The True Immortal of Swordsmanship

I used to take care of my sister, but now I take care of my sister-in-law. It's really...

I haven't read it yet, but I admit that I was completely attracted by the introduction. The twist at the end is a masterstroke. I have saved it. This is the most attractive introduction I have ever seen on Qidian. At the same time, I will transform into Shennong to test the poison for you. Wait for my news...

The protagonist is not the reincarnation of the Sword Immortal, but just a young man who has received an incomplete inheritance from the Sword Immortal. He does not have the aura of a big boss in his behavior, and he is neither cautious nor knowledgeable. He is not the strongest person in the world who defeated the demon. It may be that the author is too young and cannot write that sense of sedimentation, so the character is seriously separated from the plot. It would be consistent if he was not reborn but gained some memories.

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The protagonist is often invisible for two or three chapters. In a book with only over fifty chapters, the protagonist doesn't even appear in many chapters. . .

I'm going to test the poison

666

Very exciting, very beautiful. An evaluation from a Shenlong who has been reading for 15 years.

Step by step, the writing is perfect, good luck to the author!

If it's a group portrait article, I think the audience might not be too large, but please come on, author.

I'll take a screenshot and post it first as a souvenir. This may be a unique opportunity in my life

The writing is okay, but it is a common problem in many online articles. Regarding the grasp of age and status, many online articles contain high-ranking officials and masters of cultivating immortals. In the end, when written, they feel like nouveau riche. Their experience is not enough.

The protagonist does not necessarily have to take first place, after all, the other party is better than you Background Strong family power Herbal medicines are constant Exquisite swords Top masters Why should you, a grassroots person, take first place? Isn't this a slap in the face of the world?

In the new world, if you have the basic skills, can you just modify them yourself? A genius among the great geniuses in the world doesn't have this kind of understanding? Why would you want to go to a third-rate sect? If you want to go to a big sect with such a high level, you will recover in a few years. If not, you will become a powerful person. The Meng family can regret it and restore two favors to him. Wouldn't it be over with her daughter's sword energy, and she has to spend the rest of her life in this small world? I really can't see why the protagonist can reach the realm of ascension. What kind of big world can the protagonist be in if he can reach the first three realms by practicing some animal blood? Drive high and go low.

It's an old routine but with a little bit of something new. But the writing of fighting is particularly bad. If it writes less about fighting, I think it can still be called food.

I really don't know what to say. I feel quite sad now. This Tuesday, the 12th, when I was reading another book, I didn't wait for the update. I only waited for a single chapter. I felt something was wrong. Then I wrote a 1,500-word review in the comment area of ​​the book, asking the author to stop. Good news, the author changed his mind again and decided to write it down. I felt quite relieved at the time. After all, it is very difficult to find a few books that suit my appetite in the vast sea of ​​books in Qidian. After I became the operator, I deleted some excessive negative comments in the chapters and comment areas, because I didn't want the author to be tripped up by these comments. Then I also mentioned paper-cutting in the 1500-word essay. I always think that books written by paper-cutting are above average, and all good and bad reviews will be accepted. Unless the reviews are too violent, they will be deleted. This is very different from other authors who don't get any bad reviews. At that time, I felt that paper cutting could go a long way. Perhaps I came across this book a little late, on a boring day, reading one book after another on the new book list. In fact, I was interested in two books at first, but the direction of the other one became more and more weird, so I focused on this book. When the author said he wanted to write a group portrait, I was quite nervous. After all, group portraits are really difficult to write, and it is not an easy task to establish the personality of each character. But as of now, the characters of those who appear more often are almost established. Someone else said before that the rebirth did not use the swordsmanship from the original world. Chaosui also used it, and the writing was very exciting. Finally arrived at the new map, I am quite looking forward to what kind of plot there will be. As a result, yesterday I cut the paper and worked hard to update it with 6,000 words, and I will publish a single chapter today, which shows that I was really hurt by the bad comments. Maybe I was hurt by that bad comment, and then I thought of all the bad comments accumulated over a long time, and I may feel tired. Perhaps Papercut tries hard to cater to the preferences of all readers, but the bad reviews always outweigh the good ones, which makes him a little frustrated. But paper-cutting, no matter how good-looking the book is, will always have bad reviews, but the bad reviews will never be able to drown out the readers who really like Kendo Zhenxian. I still remember you said in the group a few days ago that we will all order 500 each, and it will only be a matter of time before we all order 1,000. I am really happy for you. Whether you are an experienced author or a new author, if your part-time writing has not been promoted much, you can be on the new book list and get 200+ first orders, which is already a particularly remarkable achievement. Really, it completely destroyed the book I told you about in the group. At that time, I was very happy to tell my friends that the book I was running would definitely be completed, and I also asked several friends to subscribe and support it. When Papercut asked me to come up with the fan title, I thought about it for a long time and couldn't think of a good one. A few friends helped me and came up with a fan title that sounded better and was not occupied by other writers. I am already imagining what the title event will look like after Kendo True Immortal comes out of the circle at LV3. Alas. Since this is Paper-cut's decision, it must be a single chapter that Paper-cut decided to write after considering many factors. In fact, it is very painful to see a book with potential that is only halfway through. I would also like to quote this sentence here: We accidentally choose to encounter books, or we think it is a coincidence, but in fact we just do not see the intricate line of cause and effect. I know this very well, but when I meet the book by chance, I still feel a certain fate. Morimi Nobumihiko "The spring night is short, girl, go forward!" Perhaps it is not a good thing for the author to pay too much attention to the bad reviews in the book review area. If you want to write a book after cutting paper, you can try to ignore some negative comments. Readers who really support you will generally just read the book silently, while readers who write negative reviews may not really support you. Your book is very beautiful, don't be discouraged. If you open a new book one day, or use another author account to publish a new book, please be sure to work hard! I'm really looking forward to the day when both orders exceed 1,000. 24.11.15 Haglanlan

The pacing is not good, the narrative is weak, the characterization is superficial, it is smooth, the author should be in the growth stage, and the future is promising and can be supported.

Everything was good before writing about the Fog Kingdom. After the Fog Kingdom, God's Eye mode and Perspective mode were turned on crazily. It felt like wherever I went, it started to trigger the rewind of history. When the woman saw the protagonist, she started to madly rant about the history of the Fog Kingdom. She almost turned into the God's Eye narration... Even if she was afraid of her strength, she couldn't advance the plot in this way. She just omitted the character to promote the investigation step. What else is there to explore in the Fog Kingdom. Literary drama can be polished and polished, but Wudiliu is most taboo with such condescending event triggers. The author can take a look at Angry Squid's true cultivation of immortality, which is a cycle of reincarnation. Even if you restart it countless times and know countless secrets, accidents will happen and you have to restart it again. You have to make good use of what you know, and then leave the suspense to the unknown.

A naughty imitator, too literary and youthful

Howl look! It should be a good grass😊

Shouldn't a swordsman like to seize the mai and replace cutting with a knife?

💩Finding gold in 💩. Grain and grass are very beautiful

The definition of realm is rather vague. From the perspective of spiritual practice and definition, people feel that this is a short drama, but I didn't expect it to be so short.

😅😅Difficult to stretch

Are you really not going to write anymore? It's okay to write slowly. Just update when you feel inspired.

No more writing? I still want to gain weight before reading-__-

I've read more than 70 chapters, but I haven't seen how much help the protagonist has in his previous life. Even if the exercises are not good, the skills should be usable. The protagonist didn't even have any skills in his previous life? Then why write about time travel?