messy, so empty, and incomprehensible to read, especially the part with Yang Jian where the protagonist feels bitter and resentful. This kind of writing is from the old times. Nowadays, readers are looking for exciting stories, and the protagonist must have a certain character. The protagonist in the early stage cannot be too weak. As long as you dare to write, readers will run away. If you write too depressed, no one will read it.

? The speed is too fast, the logic is difficult to understand, inconsistent, the plot is average, and the writing skills are not good.

This is a big mess. If Yang Jian doesn't know that he has a child of his own, is it still reasonable? He doesn't recognize his own child? Damn it, is this still Erlang Shen Yang Jian?