Folk Custom Begins with Carrying the Coffin

The story is actually pretty good, but the protagonist had a family before traveling through time, and just wanted to go home. This is not a bad point. It is not impossible to set up such a setting without a heroine, but he is also having an affair with a girl from another world, which is more or less at the same time. That's it. Another person who looks exactly like his ex-wife appears...

The protagonist gave me a very strange feeling, as if he wanted to die but did not commit suicide. He was always immersed in the imagined good past (the past in the protagonist's mouth was so beautiful, but there are always moments in life when people are tired and destroyed, but the protagonist kicked out all the bad things and only focused on the good), and did not actively face the present. When I met Dr. Zhou, I didn't ask about how to become a spiritual person or about Horcruxes. I didn't ask about how to deal with my mother-in-law, how to escape or leave a backup. However, he pretended to be actively escaping and was formalistic at critical moments. He seemed to have worked hard. Looking at the record of 0-5, I felt like he was just dealing with an errand.

After reading a few chapters, the story is very good and has a strange feeling. It can be seen that the author has the skills to write stories. Although the paragraphs are relatively large, they read smoothly without too much sluggishness. This is better than many authors. I predict that this book will have good results. I will read it later when I have time. I will definitely stick to it.

Please interact and support me, I will try my best to write this work!

I catch up to the latest version in one go. The more I read this book, the more interesting it becomes. The story is very interesting. It is not a fantasy novel and there is no system, but the story is very well conceived and worth following!

It's pretty good, but I don't really like the protagonist's character. I suggest reducing some of the protagonist's psychological activities.

Many people who wrote about folklore only half wrote it, and then the people disappeared. Did the half of the people who wrote about it run away, or did the people who wrote about half of it disappear? Don't know anymore

Seeing that the protagonist is about to take off after chapter 50, and his personality begins to change, I feel that I am starting to feel good!

It looks good, I must keep writing! !

This book should be a hit. Genre new story good

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

Seeing that the pocket watch automatically turns on the setting to devour all living creatures around it, the whole book is over.