Fairy Tail: Use Earth Explosion Star to Make Them Feel the Pain

The protagonist is a time traveler but does not know the plot of Fairy Tail, which is almost the same as the indigenous story. Of course, I personally think it's okay. This comment is just a reminder to future readers who don't like reading this type of thing.

It's so messy, just writing nonsense for the sake of writing nonsense.

I only learn about the use of gravity from other anime and don't have any ideas of my own. If you want to use an ability, not only do you need to know more about it, but you also need to understand the basics! I hope the author has his own understanding of gravity instead of blindly borrowing from other anime

I don't think Naruto's top-level combat force, including Otsutsuki, can beat Fairy Tail. Even leaving aside the Dragon King and God, either Irene or the Magic King has the power to move the continent in the comics I think unless Otsutsuki's alien technology can bombard the planet, he will be equally nervous against Fairy Tail's top-level combat power.

Well, I didn't want to read it when I saw the introduction. The black dragon is immune to magic and feeds on magic power. You use gravity magic to defeat the black dragon?

In Chapter 35, the protagonist's wife was abducted by several characters who did not exist in the original work. I don't know what the meaning of this paragraph is.

Gravity, the Vice President of Heart in Fairy Tail used gravity magic, and he was defeated.

The writing style of this book is barely readable. Ignore some details for now. But your plot arrangement and combat power are so fast that the character growth curve is almost non-existent. The protagonist traveled back in time in the year 777. Less than 40 chapters have entered the main plot of the original work. Currently, there are less than 60 chapters. The president's regular meeting and Karna Island are almost finished. At this speed, even if the book can be written, it will only have 600,000 to 700,000 words. And your protagonist has passed away, and nothing seems to have changed. What about the role of the protagonist? I got an extra engagement with Miraj, which came quite suddenly. The narrative method was still flashback, which seriously interrupted the reading rhythm. There was almost no emotional foreshadowing. This is not the way to lock CP. I haven't seen the original plot events yet, so it's hard to comment on this aspect.

It was written in a mess, and the devil entrusted two children to do it, haha

After reading Chapter 37, the main character's expressiveness is useless... Fairy Tail is also useless... It feels like it's very powerful, with all kinds of moves, but it's a 50-50 match against everyone. The enemy can easily abduct Mirajane and forcefully advance the plot. It's inexplicable.

Naruto thought too much when fighting Fairy Tail. It may be a bit like it before, but in the later stage, Fairy Tail's combat power has completely collapsed. A random fight will destroy a town. Not to mention the Black Dragon's Breathing Island, which will be destroyed by you. There are also various demons that you can't restrain and kill without restraint.

The plot arrangement is a bit strange. The gravity magic is given to make the protagonist become an S-class of Fairy Tail early. However, the specific combat power is unknown, and everything seems to be 55. Trying over and over, there are a few skill names for the rotation eye, but fortunately they are not all skills that rely entirely on shouting. Read the name. The growth of the protagonist is just like writing a novel. Basically, a period of time has passed, what has been mastered, what has been improved, and the improvements are made in a running account, coupled with a lack of attention to some details, etc., Which can only give people the impression that it has given a lot and grows very fast. It seems to be very strong, but it can always be defeated by the plot.

Too fast and there's a problem with the timeline

What do you want to do by twisting space and time? It also wants to twist it to the heavens, right? For example: I am reborn in the beginning and open a restaurant, and in the last episode Shattered Void, right?

Let's not talk about the repulsion of other Shinra Tensei. What does it have to do with your gravity?

The Earth Blast Sky Star is too small, so get the one that Saitama smashed or the one that Kenpachi chopped up.

Isn't it nonsense to know that Naruto doesn't know about Fairy Tail?

Fairy Tail is not a world that specializes in magic. Not to mention dragon slayers, most people are monster monsters and have two days off. Pure physical bodies have no advantage at all. This inexplicable addition of someone who can physically explode hammers is outrageous. There is also this self-created dark guild. The Nine Ghost Sect is also looking for Deliora again. Are you looking for death by cutting off the gangsters? Let's not mention that the two people who have come out now are probably not even able to defeat the Six Demons. The council is not a fool. Let a person who shows his appearance go in. Jellal has a hostage in hand so he is not reported by Erza. What do you guys have?

Meteor? Even the collapse of space can't kill the black dragon, right?

It feels like you have to write it all over again. New writers don't know the plot when writing fan fiction, which is a minus point and a plus point. If the writing is not good, it will be even more poisonous. There is also a male protagonist template that I don't know how to write. You can use other anime characters to write it. Don't write too much physics knowledge that you can't understand and still feel that the word count is low. For example, if the male protagonist puts on a pirate suit and smiles, will it feel simpler? For the Gravity Fruit, you can use Gravity Magic (which is also available in Fairy Tail) Gravity training is also convenient. Adding the six-style sword skills and domineering skills as a golden finger is not very good, and it is enough to develop derivatives. I don't know the plot, the male protagonist is just like a Muggle who doesn't know the danger, the black dragon of Sirius Island, the big magic battle with 7 dragons, and the gate of Hades... Sooner or later he will be finished

In the original work, the enemies are obvious no matter what the situation is. In order to join the protagonist, a fictional enemy was created, and the hook was deliberately left unsolved. This was very disturbing to watch.

I'll practice slowly and then I'll write another book. I'm reading it.