Love Apartment: Martin's Transformative Adventure

I think it would be best to add the setting from the Conan books by Martin, where as long as you fall asleep, people will forget all the outrageous things you did the next day and fill in other things in your mind. For example, in Bowser's case, people might associate it with a film crew shooting a movie or something.

I suggest you don't write too much of the original plot dialogue. I've watched it countless times and I can recite it by heart. Why would I want to repeat it here?

This is so confusing. They can't even explain the transformation clearly. How can a transformation happen so suddenly that you're in someone else's house and then suddenly in your own house?

Martin's writing in *iPartment* was perfectly fine, but he had to add the trope of leaving people behind after sleeping, and even leaving behind this woman. I came to see the main characters transform and have fun in *iPartment*, but this turned out awkward. The part where everyone in *iPartment* was tricked into speaking up for her was already annoying, and then they locked the main character outside and kicked him in the groin—was that really interesting? I'm leaving.

Before, Detective Chinatown was alright; I could even tolerate Jackie Chan Adventures. But ever since the scene where a woman is left in the bedroom, I just can't continue reading. I came to this book because of Martin's abilities and the series of hilarious, chaotic scenes in the apartment. Now, it feels like a Korean drama to me.

After adding Kiko, the plot became a complete mess. If she were a likable character, it wouldn't be so bad, but the protagonist had to be turned into a simp. Her superpowers changed every day and then disappeared. As a transmigrator, it feels like she's lived in a daze all these years.

You guys actually clicked on this just because of the description? You really don't know what to eat!

The author's writing is somewhat rushed, especially the protagonist's transformation mechanic. The interpersonal relationships that result from the transformation, and the impact of the events it causes, are all poorly explained. Also, the process of the protagonist moving into the Love Apartment is strange.

I couldn't read any further after chapter 173. The protagonist's transformation ability has no impact on the characters in Love Apartment, and even the protagonist himself has no impact on the plot. It's basically the same original story. Most of the plot after the protagonist transforms is the author's original creation, and it rarely affects the original plot of Love Apartment.

I paid a dollar to subscribe, and I want to say: "I'm not here to read the original plot and dialogue."