Starting from The Legend of the Condor Heroes: Ouyang Ke Was Crippled from the Start

What I feel when I read it now is that it was written by a novice from 10 years ago. The writing style is immature and behind the times. I would like to suggest you either switch to a different subject, or read more high-quality martial arts works, and then scan the book list to learn more.

No, is the protagonist's cultivation level high or low? How come anyone can have a 50-50 tie with the protagonist, a 50-50 tie with Ouyang Ke, and a 50-50 tie with Ouyang Feng. I'm baffled by this.

I'm really speechless. In order to write a conflict, the protagonist is forced to be chased in various ways, and he can't get rid of it no matter what! Anyone can find him.

The author is not good enough and has no martial arts flavor

I only read the introduction and beginning of this book, but I haven't read it yet. Your last book was really well written. In fact, you can completely write about Huayu. Many fans of the previous book hope that you can continue to write about Huayu.

The title of the book is too ordinary. If you change it to Guo Jing, you will have the urge to read it.

After practicing the Nine Yin Manual, you must have the strength of three theories and five skills. As a result, the protagonist had to use 80% of his internal strength to defeat Ouyang Ke. The pressure was a bit harsh. Normally, it should be dead in one move.

This track is really niche, and if it doesn't get the limelight right, it will be discontinued immediately. Is it best for you to write about Sissi or urban entertainment? If you write well, you can get ahead.

Introduction, he designed it with others, why is it so awkward to read.

I really like your writing about urban Liu Yifei. It's really good, especially the songs. From the starting point, your song selection is the best👍🏻, better than those singers who choose urban novels👍🏻