Zhutian Chat Group: the Future of My Group Members Is Promising

It's really good-looking, but it's a pity that the update has been discontinued. Alas, I still want to watch Xiao Yan's three-year appointment. The guarantee is that a fighting saint will go to the appointment 😄😄

Come back soon, the author. Even if you don't lack a little bit of money for writing, such good results will definitely make you famous. After you become popular, it will be so fun to show off to the people around you, just like the moon god who wrote those things in the Ming Dynasty. You will gain both fame and fortune. No one knows about it. No one knows about it. How cool it is to be mentioned by others! Come back soon. With such good grades and such a good book, you must keep writing. I say important things three times: Come back! Return! Return!

Why do you feel like the next few updated episodes will focus on the word water?

Is this plot a little too steady? There are no explosive points, no big events, not enough ups and downs and exciting.

This update is too unstable.

It's up to you, the author

There are too few updates, baby

Why do you feel a bit watery?

Let me talk about the first point first. When the protagonist was practicing his worldly skills, I felt something was wrong. First, I don't know if there is any other world with such a high online level. And you actually know the upper limit of other worlds and can practice selectively. There is absolutely no need to stick to that technique, and there are restrictions later on. The technique you created yourself is completely incomparable to the perfection of swallowing eternal life. So if you don't reach a certain height, it's absolutely fine to create new techniques. You have the time to make that song in the second protagonist's native world. If not, can you go to other worlds to make resources? Primitive accumulation can be completed completely on the world line of knowing other worlds. You see, you have been working in the world for a long time before you are just getting started, so you might as well go straight to practicing the Heaven Covering Technique. Just hang out with the protagonist, and then go to other worlds to get some resources if you have some foresight. Why don't you just take off? The third point is to receive the author's writing method. There is no shortage of skills in the Zhutian chat group, and there are Ye Fan's resources in the early stage. As a result, the main character is obsessed with restricting the skills. The author should plan the outline carefully. Otherwise, I feel like this book won't be popular for long.

I hope the author will not write about death in a sea of ​​fire, death in a sea of ​​fire, and death in a sea of ​​fire. It's better not to have anime characters

Change the territory of Xuan Kingdom. It has more than 160 billion square kilometers and a population of 20 billion. You are going to fly to the sky. Moreover, your population density is written according to a modern city. Isn't this nonsense? A small town has a population of 80,000. Canada is not so arrogant. Canada covers an area of ​​about 10 million square kilometers and has a population of tens of millions, all of which are sparsely populated. Large areas of no man's land. Large pristine areas. Xuan Kingdom has a population of over one million people in 10 million square kilometers, and your small town has a population of 80,000. Together, a city covers an area of ​​10 million square kilometers. The population gathering area is only a few thousand square kilometers, and the rest is virgin forest? It would be appropriate to change the territory of Xuan Kingdom to 1.6 Billion square kilometers. Although the population density is not high, it is not that outrageous.

The group members were practicing hard there and trying to find ways to improve themselves. The protagonist just copied the songs and sold them for 50,000 yuan, and even asked the group members to sell them together. Are we here to see this? If I want to read this type of article, I won't look for entertainment articles, but will come to you?

To put it bluntly, it's all heaven. The world of your protagonist is just an egg, and it's not the mature world of other works. What's the point of suppressing your own qigong and world view all the way when you create a ball? Still selling songs? ? ? Then write several songs. At the same time, Ye Fan and Fang Han began to study the Nine Secrets and Five Emperors' magical powers. Are you selling songs? ? ? All in all, all in all, I can't feel the meaning of the existence of the protagonist's world at all, and the things written are all boring things The resources are provided by others, and the system is based on the magical powers of the Five Emperors and Great Demons The system you have set up in this world is very stressful. If you cannot bring out the top things, they are definitely not as good as those of the Five Emperors and Great Demons. You are talking about Qigong. Does it make sense? The original is a complete mess, it's really better to go to one world after another to live out the plot In the early stage, everyone has to choose one of the five emperors, what about later? What is the significance of Luo Feng and Xiao Yan's existence? They already grow in the early stages, so what's the point of not letting them grow quickly? In the early stage, Ye Fan was responsible for the main combat power and resources, and Fang Han relied on his skills Originally, these two values ​​​​were higher than the two in the early stage. Ye Fan drove the Dacheng Holy Body Mecha, and you, Xiao Yan, can't take off with fighting spirit into wings Just jump and read, just look at Ye Fan and part of Fang Sai, the rest has no meaning at all Really, this book can be read as a fan of Zhe Tian and Yongsheng, the rest is shit.

I want to apply for a refund. I think all articles on Qidian. Com should be refunded.

If you don't want to write, then don't write. If this continues, everyone will be upset if they look at it.

I think the government should intervene. We have actually paid real money to watch the authors on these online writing platforms, and they are not paying for it for free, and they are constantly delaying and discontinuing updates. Tmd I'm the one paying. If I want to watch it, it depends on his mood.

My evaluation is not as good as these two books

I have never seen anyone so speechless. It was said to be a chat group for all heavens, but basically everyone stayed in Zhetian. The main world is boring as hell. The other group members were extremely stressed. Then except for the first wave of recruitment, no new people came, and it was said to be a chat group for the heavens. Those who didn't know better thought it was a Zhetian fan who could occasionally travel through several worlds. And I don't do anything by traveling to the past. I don't even know what the use is.

Dou Qi and Devouring can speed up the progress. It is meaningful to keep pressing. Dou Qi Continent can be pushed flatly with the mecha. Ye Fan drives the Dacheng Holy Body Mecha and slaps Dou Qi Continent . In the early stage, Luo Feng's promotion was already fast. As a result, you opened so many tricks and gave so many resources and you are still playing soy sauce. Luo Feng's timeline is the longest. Later, he will be in seclusion for decades or hundreds of years. In the later stage, it will be tens of thousands or millions of years. Even if Ye Fan has cleared the level in a few hundred years, there will basically be water behind him Fang Han is shorter and it doesn't matter if you press it, but if you press the other two separately, it will be unbalanced.

It's a good book~ It's just that the main character has top-notch Qigong resources. The main character practices the "qigong" of his own world. It's not that it's not good. The writing style makes it look like the main character's behavior is stupid. He throws watermelons and picks up sesame seeds. 😂

Just like the title of the book, the plot of the group members can be expected in the future, and the plot of the group leader is the same as the defense. There is another point: the author likes to push the realm, and it is extremely unreasonable. Most book friends have reacted to this problem. The author just won't change it. Xiao Yan has improved the three small realms of the Dou Shi after eating the fairy phoenix meat in the Enlightenment Tea. It's really funny.

In the latest chapter, the Prince of the Immortal Heaven made Chicken Wings Stewed Medicine King. In a place like Dou Qi Continent where people can upgrade in small steps if their energy reaches the standard, Xiao Yan actually only advanced to three small steps. Even if you ask him to go from Dou Master 2-star to Dou Master 9-star, that's the same thing. Xiao Yan only refined a Qinglian Earth Core Fire, and he fucked it directly from the Dou Master's head. The Dou Master is at the end, and what he is practicing now must be better than Fen Jue to absorb the original energy. Don't suddenly have another one. Because he has not practiced Fen Jue, the improvement of Refining Qinglian's Heart Fire is not very high. If you really do this, you will be too hard to suppress Xiao Yan's combat power. After all, Dou Qi Continent basically only has If you have talent, just use energy to pile it up. Souls can directly use energy to pile it up. Logically speaking, this kind of world should be the fastest place to increase combat power. The author is afraid that Xiao Yan's combat power is too high and he will not miss the plot. Xiao Yan should have as much as possible except for the inheritance of Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. The rest is just a matter of chance. When it comes to the situation, what Xiao Yan needs most is the original energy of the strange fire. The Dou Qi Continent is so big. If you want to say that the top 10 strange fires are basically only one, there will basically be many after the top 10. If it doesn't work, just wait until Dou Zun runs around the world along the magma. Oops, I can't figure out why Xiao Yan's combat power should be suppressed.

To suppress the level is to suppress the level, but what do you mean by suppressing the level and writing your original plot without adding new people? I've been completely tired of looking at it recently, and there's no ups and downs at all. If you can't do it, just recruit new people or push the plot. Get the magic medicine here and there to beat the rhythm and word count. The key is to give everyone a bunch of magic medicine to take, but I am afraid that the upgrade will be too fast, so it took Jinren Dou Shi a long time to upgrade to two stars. It made me laugh.

I have already written a chat article, and I still want to create a main world. I really have nothing to do when I am full. If I have the ability to directly write a fantasy book and cultivate immortality, it has no future than this fanfic. I really have no self-awareness.

I repeat the same sentence over and over again, "The water breaks out into a new world," and the plot of the main world is even more awkward. It is not well written in the first place, and it drags on.

The most uncomfortable thing is the protagonist. I don't know whether the author forced it or not. In the group, he is just a machine to answer questions. He cannot reach the upper limit of his own world. If he does not practice the technique that can cover the sky and swallow the high limit, he must use the whole qigong? Then, practicing for a long time consumes a lot of resources, and the result is not as powerful as others' first realm. Who are you to say that you are disgusted by writing such a protagonist? A simple metaphor is, if you have 100 million, you can put it in the bank and earn 5 million a year in interest, and then you can just sit back and do nothing! As a result, you have to work hard to start a business, and then find that you have earned half a million in a year! Do you think this is smart?

It's so boring. Almost all the protagonists in more than 200 pictures are still wandering around in the early stage. The pressure of the battle is too serious. Normally, with so many resources, Luo Feng is at least astral level, and Xiao Yan should be around the Dou Huang. In the end, one is still the God of War, and the other is the Dou King. With so many resources, give it to a dog, and then teach him to practice. , He should have surpassed them 😅, but the author pressed hard, the pressure was too strong, and he didn't care about it at the beginning. There are more than 200 pictures, and he is still pressing, and I can't stand it anymore. It was quite interesting at the beginning, but now I am completely tired of aesthetics. I will keep it for now. I will not subscribe anymore. I will give it up after a month. If I still do it, I will give up.

After reading hundreds of chapters, I found out it was a eunuch

I was lucky enough to find a similar book with a similar style and good writing. The most important thing is that there is no eunuch, so I successfully replaced it.

Good looking, a book of fairy grass. It feels a bit like chasing a system-famous protagonist in the past, but unfortunately that book changed later on. Later, the witch was inexplicably made into a heroine. Reading a novel requires feeding a mouthful of dog food, but it is still the kind of person who doesn't care about his own safety and interests, and gives the most precious things to women. It completely conflicts with the previous settings. Speechless! Can an author not have a female protagonist? I really want to read a well-written novel without a female protagonist in a chat group, but I don't want to spend money to read those sweet and boring novels.