Rewrite the Myth and Become the Taoist Ancestor!

It's okay to be criticized. This simulator novel of yours doesn't talk about basic rules Everyone has the same level of PK. If you fail, you lose. The other party is not cheating. He is directly responsible for operations. It is game development. From the perspective of the novel, you are acting like a swindler. I just saw another death, that gentleman practicing Qi. The world and worldview you set are crappy. The setting and the protagonist are both funny. It's very silly.

Overall, the writing is okay, but the upgrade is too fast.

First of all, what deserves praise is that the logic design is pretty good Secondly, the upgrade is still refreshing, otherwise the monthly ticket would not have increased to more than 1,000 But... This is only 650,000 words, is the upgrade finished? ( ≖⃙⃚᷄ ⍘ ≖⃙⃚᷅ ) What to write next? Next, I will talk about some shortcomings that I personally think. The character creation is average. The supporting characters are completely brought up by the protagonist using plug-ins. Otherwise, the supporting characters will all die when they are mortals. They have no charm and the plot is relatively ordinary. Nezha commits suicide and Monkey King Lu Bu. To sum up, [only watching plug-ins + protagonist is still good]

If the original world is well written, why do you want to create a fanfic? Moreover, the writing is not good.

The classic open high and go low pattern is still in the high opening stage. The pace is too fast. It doesn't even have to wait until the later stage. It will collapse in the mid-term.

To briefly describe what a simulator is, it means having a dream, dreaming about what you have done, and then when you wake up from the dream, you will draw a lottery, and there will be a big prize every two times. Most of the time until the end, the protagonist may be invincible before he even leaves the house. It's so funny.

Variant emulator stream. . . Except Lu Bu's life simulator, this genre is really more popular than the others

Yes, I'm talking about that little bear girl. Countless simulations have proven her flaws, so she has to live. Can she die after the pig's feet stabilize?

Wrapped in sugar💩, you can't understand it if you have the brain, but you can't even understand it if you don't have the brain.

It's becoming more and more abstract. No wonder the monthly ticket is so small. If I can't continue writing, I just finish it. I think of writing one chapter at a time. Is it interesting? The front and rear don't match up and it doesn't look smooth either.

Yesterday, I dreamed that I seemed to be the reincarnation idea of ​​the protagonist. I became a superman-like existence in an ordinary world (non-taboo world), fighting aliens with my friends. In the dream, I knew the existence of other people, but I felt that the description of Donghuang Taiyi was too abstract. It was not as good as "I can only explode stars, but I can actually fly freely".

Those scenes with women and children are fucking bullshit.

I spent a long time writing about Honghuangliu, and I was speechless. Fortunately, I found out that it was Honghuangliu before I put it on the shelves, so I didn't waste any money.

Is it Mr. Hua? Infinite world, irresistible crisis, dragging down the family. Coinciding with the myth. Infinite reincarnation. No matter how you look at it, this looks like the handiwork of Hua Gonggong. Wonderful is very wonderful. But, there is a eunuch crisis. The subsequent plot is indeed difficult to think about and difficult to write. However, as a bystander, I probably saw something. So, if you want to help the author, don't be a eunuch. The core routine of this book is nothing more than. One, encountering an irresistible life and death crisis. Two, use golden fingers to break the game. The reason for the eunuch is simply that he can't think of anything at these two important plot points. The simulation plot is almost acceptable. But if there is a problem with the plot at an important node, there will be a eunuch crisis. You must hold on, I invested. Maybe the author is not Mr. Hua. Maybe, I guess. But please don't be a eunuch and slap me in the face. This style is infinitely close to the demon monk, 90% sure.

After reading the end of the first chapter and the beginning of the second chapter, I can only say to the author, if you don't know how to use percentages, don't use them. If you don't know how to use the data, don't write it down. Otherwise, everyone will come to criticize you.

I can't stand it after reading 3 chapters, it's too watery

The writing was very stiff at the beginning, mainly because the routines were too similar. But after the beginning, it gradually got better and blended very well.

Author, can you write less about women? Have all the male followers died?

To evaluate it objectively from my personal point of view, I feel that this book becomes more and more uglier towards the end, and it feels a bit like starting high and going low. It was estimated that the performance would plummet after it was released, but I decided to give up after seeing more than 70 chapters.

It's a really heart-wrenching plot that I've simulated so many times.

Author, are you authorized by Nezha Er to arrive? Otherwise, it will be removed from the shelves if reported.

The biggest shortcoming before Chapter 217 is that the author has clearly written that after several demonstrations, it will become an established reality that cannot be changed, and he also writes that he will directly prove a incomplete blue sky. Then after Chapter 217, the writing was very confusing. I didn't know what I was writing. It was very strange. Maybe I just wrote whatever I fantasized about. The end is unfinished and the ending is very hasty The biggest problem with this book is that the realms are very unclear. Different worlds and different cultivation systems do not know which realm corresponds to which realm, and what is the combat power. The early stage is chaotic after the enlightenment, and the later stage is also chaotic. It is quite good before Chapter 217, and after that, it is considered to be finished.

Anyone with two million words or less is considered a eunuch.

I finished it in the middle of the afternoon on the weekend. It's worth watching and subscribing. The pace is a little fast but appropriate. Many of the stitches are cleverly sewn, giving it the feel of a grand narrative. It is the best thing to watch in the past 40 days. The writing is not jerky, it feels like a veteran's vest, but it is not as soulless as those great gods. Anyway, I chased him.

It becomes more and more abstract in the back, but it's okay in the front.

When will the new book be released🙂

Can it be refined🥺

Chapter 140, Donghuang World, is not recommended to be read after that. The setting has been stitched together, and there is no trace of the author's thinking. It is just for the sake of numbers. Some readers applaud it just because they like ancient stories, not because the author wrote them well 😰😰😰

I've finished reading it. It's more than just food and grass. The writing behind it is too messy.

In addition to some unknown plots, there is another thing the author wrote that is particularly uncomfortable, that is, he cannot distinguish between him and her. It may seem like just a typo, but it actually greatly affects the reading experience of the entire paragraph.