I Raised Zerg

Which old books are you writing based on? If you don't learn from the good ones, but the optics are bad, use your brain more. Don't write according to the template without changing it. If others can become successful, they are resting on their laurels. Do you have it?

This kind of article needs to be written in a more atmospheric way, and more people will read it.

The beginning of college is the most troublesome setting. Everyone has different abilities. What should the teacher teach?

That Feng Hui is too cheap, the plot is old-fashioned, and the main world plot is not interesting enough

That SB Feng Hui is too cheap, the plot is old-fashioned, the main world is not grand enough, and there are few conflicts.

It's for the Zerg, it's the overworld's bullshit all day long.

The subject matter is novel, but it's a pity that it's about a high school competition in another world.

It was pretty good after reading Chapter 7. Why are there so few people?

The school plot is annoying, the talent is useless, and it's really not popular.

The road is long and long, I will search up and down, and encourage each other😁

I feel like the plot in the main world is not good to watch. Do you have any thoughts? Especially the battle process in the school.

The beginning of anti-inflammatory, Tang San's background and academy life, mixed with various routines from a few years ago!

There are too many typos, which greatly affects the reading experience.