Master, Don't Be Like This

The writing is a bit ink-stained, deliberately mysterious, and unclear.

Let me guess, is it possible that this world is polluted, that all righteous paths are filled with monsters, and that the magic gate was established to kill all monsters?

It was so frustrating to read a villain story for the first time. Fortunately, I endured it until chapter 50 to win Ling Xuanyi. After seeing the plot of Ling Xuanyi, you are one step away from writing this book as an NTR story. The author has even written the foreshadowing. I thought I clicked the wrong software to enter the main story of abuse. The content does not match the tags. Your writing for a villain is so weak. There is no "invincible flow", "fast pace" and "online IQ". Not to mention that the plot is dragging and I have read it completely after 50 chapters. I didn't understand what the author wanted to write, so I read patiently and finally saw the protagonist getting out of sex in Chapter 50. At the beginning, other passers-by or enemies were eating meat in large quantities, and the protagonist was still moaning. Each plot section also specifically mentions various passers-by who are having fun. I don't understand the meaning of your handling of these details. Is it just to "disgust readers and I want to prevent the protagonist from eating meat?" Or is it to embody the so-called "innocent villain"?

It's weird, it's like the author figured it out in his head but didn't write it down

I finally understand that the author has good writing skills, but he probably doesn't even know what he is writing when he is writing. The main problem is that the background setting and the plot do not match up. You set the background of the protagonist to be a villain, and the background of the world is the setting of a dark and strange fairy. The author is not strong enough or can write two worldviews in the same world at the same time. As a result, the villain is not exciting and the story is not interesting, and the weird plot is not attractive to people. The author probably didn't understand the audience for his subject matter, so he either changed the title, changed the introduction, and made the first few chapters a little more confusing, instead of writing the first female apprentice he met as a silly sweet girl who is ready to commit suicide; or else he really wrote it as an invincible and refreshing literary style, Delete the descriptions of passers-by and enemy characters having fun every night. If you want to save more words and reduce the protagonist's combat power, you have to write about the protagonist's resourcefulness instead of: Protagonist: "The enemy is so strong that I can't defeat it. What should I do?" Disciples who are interested, no matter how you hint, I will not accept it unless you send yourself to the door yourself." The first disciple: "I'm sorry, Master, I'm holding you back, wuwuwu, I want to commit suicide." The second disciple: "Send yourself to me on your own initiative. I'm really happy to give it to you, Master. Master, I want to help you take down the senior sister~" Enemy 1: "You can have sex with two pretty girls every night and beat the protagonist violently" Enemy 2: "I'm your apprentice to indulge in all the pleasure." Are you willing to accept my love? No matter whether the protagonist is here or not, I still have the strength to attack your female apprentice and I can almost succeed without you? The female apprentice can't commit suicide even if she wants to?" Plot character "Although I am miserable, if you come out and have a noble person like me to help you, you will definitely be able to escape." Brother, your character interaction seems to be more complicated than the other, and it is not suitable for reading with a brain.

The writing is a bit messy, there is no sense of story, and it is quite difficult to read.

Momojiji, should I write the villain or the stallion story clearly?

The previous writing was okay, but when it came to the dozens of chapters about Returning to the Sect, Jumoji, I was jumping to read them.

Can the author think clearly before writing? It seems so cloudy and I don't understand what he is writing about. Go home and sell sweet potatoes as soon as possible.

Now that I've read Chapter 12, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. There's so much and miscellaneous stuff, there's no clear theme, and the characters are all too generic.

This book has a refreshing feeling. It's good. Good luck, author.

The road is long and difficult, I will search up and down, and encourage each other 😁

. . . Maybe there was a problem with the afterlife that caused g