Sword Domination: Ten Times the Talent at the Beginning

The original protagonist has such a good character, but the way you wrote it has a strong secondary style, and the strong character is gone. It is no different from the usual pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. If you want to add some elements of your own, and add some other skills, it is not as good as the comprehension of the original work. It is completely like a primary school student who has eaten brain platinum and has a worrying IQ.

To be honest, traveling through Ye Chen is quite boring. Originally, Ye Chen's talent is at the level of a god, and he is basically invincible all the way. If you travel through Ye Chen and add ten times the talent, it is just the icing on the cake. It is not as interesting as traveling through Ye Chen with a supporting character who is the master of swordsmanship and starting a counterattack, and there is also Ye Chen's duel, which is interesting 😎😎😎

I originally thought it was only ten times the talent of ordinary people, but now it is ten times the talent after the comprehension level given by the Sword God. It feels a bit difficult to write. If the strength grows too fast, it will collapse. If it grows too slowly, it will be considered as a level down. It is difficult to grasp.

Ye Chen's character design is already good enough. If you are writing Ye Chen, it will be difficult to write the indifference and grace of the original work. Fried Eggs with Green Peppers There are two books about the mastery of swordsmanship. They both have high-quality badges, which you can learn from. It is better to travel through Lynch. To be honest, the story of Lynch in the extra chapter is also good.

Ye Chen has such a good character but you wrote him off as a pretentious person! ? ?

Does Ye Chen have any regrets? Traveling through Ye Chen is not as good as traveling through Ye Hai! Ye Haicai has many stories to dig out

1. Luo Hanshan 2. Ye Tianhao 3. Sikong Sheng 4. Bai Wuxue 5. Monster 6. Dragon King 7 Chu Zhongtian 8. Dugujue 9. Original protagonist (Ye Chen era) 10. Original protagonist (Xuanhou era) 11. Beast master Mo Xiang 12. Young giant Bai Wuxue

I really like Taixu's Sword Master. Although the original work has many shortcomings, I can't stand it and it really got me. So I wanted to find some fans to read, but I really couldn't find any good ones. They were either unfinished or eunuchs. The few completed books, such as Emerald Valley, started with the original work and didn't have any new copies of their own. So far, this one is the most readable one. Although the character is different from the original work and has become more domineering and flamboyant, it still feels good to read! It's just that Ye Chen's talent is abnormal. If he opens a 10x BUFF, is this combat power too supermodel? The geniuses of his generation are no match at all. Now he skips some small dungeons and comes directly to Tianwu Domain. The author feels that he is stuck. He will update it in 4 months. Chapter 2 has been completed. I think I haven't thought about the follow-up plot. Here are some thoughts: 1. Ye Chen is so buggy now. Do you still need the secret method of immortality? If not, how to write the plot of Murong? The underground Murong's will transforms into the demonic will, and there is also a martial arts. The key is the bond. If you want to continue her heroine, you still have to consider the relationship; 2. There is no need to go to the martial arts tea party of the Southern Domain Group, but the Tianwu Domain should have more intense martial arts exchanges. The martial arts conference at the Star Realm level can be imitated; 3. Tianwu Domain There are many forbidden areas in the domain. It is suspected that the nine sects and the four major families in the original work have the role of suppressing the sealed place. For example, the blood-weeping ghost ghost that is not mentioned in the original work can open a copy. After all, Bai Wuxue has been there, and the blood-cutting ghost finger is likely to come from here. I am very happy I like this five-star secret method. The original work is really not well written, and it is useless in the hands of the original protagonist. According to my opinion, this secret method is specifically for body refining, and it will not have any effect on body refining. And now the protagonist has such a strong soul power, it is really useless if he doesn't learn it. It's a pity; 4. The young Big Five should have been to the West Sea and the North Sea. Princess Shensha is originally a monster of the West Sea. She has known and communicated with the other Big Four. Is there any good place or other special place in the West Sea? You can expand it, including the North Sea. In the sea, there are many barbarians in the north, and the original book also describes species such as sub-giants. It is completely possible to write the North Sea to have the flavor of the North Sea in Fengshen, instead of letting Jiang Tian's family dominate; 5. Since there are three continents in the original work, the geniuses from the three continents should communicate with each other. , After all, the secret realm of life and death must be entered by a half-step king, and it opens every ten years, so there can be more frequent exchanges. For example, there is a place in the middle of the three continents where continent-level geniuses gather, and it is a copy, and the most exciting part of the original is the genius battle! This point needs to be carried forward; 6. The Changtian Sect doesn't know how the author will deal with it, but the top-level arcane martial arts of the Fire Emperor is still needed, and the Yuanhuang ink drawing of the Zhenshui Palace should also be a must, so the Blood Sky Continent is going, and the forbidden area with the Blood Demon Crystal can also be visited. Things that can improve the spiritual body are still very important; 7. Having said that, the various competitions in Jiulong Lake and the copies of the Four Great Emperors' Tombs must be written, it looks good! The plot of the human-demon family depends on the author. If the heroine is Murong, she can pretend to be awesome; 8. When she gets stronger later, she can go to various sealing places to slay the demons. If she can't slay them, she can learn to seal them. After all, every continent has forbidden places to seal the demons. Prepare for the subsequent alien war; 9. I don't know if the author has any ideas about the starry sky after the alien catastrophe. Anyway, I think the original work is so bad that I don't even want to read it. If the author writes it, he can completely change it according to his own ideas. In short, the author should not stop updating, don't give up, and keep updating. Even if the minimum limit is 2,000 words per day, this book should have good results. There should be a lot of fans of the original work, and there are really very few well-written fans. Come on!

Can you break away from the original work and write it? There is a lot of content in the original work, and are you prepared to let the protagonist take the same path as the original work?

It's a bit weird. Aren't you writing about the mastery of swordsmanship? Ye Chen's understanding is not bad to begin with, and he was even improved by the Sword God. Now that you are on Ye Chen's body again, didn't I just re-read an article about swordsmanship?

Is this written about Ye Chen? Is it written about a pretender?

Damn it, Ye Chen still needs you to strengthen him?

This book was signed on the evening of the 4th, thank you brothers

The author should use less ah words when coding. If you use too much, it will look childish and read strangely. Some sentences do not need to add the word ah, but the author's addition of the word ah will make people less interested in reading.

When the author was typing today, I found that there were a lot of typos in the article. Then I read the previously posted chapters and found that there were a lot of typos and unreadable sentences. I am going to revise and polish them again. For future improvement methods, the author will read it again before sending it out. I would also like to trouble all readers. If you find typos or sentences that are not readable later, you can post them in the comments. The author will definitely change them when he sees them. Thank you.

Ye Chen, who is ten times more talented, should be able to pretend to be a natural Taoist body (the ten times true energy of Emperor Yuan), which should allow them to invest more resources. The other side said that he had obtained part of the inheritance of the War King, and wanted to help the War King's sect, so he took the opportunity to dig up the Yuan Emperor's grave. The Yuan Emperor was no weaker than the four great emperors. The Yuan Emperor's Three Flowers Borrowing Channel can be said to be a very powerful amplification secret method in the world of true spirits.

When will the Phoenix Has Tears open a new book by Kendo Sovereign?

The follow-up trend will basically be a horizontal push. Most of the sealed demons will be wiped out under the guidance of Emperor Yuan. The invasion of the demons will intensify, but it will still be a horizontal push.

Can Phoenix just kill all the Yuwen family who are lingering in tears? You

Then write about the original protagonist who came from a big family in the Xuanhou era.

There was still a market for the book written ten years ago, but now the original book is no longer popular.

I originally had a cold and sneezed, but I ended up with a nosebleed that couldn't stop, and my nose was stuffed with a tissue that was at least 10 centimeters long.

The protagonist of "Phoenix Tears" got the innate immortal aura of the law of time and space and traveled to the world of swordsmanship only to find out that Queen Xuan has just risen.

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The body-building exercises that Xu Jing practiced in Baoyuan Realm are the ones in the ancient scroll. Does anyone know what they are called?