Mortal, Zhang Tie Returned from the World of Tian Long Ba Bu

I haven't read it yet, but it's such a harem, and all the articles are included, except for Nangong Wan. Don't you think it's a little strange?

Obviously you go first with Han Li, but in the end you have Han Li prepared for you later. If you surpass you, the protagonist is a loser.

Maybe it's the indigenous perspective, but I feel stupid for some reason. Moreover, the three spiritual roots are cultivated so quickly, and no one suspects it. Most of the plot is passed by in a hurry, and it feels like swallowing a lot.

When writing fan fiction from an indigenous perspective, there is a sense of being like a bird. Who doesn't read fan fiction to gain foresight? If I don't know the plot, I might as well read the original novel.

I originally saw that it was a harem and added it to the bookshelf, but when I saw the comments saying that it had an indigenous protagonist, that was too much to look at, so I just removed it.

Mortal fandom, are indigenous protagonists popular now? That's a piece of shit fandom

What do you think about writing a fanfic about an indigenous protagonist?

I suddenly awakened a new ability, that is, after reading the introduction of this novel and glancing at the table of contents, I already roughly understood the plot. Hey, you say it is magical or not.

How can a mortal fan post like this, a robot?

You pick up a bun in the cesspool, wash it and give it to me. Laoba won't be grateful to you. Wash the buns. She will only think that the buns are not authentic enough.

Originally, I wanted to train Han Li, but later I learned that Han Li had a great opportunity and wanted to kill Han Li to seize the opportunity. But when I got the opportunity, I didn't kill him! Either write a story of brotherhood, or simply kill Han Li. You are so changeable that I am speechless.

I thought the time-travelers turned out to be natives who were reborn I didn't know anything about mortal dramas.

I really don't understand why those who write about mortals like to collect harems, and what kind of rubbish they collect. The three girls of the Mo family will not talk about it. Because mortals, the skin cannot be as clean as the immortals who often wash their marrow and cut their bones. It is more or less dirty. Immortal cultivators can see the dirt in the pores of mortals because of their strong spiritual consciousness. The sweat stains are disgusting, so they don't get along with mortals Then secondly, people like Yan Ying, Chen Qiaoqian, and Zhong Weiniang have the most alchemy backgrounds, and their own potential is second-rate. Beauty is not ranked high in the country of Yue. At best, it is just the level of a school belle The next level up is either Yan Ruyan, whose background is to form pills, and has its own Tianling roots, or Han Yunzhi, who has a Nascent Soul background and has the potential to only form pills. At best, they are just ordinary, white and beautiful So when marrying a harem, you have to be carefully selected. At most 5 are enough. For example, 1. Xin Ruyin, who is a Nascent Soul or even God-forming level inheritance and is a formation genius, is equivalent to a country's top female academician 2. She is the most beautiful woman in the Chaotic Star Sea, a magic cultivator equivalent to a national beauty pageant champion 3. Ling Yuling, the princess of Xing Palace, has the inheritance of the God-forming level sect, and her own potential can reach the level of Yuan Ying or even the God-forming level, which is equivalent to the princess or even the queen of a large country 4. The tenth-level demon cultivator Ice Phoenix at the God-forming level can help you sneak into the spirit world and is also a top beauty. Equivalent to an existence that can sit on an equal footing with Wuchang 5 Nangong Wan, the reincarnation of the True Immortal Power, the wife of Samsara Dao Ancestor, equivalent to the queen of the top fallen civilization of the Wuxian Northern Coronation Great Wall, who wandered to the earth 😅

I don't really like Zhang Tie's character. Regardless of whether he is a good person to the protagonist or not, as long as there is an opportunity, he will try his best to get it. This is too dark and depressing.

I find people like you are really weird. You clearly want to keep one or two of the stallion stories, which offends both the whole party and the original wife party. Let me see how you write it.

Demi-gods? What good can come from such a low-level world? How to feed back to mortals? Are you wearing it backwards?

As a die-hard fan who has read the original work of Mortal more than ten times, I recommend to all Taoist friends "Mortal Begins to Seize the Body by Mo Juren", "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality Begins from a Casual Cultivator", "I Cultivation of Immortality Scientifically in Mortal", "Mortal Fights Monsters and Upgrades I Want to Live Immortality" and "I am in Mortal Work "Those Years of Demons" "Mortal I traveled a little early" "Mortal Immortality" "Mortal Immortality in Mortal Immortality" "Mortal I am Li Tianzun" "Mortal I am Heavenly Spiritual Root" "Mortal Demonic Flames Fill the Sky" "Big Brother in the Mortal World"