Zhutian: Start by Learning How to Draw Talisman from Uncle Jiu

Traditional Taoist novels feel draggy, while Xiaobai Taoist novels feel too basic and lack some basic Taoist rules and etiquette, and I don't have the writing style to write them myself. Go ahead and criticize the author. I can't even write and I'm embarrassed. Come on and raise money to write a novel on your own. I'll come up with the ideas and you'll come up with the writing 😁😁.

Inexplicable, no mana? Are drawing symbols very useful?

At the beginning, the young master of a wealthy family has lost his whole family. What about his family's funeral? What about the fields at home? How to deal with the property at home? Where are the three nails left in the broken ship? Are you just learning from a teacher when you are naked?

Qidian Jiu Shu is probably most famous for being the white-eyed wolf disciple 🤭

Who dares to accept someone who doesn't even care about his parents' affairs?

Chapter 4 is poisonous, and no mana is needed to draw the talisman. . . . Also, don't rush and do it slowly in the beginning. When it comes to drawing symbols, add more points like crazy, for fear that others won't know that you are a dick. It's useless if you don't have the power to draw them normally.

There is a saying: the law should not be passed lightly! It's as simple as the protagonist learning Taoism by reading a book. I think that during the Republic of China, there were many talented people who just grabbed the secret books with cannons and unified the world...

Speechless =_=, obviously the protagonist's gold finger needs time to be maintained slowly, but the result is that he runs out every day, so why not just change it to a gold finger that kills monsters and upgrades?

I feel that one of the most powerful skills in the zombie series is the one where Chizuru Taoist priest makes his peach wood sword glow and pierce the royal zombies.

I have read many books like this, where you become a disciple of Uncle Jiu and you immediately become a disciple, you learn the exercises immediately, and you learn how to draw talisman on the same day and you succeed immediately. Basically, the results are very poor, and then the eunuch

I even doubted whether the male protagonist was a man and could be a eunuch.

The overall feeling is quite good. I wrote my own ideas and did not completely follow the plot of the movie. The setting of the corpse of Mr. Ren is also very good. There are a few points that I feel need to be optimized. The first one is the apprenticeship. It feels too abrupt and there is no foreshadowing. I personally think that accepting apprentices is a more rigorous matter. The second one is the system tasks. If you have to have a bellyband, it will really make a difference. I feel that you can set the tasks as bosses and the like. At present, this Feng Shui master should be a mini-BOSS.

The system is rubbish. The first mission was to steal someone's bellyband. I was really speechless. I might as well just have no heroine and just cultivate immortality.

Come on, although it's quite miserable to see you being sprayed, but if you don't use your brain, I think it's okay. Write well. I admire your perseverance the most. As long as you write seriously, I will always support you!

Reading the introduction, I feel it is poisonous. Did Shen Nong test the poison?

That experience value shouldn't be used on the drawing talisman, and that's it for the liver. I think that experience can be used for breaking through bottlenecks or very difficult exercises. Or it is used in emergencies, but now it is not urgent or in a hurry, so the liver will be done. It is really a waste to use it on that talisman.

Let's bring up some heaven-shielding physique or secret skills, or the curse of the Hong Emperor in the perfect world. "It's a pity, it's sad, it's deplorable! Even if you travel through the heavens, dominate the world for thousands of years, and be the pride of the ages, you will turn around and waste the years, destroying the emperor's body in this life."

Other plots are okay. Why don't you discuss it with Uncle Jiu about Feng Shui Master?

Pretending to be a bitoluori, I spent a long time talking about a lot of nonsense.

If you write the plot well and write a story that is devoted to the truth and open up more of your own ideas, you can still watch it. If you have to have some emotional lines, the writing is disgusting. At first glance, it is just the protagonist's self-entertainment. Except for a few plots, the writing is okay, and the rest is rubbish.

How old was the Republic of China? Don't forget September 18th, the July 7th Incident, and the Nanjing Massacre

Can you lower the price? It's too expensive. I look down upon it! 😭😭😭

If you read it without thinking, you can read Chapter 15

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Chapter 2: Uncle Jiu, I'm not sure yet

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other 😁