I Am the Great Emperor, and I Will End the Martial World's Turmoil!

After reading it, what was said in the comment section is correct. This author is really illiterate. Almost every chapter is full of pity and incompetence. He wants to do things but dare not get ahead. There is nothing wrong with the plot, but brother, can't you please stop writing these descriptors? I don't want to say this if you write less descriptors.

When writing novels, you don't have to be a literary youth. If the character design of the protagonist and the meaning expressed throughout the novel are translated into modern times, it would be like the protagonist seeing that the unrelated people around him are not having a good life, and still wanting to help others when he is like a bird, but finding out that he cannot help because These silences were hit, and then a greater ambition emerged: I want to work hard to make strangers live a better life. As a result, the world is dark and unfair, so overthrow the sun and moon and replace the sky with a new one. Let me make the decision for the public. It is very powerful, but it is just like a psychosis. Egoism is prevalent nowadays. Everyone only cares about their own life and no one cares about the life and death of others. Your book is out of place. It's okay for fooling children, but it's just a piece of cake for adults. If the author wants to achieve something, he should think about it carefully.

Not why? Why do you need to bring a younger sister with you when writing a novel? I feel really disgusted. When I see my sister, I don't want to see it for some reason

Here we go, brother. Here is a report from fellow practitioner Yin Yang

I was really frustrated before. I wanted to do something myself, but I didn't dare to speak out. What's the difference between being incompetent and furious?

This is really written from the embryo.

Finally, there was someone who wanted to be emperor who had the strength to fight.

The original title of the book (time travel, the father is a rebel leader) was because the editor said it had no explosive points and was too ordinary! Now it has been changed to "I am the Great Emperor, Ending the Troubled Martial Arts" Finally, I would like to ask my book friends, is the pace of these first few chapters too slow, and are you not interested in reading anymore?