Chat Group: Starting from the Dog-Licking Dan Wang Furukawa

After reading this introduction, I guess most people won't click on it, right? Um?

Mainly, this book can only attract people who like married women and mothers. Most readers are shouting about Jian'an character, but in fact they only want to see the pure part. I can't accept it anyway. The subject matter is very good, but I can't accept that it is all second-hand. In fact, at the beginning, more originals can attract people, and second-hand ones can add color.

I feel like I'm going to be banned. The detailed descriptions almost make me read it as a pornographic article.

One moment was Furukawa, the other was Su Zhe, who copied it? Or a studio, a running account

The protagonist's name is sometimes called this and sometimes that, and the name is not changed when he copies it?

The setting is rubbish. Just skip the things that cannot be taken in the mortal world. You still have to write about finding the little green bottle and being warned by Han Tianzun. Can the Taoist master in the mortal world go back to the past? Does he have the power to warn you? Written like shit

I felt like I was writing it for myself to watch. The setting jumped inexplicably, which made me confused. Those settings are in your mind and in your words, but they are not in the book.

The protagonist seems to have no understanding of the world of Dou Po and other people in the group, so it doesn't make much sense to arrange the identity of the time traveler. Why not just write about the indigenous ancient river?

Drainage method-suction of the heart Eyes: [fixed eyes] Brain: Look faster

In the first three chapters, I punished your licking dog and even hired a female group leader. Did you all write the book using AI templates?😅

The writing style is different before and after. Either the author has changed, or it is a studio story. Especially the later part cannot be read. There could be more female protagonists, but in the later part Douluo is a female and it is rejected. It is too poisonous.

Don't write your next book without a heroine

Should all beauties be collected?

Swallowing the Starry Sky, can you collect Xu Xin, Zhen Nan, and Tang Yongqing?

It's very important to catch up on new book issues!

Doupo Yafei's name was spelled wrong, it's not Fei

Don't be so stupid with your plot. Advance the plot quickly.

I'm sorry, the person has definitely been replaced. It's inconsistent and painful.

Retreat, other systems are intruding.