The Warmhearted Everyday Guy

It's best if Xia doesn't reappear as a character, or at least that he was just a casual sex partner from the start. Otherwise, after eavesdropping for so long, doesn't it feel awkward? This setup…

It's fine to keep Xia Qinghan as a mistress; she's not my official girlfriend, so being a lover is perfectly acceptable. These days, who isn't someone's ex-girlfriend or ex-boyfriend? Although the first few chapters were a bit off-putting, as long as the character is developed properly, readers will quickly accept it. Being a lover is enough.

First, the updates are too slow. Secondly, it's disjointed and haphazard, and not appealing at all. Third, you are too easily swayed. As soon as someone complains, you immediately change your ways. Some people inexplicably go offline. Look at the other girls you wrote about, what are their special characteristics? So I don't have any expectations right now. I'll check back when there are updates, but don't even think about voting. Go vote for those people who told you how to write it.

How twisted is this protagonist? Xia Du was being eavesdropped on! Doesn't he find it uncomfortable to be together? At least any normal man wouldn't accept that. Being a mistress is fine, but being a wife just shows how mentally disturbed he is.

A family must be established, otherwise the warm man won't be warm enough.

As a major shareholder of Huasheng Group, holding 10% of its shares, you could easily take a nominal position in such a large company, earn tens of thousands of yuan a month without having to do any work! It's like carrying a mountain of gold while begging for food.

Brother, when your family was poor, your uncle didn't care. Don't tell me he was easily swayed or anything like that. Now that you're rich, you're fawning over him. What's the point? You only got this writing from a worthless uncle. Speechless.

The more he writes, the more pretentious and pretentious he becomes. He either starts with a harem or a single female lead, and now he has this pedantic, stilted intellectual vibe that's disgusting.

Brother, your writing has really gone awry towards the end. It's all about this sister and that sister, and every little thing is some trivial matter. And what's with all the money you're spending on luxury goods for your cousins? I just don't understand. They're your own sisters, they're born of the same mother, so buying them this and that is one thing, but what the hell?

You deserve to feel guilty. The protagonist has the mentality of a loser. Even if he has money, he will still be the same. He is procrastinating and has no ambition. Is this what leisure is?