Reborn in 2013: The Years Flow Like Water

Playing alone is exhausting! The restlessness of the past is like a sharp blade, constantly pricking you! Come on! It's better than playing video games. First, I'll aim for perfect attendance. On days without reading, Cheer yourself up!

I came from a novel about a warm and caring young man. The gradual growth of the protagonist in that book was quite enjoyable, and the handling of family relationships and relatives was better than most trashy urban novels about rich people. There were a few minor flaws, but they didn't detract from the overall experience. Also, it's good that the protagonist has children.

To be fair, you've improved. The main thing is that the way you show off and slap people in the face is very smooth, with constant little climaxes. The downside is the women; the first few chapters are all about gold diggers, which is very off-putting.

The last few chapters have been poorly written. Especially the gambling scene—it's practically feeding the readers shit. Don't you know many readers hate gambling?

If you don't want to write, just mail it. Is it really worth it to take two days to finish one?

It's been over twenty days and I've only managed nine chapters? This is really going to keep readers coming back!

Your update speed is quite impressive; after a month of waiting, you haven't even released more than 30 images.

He's writing novels but still wallowing in the mud.

People read rebirth novels to reminisce about past regrets, but having a system is just awkward; they might as well just give the character "invincible" instead.

The author's problem is that they're too lazy, like an old-fashioned office worker who just coasts through the days with a newspaper and a cup of tea, occasionally taking leave or skipping work. Even when it's published, they only manage to write about 4,000 words. Look at other authors, which one hasn't been updating like crazy? How can you expect to achieve anything like this, and how can readers possibly support you?