A Family Tradition of Being Stabbed and Then Turning into a Devil Girl

^0^, When I saw the title of the book, my mind was filled with the beast of 666, and I was embarrassed. ~

It can be seen that this is a new book written by a newcomer, and the writing style is quite young.

No, bro, your genre is really unpopular. Originally, Nero and Devil May Cry were pretty good, but FGO is making a Wano. Mygo adaptation and Problem Children are not popular at all. Bro, when will I see the severed Nero in DmC and kick me?

FGO fandoms are really worthless. They are originally a mixed bag of works. Unless the fanfics about FGO have a very large fan base, every one of them will be killed instantly. If you want to write about Type Moon, you can write about cup wars, clock towers or sky realms, or original stories about the second world or the same world view. You have to write FGO (￣ω￣;), which is the least effective. And this happens in all kinds of non-original infinite novels. It is obvious that you will fall when you touch it, and you have to take turns. Is FGO a succubus game? The Xingyue people I know don't like FGO fandom very much, because this work itself has a lot of fandom content. Although it is an official fanfic, it contains fans of various Xingyue's works, and then they have to write a fanfic based on such fandom elements. It's not very understandable.

It's too weird to write about Nero becoming a mother-in-law. I might as well write it as Uncle Ding's daughter.

Come on! In fact, the previous Fgo was okay. I had played it before to understand the world view and it was acceptable. But the current fictional Wano is a bit weird. Although MyGO is so popular that people outside the industry have heard of it, it is really not very familiar to me (I haven't watched this one, so I really only know a few words about it, and I don't even know the protagonist). Sometimes I feel a little confused when I look at the names, and I don't know the relationship between the female characters in it. And after all, this is the world of Devil May Cry. As of now, I actually want to see the appearance of the blue man, the protagonist's father, and the interaction between the protagonist's uncle and the protagonist. I want to see more scenes of "brothers, friends, brothers, respect" and "father is kind and son is filial".

Don't write all the books about type moon. They are all poorly written. I'm tired of them a long time ago.

There must have been too much writing on Lu Mingfei in the Dragon Clan section, especially in the graduation confession. The original novel didn't use as much space here as the author did. I found that in many novels, whenever it comes to the Dragon Clan, they keep writing about Lu Mingfei.

You can write four or five battles to retain people better than this 😥

The new dungeon turns out to be a problem child. I feel like the protagonist's strength is completely inadequate in this dungeon.

The writing is good, but I don't know what the world after the problem children is. I suggest writing about popular worlds. To be honest, I was attracted by the Dragon Clan. I saw it several times before recommended it but didn't read it. I just started reading it recently after I discovered the Dragon Clan chapter. To be honest, it's not amazing, but I can read it when I'm short of books. At least the text is The pen is there, there are no obvious bugs, and the characters are very likable. However, the Devil May Cry copy at the beginning is not very attractive, because I have never played Devil May Cry or read the fanfic. To be honest, the beginning is almost the same as the original to me, but the writing is also good. The subsequent chapters of Type Moon and Problem Child can be selected very well, and the subsequent ones The world also recommends choosing similar worlds, such as Demon High School, Blood Devouring Attack and so on. I really like this kind of world. You can also go back to Xingyue. I just wrote a million words in this book. It seems that your grades are not ideal. It is best not to use eunuchs because they are too bad characters, because many people think the books are good. , I will read the author's previous books, and if I see it is Eunuch, I will probably start to read books. Many authors are like this, so they don't want to be Eunuch, and they have to get at least close to a million words, so that this account can at least make a comeback, and I think the author is still capable, I hope you can hold on, come on!

FGO is a good world, but the early foreshadowing is a bit too boring, and this Lostbelt does feel a bit boring. If it were Lionheart or World of Warcraft, the popularity would probably be much higher. After all, it is fun and cool. Come on, author, I am looking forward to the next world

Will this book be finished in about one million words? I originally thought that the protagonist would travel through several more worlds to collect major crimes, but now it seems that it will be finished in a short time.

The Devil May Cry chapter was well written, but I must have read a lot of the FGO chapter, right? It's not that you can't write FGO. The main reason is that the heroic spirits you write are not very popular, so most people are not interested, including me. In addition, the two worldviews really don't match. Looking forward to your new chapter, write well

The FGO chapter is actually quite good. I, a person who has never played FGO, can easily read it. The heroic spirits are all introduced so that people will not be confused as to who they are, and the summoned heroic spirits are very consistent with their identities. It is not a lot of confusing settings, and each has its own role. The final ending is acceptable, the saint saves the town, the riddle of the Sphinx, the captain and the devil make a wish. The author's puzzles are both well-thought-out and interesting, and the final devil's puzzle is also laid out from the beginning and carried through the entire chapter.

Jumped into Dragon Clan. The FGO chapter was pretty good. The problem children liked it quite a lot, but the main character's strength was indeed a bit low.

Compared with the plot of Mygo, I am more looking forward to the scene where the protagonist and Virgil are a loving father and a filial son.

FGO is a fan minefield. I'm afraid the author doesn't know and warns me.

Let's look at more famous stand-alone games.

It's a new book for a newbie. It actually looks pretty good. I didn't finish the FGO chapter, but both Devil May Cry and MyGO chapters are fine.

Dante in dmc is a bit too simple and has the look of a freshly graduated college student. It once made me think that the second-rate image at the beginning was purely for a concave character design.

What? Isn't the Yan Mo Dao a golden cudgel? ()

There are so few people reading this. Did the author write the poem he read? If not, can you mark the source more?

Not bad, honorable, follow-up reading, extra updates, monthly pass

It's coming, it's coming, I've guessed that there must be a role for beasties when I saw dystopia before 😍

Male to female. Come on. . . . .