Under One Person: I, the Ming Dynasty Zombie King, Was Discovered

You have exhausted other people's expectations. I have read more than 40 pictures, and you have written more than 60 now Your foreshadowing is too long, your Zombie King is still half-human, and I can't stand your appearance It's not your writing that has a problem, it's the paragraphs and plots you set up Your foreshadowing is a continuation of the past. For the novel, 1/3 of the opening has failed Your foreshadowing is too long

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As of Chapter 80, according to the author's writing speed, it will be over after more than 200 chapters. If you write any more, you may become overwhelmed. The writing of the plot has been progressing very quickly recently, and the protagonist is too powerful, mainly because there is not a strong sense of immersion. At the beginning, it can be said that it was accidentally dug up by Sun Dianying or other tomb robbers during the Republic of China. After beating the tomb robbers to death, and entering modern history, there will be a lot more writing than now. In the middle, it can be written according to me, Zhang Zhiwei, the arrogant Zhang. Looking at the way it is written now, it will probably become a behind-the-scenes drama. It will appear for three minutes, and then various juniors will be used to highlight the boss's awesomeness. Either there is some powerful enemy coming, or the old zombie sleeping somewhere has woken up, and there are enemies coming from outside, and they are fighting each other. Otherwise, if you don't have anything to write about, you will have to level up the map, and then it will become a novel about cultivating immortals. Of course, these are all speculations and possibilities.

The main character didn't appear until more than 60 chapters, so forget it. This is under one person. You, a fanfic, portray the Heavenly Master like a loser, with a gloomy face from time to time. It really disgusts me to death.

If the national archeology excavates the protagonist's tomb What will happen if the protagonist breaks through the defense? Coming to Zombie China?

One glance at the introduction makes you look venomous. His identity as the ninth son of the emperor is not recorded in the history books, but in the eyes of the old immortal, he is a national hero who expelled barbarians. He is a famous prince, but he has not been included in the history books. What did you write? Do you think history books are things that can be written and revised casually?

Handsome boy, I hope the protagonist can always appear, so that he won't be seen again later, and the protagonist must be invincible and bleed like a river.

You've gone a bit too far in highlighting the protagonist. He looks like a half-immortal at the moment! Don't be ridiculous if you can't even defeat the old man from Longhu Mountain.

Chapter 68 The protagonist comes out. The good-looking ones are called fairy grass, the full grain and grass are called porridge, and the unsightly ones are called Shi. You are different. Shili is filled with water, creating a new level of Xi Tzu. It is a proper Xi Tzu. I can recommend this book on the platform. I can only say that everyone nowadays has really strong taste. At the same time, I have to reflect on myself, why am I? How can I be so virtuous? She didn't sleep until midnight and was force-fed by the platform.

It's the same old routine. I won't start writing until a hot topic hits the shelves. Run quickly

You can tell at a glance that he is a eunuch dog who just catches a bunch of money and runs away. Those who collect money will give you a way. If you have money, let's make money together.

What the hell introduction. Return the grassroots Zhang Zhiwei. It was all over early in the morning. Really outrageous.

I thought the protagonist was a time traveler, but turned out to be an aborigine

In fact, it doesn't matter how much you call him shit now. At this point, he no longer needs those of us who criticize him. There are novice readers enough for him to cut leeks.

The main character only came out after more than 40 chapters. I think it's too boring to sign a contract in general. Is everyone reading books so strong in drug resistance now?

You just can't hit the pill that bites you right, right? You can beat four of the five alchemy addicts into alchemy addicts

Tianshidu is both a heritage and a lock. Can't defeat the Heavenly Master after six hundred years of practice? Did you fix the dog?

Chapter 60: The protagonist hasn't come out yet. The author clearly wants to put it on the shelves and let the protagonist come out and make a profit and then change the number.

It's 40 pictures and the main character hasn't left the factory yet.

This book is a bad classic. Except for the subject matter, everything else is a mess.

Gou Shi relies on this book to praise it

This novel has almost the same formula as that notebook. The protagonist in chapter 50 is still in the coffin and can be abandoned.

After reading it, the protagonist will not appear without Chapter 200!

It feels a bit like another book, that is, the protagonist is illusory and is promoted through the dialogue and plot of some other supporting characters. The other one is about God's father and his father. I have written more than 200 chapters in that book. His father has not come out yet. I feel that this one is similar to that one. For this type of novel, you can only read the first few dozen chapters and quit after 50 chapters before the protagonist comes out.

The writing is okay, but the foreshadowing is a bit long, and it's not as bad as the comment section says, but if you go on to write it down and it's not very good, it will be over.

What are you doing grinding and chirping? I'm convinced. I originally wanted to watch it, but I'd better forget it now.

Not correcting typos will really affect your reading experience

The person with natural abilities is known as Mr. Lu, the ancestor of the Lu family!

After reading Chapter 21, I felt it was quite interesting. I hope it won't go too far, do things that don't suit the character, and lose all the B slots.

You have so many typos that it makes people laugh.