Stop Hypnotizing Me, Villain Princess!

1. The ending is cut in half. Whether it is good or not is a matter of opinion. From the perspective of this book, it is a failure, but from the perspective of a creator's career, at least it is not sloppy. I wish the next one will be better. 2. The first 110 chapters or so of this book, which is before the first climax, are exciting and interesting, and that is why I follow it to this day. The author knows how to write, at least he understands what the average online reader likes and reads, and knows what he is doing. 3. The starting point for the gradual collapse of the story: the original heroine had a split personality around 100,000 years ago and regarded herself as the enemy. It is a very special and interesting setting. However, when I later looked back and saw where I started to write the book, it also started from here. In order to distinguish the different personalities of the original heroine before and after, the characteristics of the heroine were divided and the character was flattened. The original heroine became a crazy yandere, and only a yandere remained. 4. At the same time, from a single heroine novel to a harem NTL novel, the number of female protagonists that need to be controlled changes from one to three or even four, and the world view has also entered from the local border to the core of royal power. At the same time, it has to take into account the changes in time and space one hundred thousand years later, as well as the response to the old enemy. The ambition is strong, but it seems to be beyond the original outline, and the uncontrollable ambition is finally out of control. 5. Until the last two chapters, I was still waiting for the author to compile a new outline to see if it could be revived, but it seemed that there was no way to save it. 6. Summary: The character setting is brilliant, and it was also a potential hit. However, the failure was that the author wanted to control too many characters at the same time, and the pace of the transition period was too big, and it went beyond the outline setting. It can only be a story that was originally read with gusto, but it is a pity.

Hey, the time you save by reading this novel is enough for you to read the three major masterpieces. To cherish life, we should stay away from those water-filled novels. To be honest, this plot is so cliched that it gives people a headache. At the beginning, the relationship between the male and female protagonists is warming up, and the next second there is a big twist of the amnesiac savior. This narrative logic is like riding a roller coaster, and it crashes without warning. Also, the flashbacks were used too casually. I was confused after reading several chapters. The author, could you please read it yourself before writing to make sure the context makes sense? As for the writing style, it is called stiff. The plot and battle scenes made me feel embarrassed and uncomfortable, and the interactions between the characters were also stiff enough to make me dig my toes into the ground. I sincerely recommend the author to go back and review the Chinese textbooks for primary and secondary schools and lay a solid foundation before coming back!

It's a pity that I stayed up late to read it. This book can be implemented smoothly. After all, the airport runway is completely written at the beginning, so the ending is sad. But due to the will of the world for unknown reasons, the author started writing blindly at three-quarters of the way (or earlier) and then finished it. It seems that the rather clumsy writing style in the middle and later stages of the novel really made the readers who were following it quite uncomfortable, causing the author to go crazy and lose control of the novel as if "reflecting on the past", leading to a sudden and nonsense ending. As if the author is taking revenge on the readers, this ending is too much to describe even with the word "bad ending". The story ends abruptly, the holes dug are not filled, even the written characters are not finished, forced trance, various plots of unknown reasons... If it is the old-fashioned story of everyone making dumplings happily after defeating the BOSS, then I would still highly recommend this book, but such an ending really makes people hesitate. The number of comments also started to decrease sharply in the last 20%, so that there were almost no comments in the last plot, which shows that this plot is very discouraging. In the end, it was even so confusing that the real girlfriend was wrong? What are you doing? But then again, the protracted psychological description in the middle and later stages of the book, the large emotional drama in the early stage, and the low number of words in the back make it a good read. Personally, I especially like the emotional scenes in the early and middle stages. The emotional dispute between the heroines later is quite interesting, but unfortunately there are few vivid and detailed descriptions, it is just a matter of laughter. What impressed me most was that one chapter was quite well written, but the rest was average. In this case, the emotional scenes with the female protagonist that appear to be "forced to go with the flow" are much more interesting.

Very good character portrayal, I also like the author's narrative style, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very enjoyable, and the male and female supporting characters are also well written. I read Chapter 112 in one go, and I saw that the protagonist wanted to use a sealed object to defeat the heroine of the original work. If I found a new heroine, I felt that using props would be cheap. It would be better to really change the other person's feelings. It would be weird if he was just a simple villain but spent a lot of time conquering and then throwing away the game. It feels difficult to write, and the overall feeling is not good. This comment is used as a mark. If the author publishes a new book, I will come back and check it out.

Beautiful, a magical masterpiece of light novels

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Brothers, come and report, the book will be returned with a few coins after being sealed! Push me up 😆😆

Report to all sirs, demining soldier report! It took me an hour to read the first twenty chapters. It is really interesting, the writing is good, the characters are well drawn, and it is very comfortable to read.

Is this planting yours

Villain Noble Young Master: In the beginning, there is usually a distinguished background, such as a title of earl or above, or a royal family, with elders, but in most cases he is a strong man who can shake people up The advantage is that there will be no inexplicable villains, and it is easier to show his dignity in front of others. The disadvantage is that the difficulty of the plot is generally higher. A common plot is to resolve death flags related to bloodline, plot, and heroine Passenger Chamber of Commerce Young Master: There will be enough squanderable property at the beginning, and there is no strong plot death flag like the noble young master. The advantage is that the plot is relatively easy, and the elders are more marginalized in the plot. The disadvantage is that the family elders basically only have money, but no fighting power or connections in the extraordinary world. A common plot is to solve the weaker death flag, or use the plot to gain the heroine's wool The villain's daughter's staff At the beginning, she has no relatives or was adopted, knowingly or unknowingly, and In the story of the game, young girls who are bosses mix together and become his subordinates or friends The advantage is that after the start or a short period of time, there will be a number one heroine who will easily fall in love with you due to her withdrawn personality and pay special attention to you, and the further you go, the better she can be. The disadvantage is that it is easy to be in a weak position in the relationship between two people, and even be trained to lose the initiative that the protagonist should have. A common plot is to save the villain's daughter and emotional tension Members of a secret organization The starting point is usually with no relatives or ordinary family background. In the early stage of the plot, actively or passively enter a certain relationship with A secret organization with strong official power, becoming a transcendent and gradually being promoted The advantage is that the start is low, the sense of substitution is stronger, and there is no burden of life experience. The disadvantage is that the plot is generally the most difficult, there are villains, and due to the identity, the attack speed of the heroine is slow The common plot is to gain power and conflict with the boss.

To be honest, I'm scolding you now because I think the front part looks good. I really can't understand that this book's grades are not bad, right? Why was it cut off when it was at its peak...

Eunuchs who each order 30,000 yuan are quite rare.

What should this book achieve?

Tian cheese! ! ! ! I***! ! ! You are an author! A young author who is ignored by book friends! ! Why don't you update it when you show off your power here? ! ! ! Don't you want to fish? I tell you! Do you want a reward? ! Monthly ticket... I have already followed other authors who are diligent in updating! ! ! ! ! 😡😡😡

Ending 1: The Perfect Container For the smooth arrival of the Moon Goddess, the church has been secretly preparing for hundreds of years. The result of countless failures is an elf girl who is not stained with dirt and is like porcelain. "Call! Call! When the goddess comes, the container itself will shed tears of joy!" But who cares about the thoughts of that kind of thing (laughing) Ending 2: False redemption "Let's escape." In the pattering rain, two figures, one tall and one short, cuddled tightly together. After months of tense escape, the two finally arrived at the border without any danger. "I want to raise a brown dog... And a flower garden! In the past, grandma would not let me touch anything, and she said that a saint only needs to pray to the goddess!" The girl next to her had a cold face, and her words were clearly complaining, but she was full of agility and joy that belonged to her age.          ""，"，...！"， After "punishing" the boy with a moderate kick, the girl turned her head to the side as if she was sulking, but still hugged the boy's arm tightly. Lin En chuckled, feeling the quiet and elegant fragrance around him, and rubbed his brow tiredly. After months of running away, all this is finally coming to an end. He has turned his back on Miss Witch and His Royal Highness without permission, but has decided to shoulder the life of the girl in front of him, and cannot allow himself to think about other things. "Lynn!" After coming back to his senses, he realized that this was the call of the girl in his arms, followed by a sharp pain that went straight to his soul, and blood bloomed around him like a bead of sand. "Lin... En..." In the night rain, I couldn't tell whether it was the whisper of a girl's lover or the cursed whisper of the white-haired devil in front of me Ending 3: The dream of two people The goddess of the bright moon has arrived. What makes people think endlessly is that this god neither conveyed divine revelation to the believers nor expanded his faith, but immediately attacked the stronghold of the three princesses, causing a tragedy of severed limbs and then kidnapped a man. At this time, in the God's room of the Silent Church, a young man was naked and restrained. The girl beside him buried her head in his neck, and her slender little hands were not idle, roaming and rubbing his skin. "How can you let Tiya go!" The extremely ambiguous scene was broken by the young man's cold voice with suppressed anger. Although she has the same appearance as Tia, the girl in front of her is undoubtedly the moon goddess Beatrice. Originally, the worst outcome of the world line was for Her Royal Highness to sleep. However, due to her arrogance and self-righteousness, she was already dead at this time. In the end, she was unable to protect anything. Now her only extravagant wish is to obtain a glimmer of life for Tiya from the hands of the Moon Goddess. "I am Tiya." The girl in front of him licked his earlobe flirtatiously. They had the same facial features, but she looked charming and coquettish. Lin En glared at Yun Chang with hatred. He was clearly surrounded by enemies who had killed many of his relatives and friends, but under the instigation of the Moon Goddess, he was still eager to fight at this moment. "Bea... Hiss..." At this moment, he was shocked to realize that there was a pair of cold and delicate little hands, gently soothing his murderous intention and restlessness, just like that distant night, raw and slow, like a novice who had just started on the road, stumbling and stumbling. "Tia... Ya?" Lin murmured, grabbing this slightly absent-minded gap, followed by a faint fragrance that was close at hand. But what was different from the past was that this kiss seemed to be trying to make up for something or to catch something, long and long. "Tiya... Ya..." In the quiet shrine, only the sound of water and the breathing of young men and women were left from time to time. "Lin... En..." In the end, there was only a sound that sounded like a response and a sigh of contentment.

It's true that my brother left millions without making any money. I'll drink a glass of wine as a penalty to cheer him up.

I really like the author's sentence "The average price is 29,000, so you can eat with confidence."

To be honest, the writing is indeed very good. The chapter reviews can be praised simply because there are too few updates. Anyone who can talk about emotional drama is also a genius. If you don't foreshadow it, I'm looking at you. So why is nnnd updated so slowly and every time?

I don't even know the book has been copied.

Is the starting point always to side with the eunuch author? There is no punishment at all, he will dare next time.

Are there any similar meal replacements? Can anyone recommend them? I read reviews of this book and said it was bad, but I finished reading it anyway and felt that the previous writing was really good.

Chains of order, white hair and red eyes

It started high and went low. It looked pretty good in the early stage, but it started to get worse after the memory was sealed in the middle stage. It was even more confusing in the later stage. In the end, it was a shocking mess. I really had no choice 🙂

Saw the early morning, too little, really beautiful, don't say much, just go to bed 😒😒😒

Good guy, I call you good guy

No, I still have to curse when I come back, it's such a shame for this book

I was bored and browsed some book circles and found this

In the comment section of today's book, I came across the late Quine problem and the explanation possibility problem similar to the grandmother's paradox. I tried my best and couldn't overcome it, so I made a little space and didn't expect everyone to know about it. (ps: burned out... I won't type the words again, the order: top → bottom → bottom up)

After watching half of it, I couldn't bear it anymore and was poisoned and died on the spot. I failed to write before I returned to the imperial capital. Firstly, the protagonist's memory problem was tampered with, and it has not been solved for a long time. The hole has been dug but not filled, right? Normal operation should be for the protagonist to recover by himself through bits and pieces or abilities. Even if it is not good, the witch can help him recover, but what is the result? Without mentioning a word, is this still the protagonist? Is this still the original protagonist? Is he still the same person with distorted and tampered memories? The feeling of substitution was interrupted here, and I was confused. Along with the feeling of substitution, the sense of expectation also stopped. ,,, Secondly, before returning to the imperial capital, the protagonist really turned into a dog, a dog, which was so frustrating and disappointing. Being fought over by two women, the protagonist has no ability to fight back. In addition, the protagonist has no control. Comparing the previous plots, the protagonist's control is very strong, crazy, beyond expectations, and he will do whatever he doesn't accept, and he has the rhythm in his hands, but what about now? The main character literally turns into a dog. Even though he was tied with a chain of thorns and hypnotized at the beginning, the heroine did not shy away from treating him as a dog. At that time, the reader felt that the protagonist was not a dog, and he would not become a dog in the end. The protagonist has the ability to fight back, wisdom, and cheats. He has abilities that others do not have and is beyond the control of the heroine. However, before returning to the imperial capital, all the protagonist's abilities suddenly collapsed, and he really turned into a dog. The future heroine's memory was tampered with by the witch. Under the heroine's beauty and welfare, she gradually turned into a dog. She lost her ability to fight back and wisdom. She was snatched back and forth by the two heroines and turned into a dog. The effect of the plug-in was minimal. The protagonist's control over the overall situation was suddenly gone. The sense of expectation collapsed instantly. Even if you don't mention the sense of expectation, you must at least have a sense of involvement when reading a book. Why does the book have a protagonist? Isn't it just for the convenience of readers? Now the protagonist has really turned into a dog, being robbed here and there, and fed with beauty by a sick owner. It seems like a victory, but in fact it is a complete defeat. Getting beauty will only make people feel sick instead of satisfying their desires. Those benefits are dog food. When the protagonist becomes a dog, how can people accept it?

Why don't you update this quickly? ? ?