Cultivation of Immortality: I Use Talismans to Seek Immortality

I suggest cutting it, for the following reasons: First of all, I read the introduction, and I couldn't stand it. It felt like a bad book. Being born with 5 spiritual roots, and then being proficient in all kinds of messy things and becoming the best in the world, it is very abrupt and cliché. I also don't like to see the protagonist be a waste and then get a cheat that defies heaven. It is better to change it to the posture of a person with three spiritual roots. He has made great achievements in the talisman and magic. He uses the talisman to enter the Tao and uses the talisman to drive his cultivation to achieve a heaven-defying posture. This would feel much more reasonable. You don't use a brainless system, and it's ridiculous that you are proficient in everything.

I hope there is still the setting of Zifu in the realm. I don't know why. They don't write more fairy tales when they are weak. In the later stage, when the realm is high, they basically change the map to crush others. It remains unchanged for thousands of years. When the realm is still low, when the realm is weak, the story of slowly becoming stronger is good to watch.

Good guy, write a family novel to reward yourself with a mortal novel.

Sure enough, after writing 8 million words, it's still the same

Complete plagiarism from Zhenwen Changsheng...

5 Spiritual roots can persuade many people to retreat.

It's too humorous to write about Wulinggen now.

It's the Five Spiritual Roots again! How nice to write a three-spirit root! Neither up nor down, it won't make people feel like waste, the training speed is not particularly fast, and it has a lot of writability.

Reward a mortal? The first two books on Beast Control have been thrown into the sea, but I still have to worry about it.

It's still TM Five Spiritual Roots, the title is Talisman, and the introduction is Almighty. I feel like I'm going to rush into the street. I can't hand over the coins casually. I have to wait and see.

The introduction describes omnipotence, which seems uninteresting. I thought it was specialization in talismans.

The discussion of issues in this book is rational It can be seen as a reference, the book Zhenwen Longsheng Let me talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this book, the pace is slow, (three million words column base) 1. The characters are facially formed, and the portrayal of his parents is just like copying the template of parents in the swallowing star sky, a resolute father and a virtuous mother. However, they are too far away from Tomato's writing style, and the length is very annoying to read. 2. The so-called formation in the book is more like a mortal talisman. When engraved on armor, it becomes an armor formation. This is a matter of opinion. 3. It is always emphasized that teachers with various supporting roles are surprised that the protagonist can depict the formation of the second grade in the first grade of elementary school This is a big poisonous point in my opinion, and I discarded it after seeing more than a hundred chapters This book also has advantages in getting better grades 1. It's more like a fairy tale. The protagonist has never encountered any difficulties and has been supported along the way. Everyone is kind to the protagonist 2. The author's writing style is delicate and he writes a lot about daily life. The audience thinks it is fairy grass, but I think it is poison

Personally, I feel that playing with talismans is not as good as refining medicine to control beasts, or even better than refining weapons. The writability is not that good either, just wait and see.

I thought it was the protagonist gathering runes in his body and forming talisman species! The result is an ordinary mortal who cultivates immortality.

Isn't the title of the book "The Talisman to Seek Immortality" bad? Why add a colon? ? ? Still first person. . .

After reading the first chapter, I can see that I put a lot of effort into it. At least I didn't travel through time. Come on💪

There are very few articles that specialize in talisman cultivation. I hope the author can write something special Fu cultivation is not just about making talismans, but the kind of talisman that is used to upgrade. The only one I have read seems to be about the Xu family. The author seems to be a civil servant working in the court, right? It's a pity that the second male clan leader finally got the Talisman Golden Elixir and cut it off 😭😭 This system is so well written.

Another surname is Lu, and another five spiritual roots! Excuse me!

Is there multiple female protagonists🤓

Fuck, you made an agreement with that author, one uses the water method to live forever, and the other uses the talisman method 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

To be honest, author, you are going downhill. How well you write about cultivating immortals in the desert. At the end of the family cultivation stream: Xuanjian, Zhudao, and Desert, your beast-controlling family is still OK, so forget about Qinglian. This book really doesn't look like what you wrote, it shouldn't

Both the formation and the talisman master need patterns and spiritual consciousness, right? They are called formation talisman 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

Shouldn't drawing talismans require proficiency in spells?

Those who are chasing you are all from the family cultivating immortals. Who cares if you become a lone ranger? You are still a useless spirit root 🥵

I've already said, don't use punctuation marks in book titles,,, don't use first person

It feels like you can write the follow-up to Desert Family. Bringing in some surnames from the desert. I feel like there will be a lot of people who like it. Even both of your families can be part of this book now. This is your advantage, and you have to learn to use it. There are too few family writers who can write a complete book with millions of words. If you don't take advantage of your strengths, you're looking for trouble. If you write anything else, you can cut it into a small number. Because your account is already bound to your family. For readers who want to read about family cultivation, you are an important part of it.